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Lovely update khurana and handa two different ppl and personality where khurana mansion filled with darkness ppl hardly talk to each other whereas handa mansion filled with light darji worries any geet it's her first day of college and she was ragged her duppatta on tree stuck geet trying to get it but couldn't maan helped her but her words remind him of his lost love he scold her but geet became normal maan drunk and remember geets words brij seeing him past out worried for his friend he remembers the first day of college how they were late coz of rythm maan love who dressed just for him but duppatta flying away she said exactly what geet said brij was feeling sad seeing maan shattered self hoping that he becomes well

Geet's words reminds Maan of Rythm and that's the reason he is so harsh with her. But Geet does not know that and feels bad. But she does not let that hold her back and enjoy her first day. Says a lot about her nature.

Congratulations on the new story:):):) Thank you so much for adding me as a reader:):):) the prologue is really fabulously written. How Dev is living in regret of his grave mistake that he had done to Maaneet...and Maaneet's symbols of love their children are consoling their chachuas he tells them how bad a person he was yet Maaneet forgave him & took a promise from him that he will bring up their symbol of love as they would have...it sadden me to know that Maaneet are not alive...but now we will relive their eternal love story as Dev tells the story to Garv & Madhura. A beautiful start dearie & beautifully written. Super excited to read:):):)

Beautiful update dearie:):):) the introduction of the Khuranas & Handas were superb...liked the way theIr environments were contrasted as light & darkness...who is the man who was worried? Its probably about Geet...Geet who is the princess of her family. But who does she resemble that it's worrying him? What is the past & who is the she? What is the story? And what is he afraid of? As in the consequences of looking like the person who I guess is no longer surviving?

Everyone is protective over Geet that they want to be with her throughout her day in college. But Yash manages to dodge everyone as he understands that Geet is trying to be independent. But as soon as he drops her off she is being ragged. Oh god! I so do hate ragging! Hate that stupid Rohit who doesn't give me any good vibes at all. Thank god Maan saved her! As he didn't know that she was ragged he tells her offfir being careless in handling her dupatta...Geet feels hurt...but slowly she settles in to her college. But now the worry is Maan...he goes on a flashback as he Saya he saw her...probably referring to the same person that Geet's family was also thinking about...Brij is Maan's Best friend...and he brings the drunen Maan back safely...but both of them are rehashing the past in their minds...who is she?

The story is very intriguing & am super excited to read what happens next dearie:):):) All the best to you:):):)

Character sketch of Khuranas : loved the way each & every character is portrayed...Dev was brought up under the influence of his Mother who hated Maan...With Sameer & Anvesha loving Maan so much I guess that the wicked Stepmother would use Dev to destroy Maan...I am now wondering about Rythmn...who is she & how is she related to Geet? Super curious yaar:):):) Off I go to read about Handas now:):):)

Handas, Vashists & Maaneet's symbols of love: fabulous character sketches dearie! The whole relationship among the Handas, Rythmn & Sister plus Maaneet's children are very clearly & precisely portrayed! Fabulous dearie:):):) now we can see the connection between Khuranas & Handas...through Brij:):):) And later via Arjun falling for Anvesha. So Meera & Yash will add on to the family connection:):):) superbly connected & portrayed:):):) So its Brij who was worried about Geet resembling Rythmn...hmmm...on the one hand his princess & his best friend on the other.

Super excited to see how the story develops & goes dearie. All the best my dear!

Nice update

this was very nice update
loved itt soo much...
beautifully written whole part
thanks alot for pm sweets
looking forward to read more;
pls update next part soon...

just one word awesome... i loved it... so its geet first day for clg and arjun is really very possessive lol bechari geet teen teen bhai hain uske bodygaurd ki tarah... yash is somewhat better ... maan remembering rythm by geets words... feeling sad for maan yaar... when maan was repeating geets words i felt very sad for him... brij and maans bonding is very good.. loved it... hope maan ki sadness geet ke aane se door hojayegi ...uff maan is so rude... lol i think professors are like that only pehle din mein hi geet ko dara diya... ab pyaar hoga kaise... very interesting ... update soon.. waiting