Wow I'm surprised again! U don't go the orthodox way by making Maan jealous...Maan being a sensible and matured guy feels glad when Geet is able to mingle well with his friends and takes pride in the way she is handling herself!!! Throughly enjoyed reading this scene.
Maan meeting Sarah was a bouncer, did not expect it...the way his eyes never leave Geet and the way he spoke about Geet being a person with flaws, just simple and with nothing special being her speciality, was surely the most heart touching moment in this story...Maan being a successful businessman with good looks and choosing Geet for being a simple plain jane is so refreshing...the way Geet tries to do things herself even if she doesnt do well, instead of expecting help from people and hoping for people to be her saviour she trying to learn to help herself and putting effort to become independent is may be what Maan admires the most...
I dont know how do you get such wonderful Ideas to write. You r such an awesome writer...
Maan comparing Geet to his bitter and delicuous morning coffee was so realistic 😃. Sarah trying to make Geet jealous was interesting, she definitely put Geet in thoughts about Maan 's equation with her and his Ex...Geet questions about Sarah and her getting affected with Man's closeness is nice progress... The little detailing of how Maan was startled when he woke up and was not able to recognise Geet instantly was amazing!!! Maan getting sick and Geet trying to help... Geet being her usual clumsy self and Maan giving his hand and bringing her out of the shaterred glass pieces does indicate something... I am in love with Maan's clumsy little geet and Geet's Monster Khurana!!!
Looking forward for the next update...
This is my favourite story because I always get to read what I would have liked to read...I love this story as it is not fast paced, the progression of characters is slow and very much believable and relateble, there is nothing clinch like hero saving heroin everytime she is in trouble, or finding heroin very pretty right a first sight, there is no multi talented heroin or instant love...
Maan here is not a perfect person, has highs and lows, sometimes strong some times emotional where he even cries, takes support from Geet is so refreshing..the way he cares for Geet and loves her unconditionally, Doesn't expect perfection from Geet, just allows her to be herself, instead of doing things for her he just guides her and gives her freedom to do things the way she likes to even if she fails, showing confidence in her, encouraging her to become independent, are such wow factors of this story!! I wish there were such sensible men in this world like Maan who have such progressive thinking...
Please don't increase the pace of this love story...let Geet fall in love slowly... Don't want this story to end anytime soon as I want to be thoroughly entertained for a very long time...
Our Hindi TV serial writers should learn from ur writing about story telling and how to develop characters instead of routine repeated unrealistic tracks...
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