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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: singh24


😃 Good Night Dona..
sweet dreams..
C U TM,, bye , TC..😃


😆 abho wo trailer dekhti hu..

main to dekhe hi ja rahi hu aur SS liye ja rahi hu 😆
i love this one
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#42

Originally posted by: Donnaa

main to dekhe hi ja rahi hu aur SS liye ja rahi hu 😆
i love this one


😃😳 hoping he'll rock again..
😳 see his eye.. so curvy...
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#43
curvy right i was searching the word but di here he is focused on the gun so but in other pics his eyes actually looks like in the video...kal dikhaungi
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#44

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curvy right i was searching the word but di here he is focused on the gun so but in other pics his eyes actually looks like in the video...kal dikhaungi


😃 Ok , bye now...

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hello di kuhu n tama 🤗
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hellooo😃
koi hai ya aaj bhi main akeli??😕
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#47

Originally posted by: Donnaa

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hello di kuhu n tama 🤗


🤗 Hi Dona.. nd Kuhu..
sorry kal nahi aai..
SIL ki family ke sath bahar gaye thy , late ho gaye aane mei.. so bas so gaye..😊
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MASKED

( For beautiful banner credit goes to Dona 🤗 )


Sometime the prettiest smiles hide he deepest secrets.the prettiest eyes have cried the most tears. And the kindest hearts have felt the most pain.

Lies cn poisoned any relation nd ruined d happiness , but sometime destiny creates such situations that only a lie cn save everything . They says ... such situations are very rare, so lying in them doesn't damage the general presumption that it's wrong to lie or to hide d truth .
when a simple truthful life became a curse for her , she choose to go other way to protect her nd others happiness . She lied , she masked , bcoz that was d only way infront of her .

will that work or not ...?

Note...

This Is a fiction , inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF




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Part - 4

Part - 5

Maan took leave nd went in his room ,, countless Qs nd possibilities wr running in his mind ,, he changed nd lie down in bed ,, his mind was thinking about Geet nd coming challenges in front of his family nd sply him ,, his was very restless with that single thought that ,what wd he do if Geet won't recognize him ?

She cd have memo disorder but not he ,, he knew everything ,, he cd hide that or disclose that ,, what wd be right ?

She was already in this condition bcoz of him ,, how he'll introduce him to her ?

Maan was turning nd tossing in bed ,, he never thought about her this much but from last 2 days she was not leaving his mind ,, he recalled how Geet came in his life ?

***

DM was trying nd nagging Maan to get married from last 2 yrs but he was refusing out rightly ,, she selected few girls from well known families nd requested him to meet d girls, but he didn't nd sometime both argued ,, even he said that she cd marry Vicky nd forget about his marriage ,, how cd DM think that ,, he was Khurana's elder son nd he was her darling grand son ,, in a young age he stood beside her when she had lost her only son nd DIL ,, Vicky was not that much mature but Maan became mature in a day ,, he masked his grief nd managed with her to save their broken family , falling business nd his study ,, he managed all with her nd never open his heart ,, he never cried infront of her , thought she knew that he need a shoulder to pour out his pain ,, tried to open to her but Maan didn't show his weakness nd stood with her holding her nd Vicky's hand ,, time started passing ,

Vicky became a Dr nd in a very short span he was handling 3 Hsptls owned by Khuranas,, How cd DM leave Maan alone , so trying her best to settle him .

This time she choose Darji's Grand daughter , who was simple nd brought up in strict atmosphere ,, Darji was very strict ,, Maan refused few rich girls saying that they moved in high parties nd live a free life so never be a good wife like he want ,, DM lil knew about his heart break too , nd d girl was a free bird , so understood his objection ,, NT was educated nd beautiful ,, they wr their neighbor , so when Darji asked about Maan nd hinted for alliance she agreed , but d main prob was Maan , how to make him agree ?

She nd Vicky planed nd arranged everything secretly in HP .

Vicky planned nd req Maan to visit their HP haweli ,, he didn't visit there from many yrs , Maan loved him nd knew Vicky was doing hard work to make his mark in medical field ,, to spent a time together he agreed nd they came HP for 2-3 days in weekend .

After coming there DM insisted him to see Darji's G daughter Nayantara ,, Maaan refused , but Vicky praised her saying that he had seen her nd she was a simple girl ,, both DM nd Vicky requesting him nd lastly DM played her trump card ,, she started crying taking name of Maan's dad nd mom ,, her wish to settle both d G sons before her last breath nd blah , blah.. ..

After a long persuasion halfheartedly Maan agreed nd as pre plan on sat eve they met with Handas nd fixed d marriage ( AnandKaraj) on next day ( Sunday ) Handas wr in Talk with DM so they wr almost ready for marriage after Maan's willingness , though Maan was shocked with that sudden marriage , but DM nd Vicky cdn't take risk ,, they came with all prep .

