SS: The Light At the End of the Tunnel [Ch 1, 2 / Pg 1, 2] 09.05.2017

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The Light at the end of the Tunnel

1. Rains And Storms

The lightening cracked the sky again and the deafening sound of thunder jolted the baby out of his peaceful sleep.
She had just drifted into a dreamless sleep after putting the baby in the cot when she was woken up again by the cries.

"Aww my baby mama is here...She's here...my Shambhav got scared...no..no don't cry no no don't cry."
Rocking the baby in her arms, she made her way into the kitchen and put the vessel containing milk on the stove.

The baby was still crying.

"Don't cry child. Missing Dad are you? He will be back... he'll get you so many toys. Now honey don't cry...you're my prince."

"Sleep my child and peace attend thee," she sang softly, "All through the night ,
Guardian angels God will send thee,
All through the night
Soft the drowsy hours are creeping,
Hill and dale in slumber sleeping
my loved ones' watch am keeping,
All through the night."

Listening the familiar lullaby that his father always sang to him, the fair child stopped crying after a while. Shifting him in the other arm, the mother rinsed her child's bottle and filled it with milk.

The quivering raindrops on the window, she stared at them as the baby in her lap drank the milk.

Her heart was at unrest tonight. Perhaps it had to do something with the rains. She hated rains. Her hatred for the rains went a long way back.It had rained heavily the day she had been born.

"A stormy night it was, God's must have been very angry,"her Maasi would always dramatize.

"The roads were filled with water, huge traffic jams. Your mother was in labour pain, there was no help. We were stuck in the jam. They saved you but couldn't save your mother."

It had rained the night when her father had finally succumbed to cancer.

The landline in the hall was ringing continuously when someone answered it.She heard the footsteps outside her room and suddenly Anwesha entered her room.

"Bhabhi...bhabhi ," she came to her and hugging her, she burst into tears.
Her heart beat rapidly within her chest.

No. Please no, she prayed in her heart. Let it not be what she was thinking it to be.

"Bhabhi...bhaiya's plane crashed. He's...he's no more."



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Please do leave your likes and views about the story.
Index
Ch 1- Pg 1
Ch 2- Pg 2


Edited by ...Syaahi... - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kya hum vahi soch rahe hai jo aap soch rahe hai?
Agar haan tho😆

Do keep writing

Waiting for the story to start!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh so wo 1 part tha sorry I took it as intro😳
So she connects rain to pain... Like a bad omen or something..

I liked the title.. it really gives hope for a better tomorrow..

Interesting start waiting for the next😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting title and an interesting plot...waiting for the next part...hoping for a long update thabhi mann bartha hain...
Please update at your earliest convenience
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Wow.. man this was very intense . Very well written.
I m hoping there's a happy ending to this call. I don't like dead Maan 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats on new story :D
The Rain always brings bad moments in her life..and she hates it!!
1st update mai hi meri Maan ko maar dala 😒(still I am having a little hope that Maan is alive 😉)
Plzz continue soon...can't wait for the nxt!
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Nice start... Already created interest in the first part itself... U have wonderfully created a way to reveal the news to the mot her of the child that her husband and father of her child will not be coming...unless u have a twist😉. But seriously it's a very fine start...👏
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Originally posted by: ...Syaahi...

Updating...anyone interested?


Me 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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2. Blood, Ties and Tears

Vancouver, BC, Canada

He stared at the woman in his arms. Her naked dusky skin glowed in the moonlight that peeked through the curtains.

With her aquiline nose, eyes a rare mix of blue and green, and blonde curly bangs that framed her oval face, she was truly an exquisite woman.
Samantha. Sam. His girlfriend. Although in his opinion, they were too old for such nomenclature.

Theirs was an open relationship where expectations never come into play. Expectations and emotions were a joy killer, they both understood this very well.

Disengaging her arms from himself, he went to stand by the window.There was a storm brewing inside his heart. Something, somewhere was amiss. He could feel it in his bones.

The huge glass towers and the majestic mountains powdered with dusts of snow peeking in between the towers, it failed to soothe his nerves.

He was twenty when he had first visited this place and the nature lover that he was, he had instantly fallen for the mountains, seas and the beaches.

It had been a decade since he had moved to this metropolis. One would think that the place had lost its charm but it wasn't the case. He still was in very much love with this green jewel of North America but there were days he felt homesick. Today was one such day.

His cell blinked a few times.

"Hello"
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Delhi, India

The plane landed at Delhi airport and all the memories that he had thought had been buried to death, they were suddenly alive. He fought and pushed his demons away.

His brother had died last night. Or maybe he had breathed his last, the last afternoon. He didn't know. He had been too shocked to process the news any further than the first line.

Dead. His brother was dead. His younger brother was no more.

The car entered the huge mansion and Nakul Kaka came running to receive him at the door.

"Maan baba... you came. What tragedy has struck us! Dev Baba...he's no more. How can God be so cruel. He was so young.What will happen of his wife, or his child. Hey Rama! Why did you do this to us !"

Nakul's words fell on deaf ears as Maan had traveled back in time.

"Why are you crying?" He had asked his brother.

"I don't want to travel in a plane. What if it crashes? In films, the aeroplane always crashes and people die. If I die, I'll be left alone. I hate being alone."

"Films show all sort of bullshit. Nothing will happen to you. Why you scared when I'm there. We'll die together so you'll have to bear my company always."

"They were making fun of me because I didn't know how to swim."

"Bhai...I got the first prize in the Science fest. Mine was awarded as the best model."

"Bhai I think I love Nidhi, Nayantara and also Shamreen."

" I got into IIT. AIR- 4th. I can't believe this Bhai. Thank you Bhai, it's all because of your guidance."

"I saw her at Chandni Chowk. Geet, her name is. I think I am finally in love bhai. You think she'll like me?"

"I am marrying her. You have to come. Please. You have to."

He felt the bile rise in his throat.

Every brick, every corner, each breath reminded him of his brother. It was wrong for him to be alive when his brother was not. He had promised to not let him be alone. He had given his word. And he was the elder one. He should have died first. Falling on his knees, for the first time in twelve years since the grandmother died, he let his emotions overpower him. He let the walls down and broke into tears. His harsh and rough sobs, were absorbed by the old and experienced walls of the mansions.
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He swirled the amber liquid before gulping it down. It had been a few hours since the funeral rites had been performed and his head was throbbing painfully. The numerous guests and their condolences didn't help his case.

"What would become of the company now that Dev is no more?" Arjun, his brother in law asked pouring him a drink.

The baby was crying again. He was always crying. Just wouldn't stop. Where was the baby's mother?

"Since you are taking care of the Canada business, it will be impossible for you to shift here."

"This is not the time to talk about business!" He reprimanded and left for his room.

His brother's widow sat lifeless next to the cot as the baby cried for attention, he saw while passing his brother's room.

His headache had worsened. It felt like his head will explode.He didn't want to be here. He just didn't. He wanted Sam and the solace of her arms. He wanted to forget the melancholy that has enveloped him.The baby's wailing grew louder and stronger.

He stormed into his brother's room and shouted at the woman.

"For goodness sake, make him stop crying. Would you?"

It seemed to have surprised both the baby and the mother for both of them were jolted out of their respective worlds.

He watched as she lifted the baby in her arms and rubbed his back and soothed him.

Her misted, swollen eyes met his dark unfathomable ones, and she apologized.

"I'm sorry. He won't disturb you again."

Edited by ...Syaahi... - 8 years ago

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