MG FF ZKDK: Discontinued - Page 2

Originally posted by: Roopaamrutha

First of all congrats for the new story

I think this one is very emotional... prolouge mein hi geet aur maan ko maar diya... and dev what had he done?? lagtha hain vo bahut bada galthi kiya hain aur uska saza khud ko dhe raha hain bichara... aur garv and madhura love symbol of maan and geet... wow... acha naam hain yaar... garv is responsible person handling business of khuranas... garv hain maan ki tarah aur madhura like geet...as dev has defined them... and omg 18 years gap between maan and geet??? and dev i think he is repenting a lot .. omg its very emotional while he asks them to forgive him ... i felt like i am crying..and the way garv and madhura reacted is amazing... they forgave him very easily and why not even their parents wants that only.. sach kaha dev ne agar maan aur geet zinda hothi tho shayad usse proud hoga apne bachon par... coming to dev he is repenting a lot i think... he took care of garv and madhura even after getting hatred from all his family members... he even remained unmarried... he is repenting a lot.. its better to die rather than living in guilt. ... i think thats the most deadliest punishment... garv and madhura are asking dev to tell love story of their parents ...and the first poem is beautiful.. hatsoff to you ... usually your writings are different from others... thats what i like the most...

i donno what to say when you discussed this topic with me i wanted you to proceed because i liked this most... i am feeling very happy and contended and haan thanks for listening me...

jaldi update karlo mujhe wait karna jyada pasand nahin hain fir bhi mein wait karungi...

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

congrats on the new FF! thanks 4 da pm! intriguing prologue! well written! Maaneet r dead! Garv n Madhura r Maaneet's children! Dev guilty n asks 4 forgiveness n they do forgive him! They want Dev to tell them their parents love story! lovely poem! update soon