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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! well written! Geet is so sweet n bubbly! Maan seems rude n arrogant! he is livid his ex cheated on him! he is a cricketer! Geet gng 2 Delhi 4 her job! she has a supportive family! she is nw 5 months in Dekhi n settled! she wants 2 meet her soulmate! hw will they meet?? waiting 4 Maaneet 2 meet! update asap
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow lovely yummy fav of my maaneet..very interesting.. lovely cs
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wow lovely superb update..my maaneet ki entry was rocking.. so geet left her family and came to delhi for her carrier but her destinty brought her to meet her soul mate..my maan was angry on his ex and now he is talk of city for his achivement..i love te update yar
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats on new story so 2 different souls totally different concept of lives geet is a cute bubbly girl having loving family going to Delhi for she is gonna be a doctor her brother and parents loves her and will miss her and here maan is a cricketer who just broke up with his gf who cheated on him he will get his revenge from her for cheating him maaneet haven't met as geet busy in her world while maan made his entry and is back to Delhi let's see how they meet
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update... Geet is happy with life now waiting for her soulmate... Here Maan is top on his career ..but his gf ditched him so he became mad.. Not tht he loved her.. But not able to digest she cheats on him.
Waiting for Maan Geets meet moments

Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting...

loved it ...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Great start. So geet is a doctor and she decided to d her internship in Delhi instead of Mumbai. Her family was little sad but for the happiness of geet, they all stopped their tears.. Maan is a cricketer. He was angry as his gf betrayed him. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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can we expect an update today??
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Chapter 2

Geet was on her round when a pager rings n she was called to conference hall.As she reached there she saw HOD of physiotherapy dept. Dr.Anurag Chauhan. He was d BST physiotherapist in d country n was awarded with many medals n awards by d Indian govt. And hence he was d in charge to the physiotherapist n trainers appointed to Indian Sports Teams. Entering the room she stood beside Dr.Akshay. He was senior to her by 3years n was very friendly. Dr Chauhan asked them to take seats n he stated: Akshay, u have been working here 3 n half years and ur performance has been remarkable n Geet, ur have been our bst intern till now. Not only ot was ur meds that work bt ur co-ordination with d patients has been very good. Finally, the sr. docks have decided to give ur career a golden chance, if u r ready to accept all conditions. Geet' face changed from nervous to excitement n finally question mark. Akshay: Dr, what chance n what conditions? N Geet looked at them curiously! Dr Chauhan: U kno Indian cricket teams physiotherapist, Dr.Agrawal is leaving fr Romania fr his further research n we r wanting to appoint a new Dr fr d team. It is finally decided that m gonna personally look after the team but as see I couldn't b there all d time as I have even more ppl to handle. So d committee decided to chose 2 interns that would work under me fr d team.
Geet n Akshay looked at each other with wide smiles. Dr. Chauhan: But let me worn u completely abt d pros n cons of it. If u delivered a good performance ur careers will uplift but a small mistake n it could completely ruin u! M NT forcing this on, take ur time n make decisions. U'll have to inform me b4 living. I hope have cleared everything from my side. So, make ur decisions wosely. Saying this he made an exit.

Geet sat in d garden behind d hospital fr abt 3 hrs. She finally decided. She wanted to it! She will put her BST n rest is left on her babaji! She knew it was once in a lifetime opportunity! With determination she made her way towards Dr. Chauhan.

As soon as she reached home, she made a call to her family giving them d good news! Everyone was ecastic! Wishing her luck, they prayed thanking babaji. After her parents, Geet called her bff, kanak! Sharing her happiness with her! They both decided to celebrate it!
After half an hr, Geet picked up kanak on her scooty, they decided to go fr a drive in d dark night. Kanak: Geetu, will u get me captain's autograph? Plz!! She asked making a cute puppy face.
Geet: Okay, will get it! Bt dnt u think he's already married, u should go fr sm1 else. Kanak: Yeah I kno he's married n nt asking you to fix a date fr us! Its jst an autograph!! Geet: Yeah, that's why u still have his posters all over ur room! She said rolling eyes! Kanak fumbled: WO..um.they r jst posters! N he's a star! So no offence! She shot bak! Geet: No wonder Abhinav hates captain! N they went on bickering.
Soon they reached a 24*7 cafe n placed orders. The cafe was on outskirts of city n was full of clg students. Kanak n Geet sat down n continued chatting.

