SS: The Light At the End of the Tunnel [Ch 1, 2 / Pg 1, 2] 09.05.2017

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Madhu..

Beautiful one 👏

thanks dear

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Hi madhu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ...Syaahi...

The poem is beautiful !
Thank you so much Nishu. I am really touched!
There cannot have been a better welcome than the one you've given to this story.

thanks for your liking

It really mean a lot.

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Congrats on the story! lovely updates! Dev dies! Geet left with a child! Maan annoyed with Geet! update soon

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Sudha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Oh no this was what I had feared! That it could be Dev as her husband .

I don't usually prefer stories where Geet doesn't belong to Maan but this one story is already keeping me interested with just 2 chapters. You're a wonderful writer.

I'm waiting to see how things progress further in their lives.

Ps : I splly loved Geet's reply to Maan(if that's him i.e) at the end.

Edited by Miss.Hoshiarpur - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Miss.Hoshiarpur
Oh no this was what I had feared! That it could be Dev as her husband .
I don't usually prefer stories where Geet doesn't belong to Maan but this one story is already keeping me interested with just 2 chapters. You're a wonderful writer.
I'm waiting to see how things progress further in their lives.
Ps : I splly loved Geet's reply to Maan(if that's him i.e) at the end.

Glad that you liked the ch

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sgmiss2003

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Nice start. So Geet is married to Dev and Dev has died. Maan is back home and very disturbed. Waiting to read more.

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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Congrats on new story so geet is married to someone she is trying to make her baby sleep who is getting scared of the terrible weather approaching their way though geet is getting scared herself as her husband was supposed to come but her fears came true as she came to know how her husband plane crash and he is no more and her life ended there itself

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mlaran852

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Its was a very emotional update!!!
Poor geet she was left behind but atleast now she has her son...Maan got hurt after finding out about his little brother s death...he loved him even if he hadn't seen him for so long... he was good back in Canada and now with all this people he was pissed...

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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Lovely update maan lives in Canada he has a gf he has been away for almost 12 yes but all of a sudden he has to go back as his baby brother dev is no more the moment he reached km all memories came rushing back he is own sorrows of losing his brother he did see geet and her child maan was irritated by baby constant cries he storms in geets room literally scaring her who was lost in her own sorrows of losing her husband geet tries to console her child and apologise to maan for disturbing him