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Anotherstar

@Anotherstar

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

please make a index of your story
you have superb collection

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Reshu

@mayapari

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Nice secret
Me waiting for more

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AYAZU12

@AYAZU12

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

fantastic and very intriguing story...maan dead!...though it makes me sad but I also wonder is he really dead...dev and maan are step bros and media suspecting dev's hand in maan's murder...dev stunned at what maan wrote and decides to meet Geet Handa and their he got a shock meeting her as Mrs GMSK...so maneet are married...the story is full of suspense can't wait for next part and things to reveal...hope maan is not dead...waiting for next...

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Didn't expect maan to be death ... Dev seems a nice guy.. these media people are so insensitive ... Plus the family members too ... Many greedy for money ..

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390540

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Awesome
Jor ka jhatka dheere se lage
Loved it your stories are really marvelous
Please create index for them

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Hmm new twist geet is maan's wife hope he is alive

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

nice update ..
dev went out and here comes maan's wife geet !!!!!
what next

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

woh so big plan
maan still alive

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Maan may dark but still he was generous enough to let Dev know abt the danger

he is really mysterious

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AYAZU12

@AYAZU12

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#40

OMG maan is alive...yippee...I was so happy knowing it...so it was all a plan to save himself from police as he is not goody goody types in this story though I love even this side of his...Dev ko shock hi de diya usne bechara wondering if it is really his brother or some imposter...he is also shocked seeing his brother deeply in love with a girl and committed as he is a Casanova...now he and geet are all ready to leave India forever and fly to Australia and start a new life there... awesome ending to a awesome story...thnx for the pm and hope you'll give us an epilouge with full of maneet moments...

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