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Ms.Lizzie

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Planning to make it a long story

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Sundari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#2

Was waiting to see something from u since long...
Ah n this one just built up the right amount of curiosity!!!

Though I don't know the reason u killed Maan,
I only had one thing in mind while reading this...
Off course it was movie - race
Though things changed on the Dev's side of the story,
It had me all the more integrued!

By all means waiting to see what u have planned
But I'd rather be more happy if it turns out that Maan was actually alive 🤣

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Congrats on the 3S! thanks 4 da pm! intriguing update! wonderfully written! So Maan is dead! bt is he really dead? Dev's thoughst well portrayed! the media supect Dev! Maan n Dev were step bros! Dev hires a detective as he wants 2 knw hw Maan died! Maan's mom is shattered! update soon! pls continue Marriage lessons n late night messages

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Nav2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#4

awesome!!! Maan is dead. or may be not

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nehaa9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#5

congrats for new story

interesting part

looking forward for next part

cont soon

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Madhu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#6

Congrats on new story!
Intriguing one..waiting for the mystry to unfold
Plzz continue soon

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Jyoraj

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Shocking start and interesting story line.

Writing was really good, felt like reading a good new item.

Eager to know the mystery around death.

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Keepdreaming

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Posted: 8 years ago

#8

aew maan died
interesting start

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karishmajain

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Posted: 8 years ago

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maan is dead may be or may not be
media suspecting dev aur rivalry issue bana rahe he
maan mom is shattered
waiting for next

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drashtimeetu

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Posted: 8 years ago

Totally different concept
Loved it
Was it's really maan
Or it's an accident only or someone was behind it

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