MG FF ZKDK: Discontinued - Page 3

Originally posted by: karamjeet

Congratulations on New story...
OMG. u killed our hero heroine in prologue...
now what this Dev did to them???
curious to know...
looking forward for 1st part...

Originally posted by: zynahsiddiqi956

first of all congrats for ur first story..👏👏

intresting prologue..waiting for commence of story...

Originally posted by: nakh5683

Congo on new story itna badaaa prologue so maaneet are dead and dev is regretting his deeds maaneet kids are like them exactly like their parents they wanted to know why Sameer hates him dev told that he was always bad to their parents even separate them but before dying maan gave his kids responsibility on dev now let's see how dev tells their story

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

now it is very difficult for me to read further because everytime whenever I will read its update I will be scared that Maan-Geet will die...why did you kill them in the prologue itself...

Dev is repenting, he is guilty, Garv and Madhura forgiven him I don't care...his greed has taken Maan-Geet life this is enough reason to hate him...

thanx for pm...

Originally posted by: varthyadi000

VERY NICE PROLOGUE AND NICE DEV IS TELLING ABOUT GEET AND MAAN AND HE HE TOLD THEM DUE TO HIM THEIR PARENTS DIED BUT THEY ARE THE CHILDREN OF MAAN AND GEET THEY FORGIVEN HIM .PLEASE START THE STORY FAST

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Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

hehehee... Why do I kill them Because I wanted them to be like that... in Prologue I wanted something different for you people... Please don't Leave I promise you will love it when your read it fully may be you find this death appropriate and feel Maan and Geet were completed their journey. Hope when you start reading and update by update may be u will sympathise with Dev...

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