MG FF ZKDK: Discontinued - Page 8

Originally posted by: vrishtigoel

I jusst read the prologue .. After reading the first part.. Now i m kinda understanding things

But m sad that they are gonna die at then end of it :( :( .. I mean ,. I am sure m really gonna enjoy seeing them fall in love.. She is young and shy type and he looks so strict and serious type.. Its gonna b really interesting :) ,, but thinking that its gonna hav a sad ending is making me sad

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

Thanks for pm. Charater sketch is interesting. First meeting of maaneet is cute. So geet resembles with rythm n thats why arjun is so protective for her. Does he want to keep her away from maan. He behave like father figure for geet.Even after so many years maan did not forget rythm n confrontation with geet only opens his deep wounds.

Eager to read next part. Update soon.

Originally posted by: jashu08

Nice update.. Rhythm died.. But Maan and geet gonna die also?? .did . Rhythm and geet wil look alike?
Thanks for the pm buddy

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Amazing start.
So brij is scared as geet resembles rythm and he is true as she in her first meet with maan refreshed his past.
Poor maan he has so much pain burried in his heart he was wenting it out bar 😔 ye kya baat hui yaar dukhi ho to bar chale jao 😔

Ab ghar mein nhi pee skta naah bad impression or dadi chinta mein... kbhi kbhi dard itne hote hai ki kab naasoor ban jaaye pata nhi...

Chalo brij is there to handle him unaware that geet is the reason for his state.


I liked ur style of giving title to the update 😊

Originally posted by: nakh5683

Lovely update khurana and handa two different ppl and personality where khurana mansion filled with darkness ppl hardly talk to each other whereas handa mansion filled with light darji worries any geet it's her first day of college and she was ragged her duppatta on tree stuck geet trying to get it but couldn't maan helped her but her words remind him of his lost love he scold her but geet became normal maan drunk and remember geets words brij seeing him past out worried for his friend he remembers the first day of college how they were late coz of rythm maan love who dressed just for him but duppatta flying away she said exactly what geet said brij was feeling sad seeing maan shattered self hoping that he becomes well

Originally posted by: Nefret19

Congratulations on the new story:):):) Thank you so much for adding me as a reader:):):) the prologue is really fabulously written. How Dev is living in regret of his grave mistake that he had done to Maaneet...and Maaneet's symbols of love their children are consoling their chachuas he tells them how bad a person he was yet Maaneet forgave him & took a promise from him that he will bring up their symbol of love as they would have...it sadden me to know that Maaneet are not alive...but now we will relive their eternal love story as Dev tells the story to Garv & Madhura. A beautiful start dearie & beautifully written. Super excited to read:):):)