In Gurudwara Marriage had to be occurred in a simple way ,, Maan made face but DM nd Vicky was very happy ,, Handas too wr very happy getting a handsome nd rich match for their daughter ,, they wr well off but not like Khuranas ,, this alliance increased their respect in Pind more .

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Both d house wr decorated nd from early mrng prep started , ladies from neighbor nd close families from Pind came nd helping DM ,, did some rituals of Haldi nd Mahandi nd then sent Maan to take Bath ,, all started getting ready to leave for gurudwara ,, Vicky was arranging things with their caretaker ,, they all reached at Gurudwara nd Darji with few men nd relatives wr waiting for them ,, they welcomed Khuranas nd d priest asked to bring bride for further marriage ritual ,, Pummy with few more ladies came with bride whose face was half covered nd she was in in heavy dress nd jewellery ,, she was looking down with lower head nd looking very nervous ,, Maan was also quiet but stealing glances at her side .

Priest told to sit bride nd groom nd started Karaj ,, they took pheras nd blessings from Babaji ,, sit there for shagan nd elders blessings ,, DM lifted bride'd veil nd got a shock seeing a diff girl at that place ,, d bride was not Nayantara , but some other girl ,, she looked at Pummy who gave a sad look nd dragged DM in a corner nd pleaded to stay quiet for some time nd later they wd tell her whole matter ,, right then she only said that Nayantara run away nd to save d respect of both families they got ready her cousin for marriage ,, DM was shocked nd felt cheated ,, her eyes turned wet thinking about Maan ,, she was a decent lady nd whole village respect her ,, she cdn't create a scene there which cd harm their respect nd angered Maan nd Vicky ,, Brij was no where seen nd darji nd his son was forcefully smiling but their eyes wr telling a diff story . DM's blood was boiling nd she was waiting d time to blast at handas ,, if their daughter run away then why didn't they inform her at 1st place ? why they fixed a girl without talking to them ,, it was d matter of Maan's life nd they played with that ,, how cd they decide of their own ?

Not only DM but few more ladies came across with that fact that d bride was not nayantara but her cousin nd they starting gossiping with each other ,, Pummy was tongue tight nd req Darji nd her husband to quickly finish d ritual of Vidaai ,, with d talk around him Maan too became suspicious nd he looked at DM ,, he find her tense nd sad ,, seeing her eyes he sensed that something had happened nd he went to DM nd asked ,,DM startled nd tried to divert his mind but Maan didn't budge nd asked if something happened ,, it was she who forced him to marry nd he trusted her , but now things had changed nd effecting his life ,, they wr in holy place nd some ppl cheated them ,, with wet eyes DM disclose d truth that his bride was not nayantara but her cousin ,, NT run away , handas didn't inform them nd brought a diff girl for marriage .

Maan was hell shocked nd his temper raised ,, next moment he was infront of darji nd glared at him ,, he didn bother where they wr nd shouted at him for cheating them ,, he accused that why didn't they inform them at 1st place nd brought another girl for marriage without their acknowledgement .

All ppl wr staring at them nd nd some started accusing darji for keeping DM nd Maan in dark ,, Maan , DM nd then Vicky came out , but then few elderly ppl stopped them nd said that marriage had done nd they cdn't leave like this without vidaai ,, better talk in d presence of some ppl nd cleared everything .

All reached at Handa Haweli ,, d news of NT's runaway disclosed nd all wr accusing Handas , for hiding d news from DM nd Maan nd made him married with a diff girl without telling them ,, they cheated a respectable family ,, Handas said that they did that to save d respect of both family , what was their fault ,, they wr also shocked nd ashamed on Nt's act , many ppl nd many talks nd advises ,, finally well known old ppl requested DM nd Maan to do d Vidaai ritual bcoz that wd be a bad omen if he went without bride nd that girl to didn't have any place in society if he left her like this ,, she was properly married to him .

Immersed with that humiliation , cheating nd rage Maan held his bride's hand nd declared in front of all that he broke all d ties with that handa family nd he didn't want them near nd next day he'll send back d girl to Handas ,, he won't accept her ,, he left from there with DM nd Vicky ,, their close families followed them ,, ppl gathered in both haweli ,, then Maan nd DM came to know about Geet , that she was Darji's late younger son Mahinder handa's daughter ,, some fueled that her mother was an orphan nd she was a bad lady ,, ,, darji disowned his son bcoz of her ,, some said that handas don't like that girl to get rid of they tied her to Maan ,, there wr many talks ,, d dejected bride was quietly sitting alone in a room nd shading tears .

