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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
good..

Thanks a lot dear.😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hey! thanks 4 an awesome FS! thanks 4 da pm n splendid update! well written! Maan determined 2 find Kartik! Maan goes 2 Manali! Maaneet missing each other! Geet surprises Maan n comes 2 Manali! they go out n enjoy! they get stuck in the rain! Geet gets her memory back! All mus cleared! Geet confesses n assures Maan abt the kiss! she tells Maan abt Kartik! he is a psycho who is obsessed with Geet! she ignored his advances! Maaneet back the hotel n Kartik there! he is crazy! Maan warns him n Geet tells him she loves Maan! he kidnaps Geet bt Maan n Avi save Geet! Maaneet get married! perfect end! will there b an epilogue?? looking forward 2 more stories from u

Thanks for the lovely feedback ..I am so happy that you loved this story.😳

I have planned the story this way so now its ended ..sorry ..not thought of Epilouge as of now dear.

but thanks for reading it ..sure will want to write more so will try my best.😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: sapnaf52
beautiful update. .
that kartik is physco lover. .
finally geet regain her memory. .and she loves Maan. .
happy for Maan. ..Maan no more guilty. .
maaneet are married. ..
happy ending. .
thanks for pm deepti

Thanks a lot Sapna

so happy you loved it ..😳

my pleasure dear ..thanks for reading.😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Risingsun626
Thanks for pm. Rocking update. Like maan i was too scared if by chance geet had some feelings for kartik then what would be maan future. Its good that geet memory come back before its too late n kartik took benefit of it. Kartik n ppl like him are scars for the society who in their stupid psychology feel joy in disturbing others life specially girls are their easy target. But u did a better work by make him beaten black n blue. Its satisfy my feared heart too.
The romance of maaneet is as serene as their love. Will you like to give an epilogue for this story.

My pleasure dear.. so glad you read it and loved it.😳

ya Maan was scared more for this thought ..agree ppl like him are scares for the society.😡

it satisfied your feared heart too aww..thanks a lot for such awesome comment ..😃

not thought of epilogue ..acc to me story ended here dear.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: priya_21
with maaneet marriage story ended beautifully but want epilogue

Dear not thought of epilogue ..just wanna end it here ..

but thanks for reading.😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Deeps beautiful update, loved it.
Beautiful ending to a beautiful story of Maaneet.
Maan determined to find Kartik and went to Manali to search for him.
Geet his true better half went behind him. She got her memory back and both confessed their feelings for each other.
The chase was beautifully penned down. Kartik went to the place where he belongs.
Maaneet are married.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Thanks a lot Anu..so happy you loved it and for such lovely feedback..😳

its my pleasure dear.😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: heemasomani
Amazing update

Thanks so much Heema for reading and loving it.😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: nakh5683
Awesome update though sad it ended too soon so maan went to Manali to find out abt Karthik after lots of cajoling as geet didn't want him to go he waited 2 days but couldn't get info abt Karthik geet was worried and scared so she came to Manali with her siblings maaneet were terribly missing each other geet wanted to go for an outing both got stuck in rain geet dancing in rain when she got her memory back and remember abt the night both got drunk she indeed loved maan and was gonna confess next day but coz of her accident couldn't she told how Karthik was a psycho who was after her and was troubling her maan was enraged but more when he saw Karthik who thought geet still remember anything he was shocked both fought when Karthik forcibly took geet with him he lusted geet and wanted her for revenge as geet rejected him but maan saved her and now freak in jail maaneet happy and now are married living a happy blissful life as they were destined to be

Aww thanks a lot for reading and so happy that you loved it dear.😳

thanks for such an awesome comment.😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Deep dear!!! Omg what an awesome ff ❤️ I've never watched this show but decided to read this ff after receiving your PM (since you're the writer 😉) the first part itself kept me hooked, and i read all 4 parts in a go 😃 really impressive 👏

The rain scene was really romantic 😳 and i really loved loved loved your portrayal of Maan's dilemma 👍🏼 it was beautifully explained 😳 maaneet's chemistry is sooo cute, I'm envious 😆

I felt so relieved to know that kartik was lying 😳

I've said this many times but I'll say it again 😃 i can picture DD perfectly in your ffs 😳 and this makes me admire her even more it really shows how big a fan of DD you are ⭐️

This ff is just like a mini movie! Great job deep 👏

P.S. I remembered this as I was going to sleep 😆 I loved the way you began your ff too! Engaging and lively start ⭐️

Edited by sugar.and.spice - 8 years ago