MG FF- Someone Like You THREAD #7

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dalur

@dalur

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Posted: 8 years ago

#441

With such simplicity Maan has charmed Geet and us readers... Just few lines but great impact... Ek tho he is calling her beauty and complimenting her in the greeting itself, knowing she will sorry seeing him missing he is assuring her not to panic which shows how much he understands her..and says he is just a call away confirming he will always be there for her.. then he speaks his heart about how the meal and the sleep were the best he had which also appreciates her effort and care..and tells her he wants such moments frequently, normally people say we should do this again but our intelligent fellow says he wants this to be repeated from time to time there by telling her ne would always want to spend time with her...and what a finishing touch "Yours Maan" haaayeee !!! what a confession it is...sooo dreamy and meaning full... Don't know whats going to happen to Geet and us when he finally confesses directly with the three beautiful words...

Don't know why but I am scared that if Raj is going to reenter now this beautiful dream time will end and Geet will be back to square...Raj please abhi Matt ana...

Thank you Ms.Writer for givings us a chance to experience such special moments

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#442

Watch his quick 1 min video... somethingnlike this will fit perfectly in the story... what say Ms Kawaii?

Dia's Magical Proposal

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#443

Chhoti si kahani se
Barisho ke pani se
Sare wadi bhar gayi lalala
Chhoti si kahani se
Barisho ke pani se
Sare wadi bhar gayi lalala
Na jaane kyun dil bhar gayaa
Na jaane kyun ankha bhar gayi

Shakho pe pate the
Pato pe boonde thi
Boondo pe pani tha
Pani mein ansoo the

Chhoti si kahani se
Barisho ke pani se
Sare wadi bhar gayi lalala
Na jaane kyun dil bhar gayaa
Na jaane kyun ankha bhar gayi

Dil me giley bhie the
Pahele mile bhi thie
Milke paraye thie
Do ham saaye thie

Chhoti si kahani se
Barisho ke pani se
Sare wadi bhar gayi lalala
Na jaane kyun dil bhar gayaa
Na jaane kyun ankha bhar gayi

Rukti hain thamti hain
Kabhi barasti hain
Badal pe paav rakhake
Baris machaltie hain

Chhoti si kahani se
Barisho ke pani se
Sare wadi bhar gayi lalala
Na jaane kyun dil bhar gayaa
Na jaane kyun ankha bhar gayi.

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#444

"Can we do this more often"

Wow that little note of Maan's would have made any girl read it a million times the last line now that would certainly say all good things with dreamy thoughts lingering in a girl's mind especially Geet's

The dinner was cosy it held warmth and brought in tons of happiness, I think not only Geet but Maan too was happy actually it was a dinner of peace ,love ,warmth ,and gave off such a deep belonging the care . I'm again speechless and words at this moment are way too difficult to come up with .

There is something else that I also admire in Maan , he never not once has ever felt uncomfortable in Geet's home

I further liked Maan and Ana's conversation he does not cage his sister he knows she is all grown up and needs to experience life but he also affirms that been a relationship does not give the partner the right to abuse or make conditions .

Maan is someone every girl would dream off

Geet is his "Storm" and he should be her "Sky"

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#445

I Loved the last statement... Geet is Maan's storm and Maan is Geet's Sky

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#446

Weekend is almost here and hopes are buulding up again...

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#447

am working on the update
either its tonight or expect it only tomorrow

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swetha03

@swetha03

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#448

Superb update...

She missed maan and the moment their hug and dinner it's awesome...

The note made her day... Wow

The brother sister matured talk is extraordinary awesome...

Waiting for the next update

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umaa

@uluvmg

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#449

wonderful update...loved it...wow geet ran, not bothering chilled weather, to maan & both felt warmness with each other... loved the dinner date, in her apartment, was more romantic than outside... he was overwhelmed with her menu aww* pressed kiss on back of her palm... happy the way the best caring bro of a lovely sis... loved bro-sis interaction... wow now his little tornado enjoying his romantic note which she was now feeling as yours...ready for their doing this (& more) from time to time(wink)...excited for next lovely update...thanks for pm...!!