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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#41

That was really amazing update...
Maan planned all this to escape...
He took don daughter with him...
Lovely end...
Poor dev yaar

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

hi thanks 4 da pm! fab update! wonderfully written! so Maan is alive! he faked his death 2 avoid jail! he has planned everything! Dev stunned! so Maaneet will leave to Australia! Geet is a don's daughter! Maan at least warned Dev abt the upcoming danger! lovely end!

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Aditi.kesari

@Aditi.kesari

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Thanks for the pm waiting for more

Nice update and cliff hanger

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

maan alive 👏

superb part

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Rucha

@frnd.of.frndz

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Wow that was an awesome story.. i was hooked up till the last line.. the end was like a tiny bomb exploded on dev.. it was written so well that i was not able to play any guessing game here.. k kya hua hoga kisne kiya hoga.. i am short of words it was really great reading this SS..

Rucha

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its_me

@its_me

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Nice story...

But so less of Maaneet... Please give an epilogue...

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umaa

@uluvmg

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

wonderful update...complete with epilogue plz...dev wanted proof from geet as Mrs.khurana & with big surprised mr.msk himself made entry with full proof to dev...his death was a very well planed to save himself from police as he was involved in importing un-authorised goods along with their materials... dev was in doubt about maan was not type of charity type but with great surprise about his charity to a foundation owned by geet only 'wow what an idea maanji'...maan knew he was troubled by police so he was ready to leave India forever to settle in Australia with this plan... dev left with final bomb from maan about police enquiry for rachha's means geet's missing...loved maan's the Don type behaviour.. very well ending...excited for epilogue about maaneet (married) life...!!

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

parts 2 & 3

firstly, did i tell u that i simply loved the suspense in this,

usually it should take long twists and turns before the suspense is opened, but i am glas it was 3 shot!!!

nevertheless it was amazing in its own way.

obviously it was nothing like movie race,

i loved the thing of geet being daughter of rachcha!!!😆😆😆

and maan's way of warning DEV!!

though i have complaints, u mentioned that maan's (fake) death was something to do with new 2000/- notes,

and the reference to his acting skills long back in part 3

these 2 points i feel i need some details on, or it's only me who couldn't read between the lines and you actually wrote something??

all's well that ends well,

it was nice way to escape a tight spot,

do you think i can use that to escape if my family plans an early marriage🤔

just kidding😆😆😆

PS: just so you know i have read all ur OS'

and i will make it a point to comment on them if i haven't 😃

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priyankadwivedi

@priyankadwivedi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Oohhh... Loved the part... Yipeee maan is alive... Geet is his wife... But grtt plan to escape police... Everyone suspected dev but no one had ever imagined maan to plan this himself... Amazing...