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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story dear, waiting for update
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Part 1

Handa House, Mumbai.

As sun peaked through the balcony of most beautiful, purple coloured room in Handa house,a figure sleeping on bed covered itself a bit more to sleep 5 mins more. Bt then a loud n rude alarm clock buzzed breaking dreams of d girl who woke up with a jerk n sat on bed rubbing her eyes, looking absolutely cute n beautiful. Opening her caramel brown eyes, she cribbed: babaji, can't u make nights more longer. U see, ur fav child didn't had enough sleep. She said making a face. And d alarm clock buzzed again, annoying d girl with dimples. As she turned to switch off d clock, her eyes fell on d calendar n her mind worked faster than any computer making her jump out of bed and she made her way towards d washroom.
It was d day she was supposed to leave for Delhi, where her dreams waited fr her. So everyone, This was Geet Handa.

As Geet rushed downstairs, she saw her mother sitting on d dinning gloomily n so did her complete family. Her dad was busy digging in d newsppr to make things look normal, n her brothers Randhir, the owner to Handa fisheries was busy with his phn n Ranbir, CA by profession was busy watching business news. She sighed n took her seat beside her elder brother Randhir and all eyes turned to her. Mr. Handa kept d Newsppr aside n asked Geet: So princes, all set to attack Delhi? His voice was a bit low n emotional, which somehow made her feel guilty. Getting up she kneeled beside him getting hold of his hand she sobbed: M sry papa,, if u dnt want me to go, I wont. I would take up internship at some hospital in Mumbai. M sr.. Mr. Handa: Are, first of all, I dnt like my princess crying. U kno It hurts me! N u have worked so hard fr this, right? So u should go. U deserve this. He said hugging her.
N then both brothers came from back hugging d duo, whereas Mrs.Handa smiled with tears at them. As everyone backed out from d hug, Geet could see d layer of tears in her brother's eyes. She walked to Ranbir n with this she clicked a crying pic of him. said: Ranbir bhai, think b4 crying. M gonna tell all ur gfs about it. She said dangling her phn b4 his eyes. Ranbir: U cant do this, chipkali. N dare u scare me about my gfs, as u c i have already broken up with them.With this he laughed n hugged her.
Reaching to Randhir she silently hugged him n whispered to him: Bhai, plz dnt cry. I cant go seeing u crying. N he knew she said d truth. He couldn't fell weak. Mrs Handa came n kissed her forehead: Apna dhayan rakhna baccha. I want no carelessness from u. Dnt talk to strangers n have ur meals on time. Ranbir: Ma, first let her have bf. She has a flite in 4 hrs n dnt worry me n bhai r going with her. He said rolling his eyes.
N d family set down fr bf. After an hour, Geet left to airport with her brothers.

Early morning, Delhi.

The Khurana mansion was in complete silence except for the voices coming from the gym. A figure stood there practicing kickboxing. His each move was more aggressive than earlier one. N sweat trickled down his well sculpted body. He suddenly thought of his ex gf, supermodel Akira Sharma whom he has broken up a week ago as she cheated on him fr her first debut movie in Bollywood with d producer. Though what they shared was just physical relationship n public appearances together, he hated what she did. Not bcoz he loved her or something, bt bcoz she betrayed him!!She could have simply walked out, but no! That bitch betrayed him! N betrayal was something that Maan Singh Khurana hated d most!



5 Month's Later

It was early morning when geet reached her apartment completing her night shift. It wasn't an apartment bt home fr her, where she lived fr d last 5 months. Delhi has definitely welcomed her with open arms. N d apartment was a gift from her elder brother to her, her graduation gift which she is still cherishing! Making a coffee fr her, she went out in d balcony n stood there looking at early morning sky. She had everything in life she asked fr; a wonderful family, her dream job n her genuine n loving frnds. The only thing she prayed to babaji now was her sole mate, the love of her life n she knew she would soon b blessed by her dream boy!

Delhi Airport

There stood press n media reports with cams waiting for the arrival of indian cricket team who have won the odi series against England n were supposed to b back anytime now! Not to forget, they were standing here to interview d Man bestowed with d title of Man of d series, Maan Singh Khurana.
As d private plane landed, the team got down surrounded by guards headed by the nations very own Captain. As they moved from d crowd, answering few questions they made their ways towards their own cars. As the team crossed d media persons, another set of bg's came surrounding d star of d match, talking on phn, avoiding media completely. He reached d captain n shook hands deciding to meet later that evening n zoomed off in his sports car with his bg's following in another one.


Guys, I'll try not to use names of any players in d updates from d origins team. But if by mistake I did, than m sry!
Edited by shimmer0398 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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lovely start
geet so sweet girl all loves her
but she had to leave Delhi
maan angry young man
lovely
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So this is not gonna be the usual office romance. How is a normal working girl be paired up with this cricketer. Waiting to read more...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Finally i reached here..
Thanks for pm..
Congo on new story...
Sry i was late a bit held up...
Nice start
Geet had a lovely family...
Maan gf cheated on him...
Hmm wilb waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#cc00cc">Congrats on the new story! will b waiting 4 prologue n cs as well as updates! </font>




Well thank u! Sry, as u were expecting prologue bt I simply didn't understand what should I write in prologue! So, I posted 1 st part
I hope that would make up fr prologue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehapriya

So this is not gonna be the usual office romance. How is a normal working girl be paired up with this cricketer. Waiting to read more...




I simply hope that I would come up to ur expectations!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

Finally i reached here..
Thanks for pm..
Congo on new story...
Sry i was late a bit held up...
Nice start
Geet had a lovely family...
Maan gf cheated on him...
Hmm wilb waiting




It doesn't matters Ho late ur! N thanks fr commenting!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great start
sorry if I reply late just held up with something
Geet is a cute gal who loves her family
Maan has been cheated by his ex
Hes a cricketer ...interesting
cont soon
thnx fr d pm

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