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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2 -


" How could you do that ? ..we are together for almost six months..how could you cheat ? "

Geet looked at Pritam furiously ...she wants to beat him black and blue but still deep down in her heart she is hoping her boyfriend will say he didn't cheat ...all just mistake ...he was not kissing that Neha but that witch was forcing him ...but no he was just stand there quietly ...surprisingly she didn't see any guilt or shame on his face even after cheating on her ...


" you said you liked me then how could you..."


" yes I liked you ...I liked you a lot but you are not like what I thought you would be . " he cut her words in mid ..." You know I liked you at first sight I thought you are a beautiful cute girl but your nature uff you are too traditional too annoying for my choice ..."

Geet looked at him shocked how bluntly he talking bad about her ...


" how much could you talk ...thak thi nehi ho kya ? par mein thak jata tha ...pritam yeh Pritam woh urgh no one can stop your non stop blabbing ..do you know how much I tried to tolerate that ..." he made a annoying face as if remembering those days when she was talking and he was listening quietly ...there she thought he loves her talking ...

" not just it why do you have to know everything about me huh? you are my girlfriend not my guardian that I have to tell everything ... Pritam kaha ho ? Tum waha kyun gaye ? Don't drinks ...Don't smoke ahh I'm just fed up ..."


" I was doing those because I was always worried for you ...those things I did because I cared for you jerk ..." she gave a punch on his chest ..." you are an idiot "


" yes you are right I'm an idiot ...an idiot that got trapped with a girl like you . What did you say how could I do this after almost six months ...then just tell me what you just gave me in these months ...hell you never comfortable kissing me forget about sleeping ... I'm not some monk "


" Pinky was so right about you.. I should have never gotten in a relationship with you ...you disgust me I'm better off without you ...its break up ..." she wipe away her tears and was about to go but stop at his words ...


" Excuse me you are not breaking up but I'm ...Pritam is dumping you ...and by the way who are you thinking yourself ...you should be thankful that I was with you this long ...no man in his sense can tolerate you that much time ..."


saying he left leaving a hurt and angry Geet behind ...his last words keep ringing in her ear ' no man in his sense can tolerate you '


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" Here comes our class beauty " Jai said dreamily in exchange get a slap from Sasha ..." stop before Geet beat you to dead "

Jai at once looked down as he knows Sasha is right ... he still remember her beating when he had proposed her with ice cream but it backfired as he gave strawberry flavour which caused her to go to hospital as she is allergies to strawberry...


Geet sat quietly with Pinky giving dead looks to the couple who is sitting before them ...her ex jerk and Neha ...She was about to hit them with. a book but Pinky stop her at time ...


" What are you doing ? get a grip Geet . You said you got over him ..."


Geet took her hand back ... yes she told that but its not that easy ...more of all he insulted her ...even after one month of their break up his words keep hunting her ...is she that unbearable ? ...no she can't easily let go of this ex jerk ...


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She was returning home from college not really watching where she walking as she was busy on her phone just then a truck was coming before her ...she was too shocked to move ...but just then someone pulled her harshly causing them to fall on ground ...


she closed her eyes tightly ..." Geet Geet hey you OK ...open your eyes hey " he was about to slap her again when she mumbled slowly ...


" am I in heaven or hell ...I should be in heaven I was always a good child ...Mama I love you I'm sorry I eaten all cookies that you make ...I'm just so sad that I couldn't eat ice cream before I died ..." she start crying bitterly still not opening her eyes ...


Maan smile looking at her amusingly...' This mad girl will never change '

" hey get up you are in hell and now its time for your punishment..."


Instantly she opened her eyes " its cheating its can't be ... I'm... "


She stop looking at the person before him ...Maan her punching bag her one and only bully guy...


" hey you ok ..." her asked concerned as she stop talking..." do you hurt somewhere ?..."

she nodded her head ...

" where ? " he start checking her head to toe but she point towards his elbow where blood is coming out ...


" oh ..its nothing ..." lete call a taxi for you ...he called one but she held his hand and dragged him with her ...


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" don't worry its just a small cut " nurse told her seeing her worried face ...she nodded little still not convinced ...Maan held her hand saying he is fine


" you shouldn't have done that " she finally said what was bothering her ...because of her carelessness he could have got hurt . " why did you save ..."


" I would rather hurt than let you get hurt ..."

she looked surprised at his words.. this is first time actually he talking with her . Every time she would bother or say tease him but he never said anything ...all people are scared of him it can't be true that great Maan Singh Khurana is scared of Geet Hands or the rumour is true ...he has a crush on her ?
Edited by Keepdreaming - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
Hoping you will update this story please
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
Nice part
Finally maaneet met and geet got rid of that jerk
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
Hoo geet break up with Pritam
Loved the update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Maan saved geet, geet hell heaven talks were cute... Maan got scared for geet,

Geet is being ditch by her EX.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Geet broke up with pritam!!
Maaneet met😳
Lovely update :D
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Lovely update
Waiting for next update. ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thanks for updating! magnificent update! superbly written! Geet gets 2 know Pritam's true colors! Geet broke with him! Pritam not remorseful and taunts Geet! Geet collides into Maan! Maan is hurt but worried abt Geet! update soon! pls update Humnava
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow awesome update yaar

Maan is back and saves geet and now geet is more worried about maan and asks him why he saved her
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Posted: 7 years ago
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That was a harsh break up, but glad that she met Maan in not the best of situations!

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