Maan was at his mansion n was restless. He didn't have anything interesting to do n was snapping at anything n everything that servants got fr him. Servants around d mansion were on their toes! An old lady sitting in d hall observed everything. She shook her head at d servants plight. Finally making a move she walked towards her grandson's room, which was apparently in a huge mess as I a tornado had hit it! She found him sitting on d bed his back against the door. She went in n sat nxt to him placing her hands on his shoulder. SD: Maan, what happened? U seem restless. Maan: There's nothing dadima, u go to ur room n take rest. Dnt worry about me. M NT gonna commit suicide! SD eyes teared up. Though it was nothing new bt it would hurt her everytime. Maan: Dadima, plz go! She silently walked towards the door, n tilted her neck saying: Go out fr sometime maan. It would put u to peace, n she left.

Maan walked out of d mansion n drove away. He drove rashly to d outskirts of Delhi. He got out of d car n sat on d bonnet of d car relaxing himself. Opposite side of road he saw a caf where he noticed ppl sitting in group spending time with their loved ones bt he felt himself alone. He sighed n kept looking here n there n soon his eyes stuck to sm1 from whom they refuse to part. Ha saw two girls sitting together n were smiling n laughing. They seemed so happy and the girl in black dress was stunningly beautiful. There was nothing loud about her bt something soft n lovely n he didn't knew fr how long he kept staring at her. Later, both d girls made their way out of d cafe, n he found them going on a scooty! "Gosh!! How could they b so stupid to ride on a two-wheeler at this time of d day!! It isn't safe!!" Maan thought. Sighing , he followed them maintaining a safe distance. Bt soon he lost track of them as they passed through the crowd frustrating maan even more. He banged his fist on the steering wheel. A min later things clicked maan, what the heck he was doing!! Following a girl so desperately, jst to make sure she reaches home safe.Damn!! He cursed n drove bak to d mansion.
Freshening up, after working out fr 2 hrs maan lays himself on bed to get some rest. Closing his eyes, he sees picture of d same girl from d cafe. His eyes shot open. He again tried to sleep bt couldn't. It pissed him off. Finally, he slept off watching some retro movie.

Nxt morning bought a bright future for Geet leading her a step closer to her destiny! Soon she left to hospital as she would go to stadium where team practiced with Dr.Chauhan n Akshay.

After an hr, they reached d stadium. Geet felt excited n nervous as well, though she put up a confident face. Later Dr.Chauhan left n Akshay n Geet introduced themselves. Geet found them friendly n she was at was bt she didn't notice d absence of the vice. It was awkward firstly, bt due to geet's continuous banter everyone felt as ease. The team continued with their regular training sessions with Geet n Akshay beside them. It was almost 3 hrs later Geet got bak in d dressing room to look fr a Notepad when she collided with a hard body that came from another side dashing into her! She lost her balance n expecting a fall she closed her eyes. But it never came as a hand wrapped around her waist making her hang extremely close to a masculine body.
Maan on d other hand woke up late due to d girl, he didn't even knew name. He called captain informing about his late arrival and then hurried to freshen up!
As soon as he reached d stadium, he was hurriedly walking towards d ground collides with a soft form. He was furious fr a moment bt as he saw her falling bak he held her waist to prevent her from falling. Mentally he prepared himself to give d girl a piece of mind bt as soon as he saw her face he forgot to breath. It was d same black dress girl from last night he was following. As soon as realisation dawned him, he tightened his arms around her waist, pulling her a bit close. N she looked up In his eyes, the time stopped.

Precap: Captain: Maan, I want u to meet Geet,our new physiotherapist. Geet lowered her eyes, her cheeks turned red as she remembered their kiss!


So guys! Chapter 2 is dedicated to "khwaishfan"
Thanks fr ur support buddy!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Love the update maan and geet cricket team love the concept cannot wait to read the next part yippe

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