SS: The Light At the End of the Tunnel [Ch 1, 2 / Pg 1, 2] 09.05.2017 - Page 5

Loved it
After reading part 1 was sad as it may be maan but knowing plot is dev' widow n no dadi let's see how it goes
Not getting good vibes with Arjun looks like he want to take dev's business or may b it's his genuine concern

plz do continue soon plzz... interesting ... by any chance u r one of the old writes her
.. your name seems to be known???

Part 1

Title and the start sounds interesting.
the rain reminds her of the sad and painful memories in her life, then again there is another worst one that comes her way to relate it to the rainy night.

Part 2

Maan is this close to Sam, whether it is enjoyment or for forgetting the past demons, there are still some feelings involved when one is this close to another person, so it will be interesting to see the transition of thoughts or feelings for Maan, hope you will give justice to this side as well, looking forward to it.

and the last bit was intriguing, the circumstances under which Maan and Geet met, and instead of consoling her, his irritation came out with the continuous wailing of the child for not having control over the situation and of course because of the early death of his brother.
but hopefully after some time, he will realize harshness of his words seeing her bearing the tragic and pain of her husband's loss.

Hope you will continue with the rest of the story soon.

hope you will continue soon..

Just discovered this story! Very intriguing and well written. Different and melancholy so far . Would like to see how it progresses towards the light 😊 But looks like it's another one of the discontinued ones 🥱
It would be great if you could come back and continue! Thanks