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At Eve few ppl from Handas came nd that time Brij nd his mother Pummy too was with them ,, they said sorry for not informing khuranas at 1st place but give excuse that they did that to keep f respect , but next they accused Maan nd DM for ruining everything ,, they cd keep that hide nd cd talk to them later ,, they made their fun in village ,, they came to know about NT in d mrning nd didn't have much time to solve d matter so fixed her cousin for marriage to keep respect of both families in front of all but now they spoiled everything ,, Brij stood nd said that marriage had done nd Maan had to take geet with him ,, they won't keep a married girl ,, she was his wife not handas daughter ,, he kept her , threw her or kill her ,, it was his matter ,, he went out nd brought a big suitcase nd kept in saying that those wr Geet's belongings ,, ppl who came with Handas req nd pressurized DM nd Maan to accept d girl ,, Pummy folded hr hands in front of DM nd said sorry for NT's act nd then met with Geet ,, Handas left .

DM , Maan nd Vicky wr very upset nd angry ,, they didn't look at Geet nd talk a word ,, whole night passed in tension ,, all left giving countless advises nd lastly DM req Maan to take d girl with them bcoz how they cd leave her here alone ,, they wr not shameless nd inhuman like Handas ,, after some time they wd think nd talked till then let her stay ,,

Next mrng all came back to Delhi ,, Maan was very upset nd went to office ,, Vicky too went to hsptl ,, he was sad for Maan ,, DM was in tension nd worried ,, she didn't talk to geet much ,, show her a room to live nd ordered servants to take care of her ,, DM's BP increased nd nakul called Vicky ,, he came nd took her with him in san******i ,, DM stayed there for one day ,, Maan too reached there nd stayed with her ,, Geet was alone in KM confined in a room .

Seeing DM's condition Maan masked his anger nd tension ,, DM was precious for him ,, she was his nd Vicky's only parent ,, he lost many things but cdn't compromise with DM nd Vicky ,, so req DM to think about their family not for useless nd selfish ppl ,, why bcoz of others she was punishing him nd Vicky ,, if something happen to her they wd left like orphan , so keep her stress nd tension free nd think about them ,, she was above all for him nd Vicky ,, He nd Vicky talked to DM nd tried their best to divert her mind ,, they started talking about business nd Vicky's work progress an about their further dream projs ,, next day DM got discharge ,, further plans after marriage had buried nd their was no talk about that matter ,, Geet remained in her room like a prison ,, she was getting her meal there ,, none was there to talk her nd d situation too was not in her favour ,, after 2 days when Maan nd Vicky left nd DM felt better ,she called Geet in her room ,, very politely she told her about her bad health nd express her discomfort towards her ,, which had happen with them in HP soured their hearts forever ,, she cdn't force Maan more bcoz he was very angry, feeling insulted nd deeply hurt ,, she cd live in KM but as a guest ,, they wd talk to her family after passing some time ,, Geet pour out nd req DM that she cdn't go back HP ,, they wdn't accept her any more ,, it was better she died ,, DM was shocked nd numb .

Time started passing ,, from village sources they got that Handas faced humiliation in whole village nd area ,, they lost their all respect nd all ppl accused them for cheating a noble family though Brij nd his parents wr accusing Khuranas ,, Maan was thinking to teach a good lesion to handas for playing with his respect ,, he didn't see Geet's face nd never bother about her ,, if he heard her name that only reminded him his insult ,, He made him more busy it was DM who interact with Geet .

Maan didn know d exact time when he slept so he wake up lil late ,, he had to visit hsptl so skipped his exercises again ,, got ready nd joined Vicky nd DM at BF , then they all went to visit Geet .

She was still in ICU nd dr wr suggesting for tests again to see d recovery of her head injury ,, now they had another prob of her memo disorder nd to know about that more they need to talk her family members .

Maan , DM nd Vicky met with Drs nd there a psycho Dr also present ,, he visited Geet nd talked to her ,, again Geet repeated same thing , became tense nd started crying ,, she wanted to know about her mom nd when she wd get discharge ,, she said that she had to search her mom ,, seeing her condition that Dr too didn't disclose that she was in a diff phase of time nd met with another accident , he cdn't do that without other Dr's advises .

Maan , DM nd Vicky went to see Geet in ,, Geet gave them a look nd then turned her eyes ,, she was looking tense nd restless ,, disappointed DM looked at Maan nd Vicky ,, Maan was shocked ,, it was d 1st case he was witnessing ,, d person who was living in their house nd 2 days back talked to him now not recognizing him ,, they all came out nd Drs advises them to call Geet's relatives so that they cd talk about her prev accident ,, they wr in dilemma ,, then something hit Maan nd he wished to meet Geet again in d presence of Dr ,, he nd dr talked nd then went in to talk Geet.

Precap --- Maan got many facts about Geet ...

Part - 6



sorry for mistakes.


Edited by singh24 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😃😃 Hello friends

hello di 😃

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