MG SS- Tanhaiyan Part 4-pg 22, 04/06/17 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Rashmi...

Kya baat hai Madhuri.. aaj waiting mission par ho😆

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

Aap log yaha aaj... Updating in a while

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

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me first...
but i guess i am the last one to comment
but yaar mood and time play hide and seek with me.

anyways, its a beautiful start ritzz.
loved piya and veer... so cute babies
but then the worry of the broken souls made me sad. one lost the love of his life to fate and the other to his infidelity

no doubt geet lost her trust. being brought up in an orphanage and finding love in abir...he was her "home"
he was supposed to be her everything but he ruined it. gadha khotta kamina kahinka

but i guess this is for good. how beautiful it will be to see two broken souls falling in love
more importantly, even if maan falls in love, i wonder if geet will ever let herself fall in love with maan?

continue soon

Next Morning Geet woke up early and got ready for school... She made Veer also ready for school... Sapna made them eat breakfast.. Veer as usual was being naughty and was throwing tantrums for drinking milk..

Sapna: Raj beta jaldi milk finish karo tumhe school nahi jaana kya..?

Veer: Gf mein akele jaa ke kya karu aap bhi chalo na mere saath.. Dono bahaut masti karenge...

Sapna: O mere bf... Mein tumhari dadi hu sach much ki gf nahi hu... Chalo now drink ur milk or else sham ko no cookies made by me...

Veer pouted and said: Nahi nahi I will have milk...

Geet was so enjoying the scene infront of her... She prayed god to keep her family happy and smiling always... Geet and Veer both left for school after having their breakfast saying bye to gaurav and sapna...

In Khurana Mansion the scene was totally different.. Suraj and Supriya both were running after naina to catch her..

Suraj: Gudiya ruk jaa na... Kitna running karwayegi... Teri dadi bhi mujhe itna nahi bhagati jitna tu bhagati hai...

Naina: O mele Daa Aise nahi chalega... Paa ne kaha hai aap ko exercise karna jaruri hai... Aap walk pe jaate nahi so paa told me to to make u run.. She giggled after saying this...

Suraj: Tere paa ko toh mein chodunga nahi.. Ruk aane de use niche...

Supriya: Naina beta accha hai jo inko tu bhagati hai but aaj mujhe kyu tang kar rahi hai...???

Naina: She giggled and said sexy daadi aapko bhi exercise karni hai... Paa ne kaha hai...

Meanwhile when naina was talking both suraj and supriya were slowly taking steps towards her... When she finished talking Suraj went near her and caught her...

Suraj: Pakad liya meine naina ko... Ab chalo chalo ready hona hai na school ke liye... Aaj new school jaana hai...

Naina: Daadu mujhe school nahi jaana... Mujhe yahi khelna hai...

Supriya went near them and said to naina "Beta school is really good and u know u will get lots of friends there... Tumhe partner chaiye na for playing..??"

Naina: Ha Daadi mujhe chaiye partner jaise daadu aapke partner hai...

Supriya.. Badmaash.. Chalo we will get ready then...

Maan was watching all this from upstairs... He had a smile playing on his lips.. He was coming down to take naina and make her ready but stopped near stairs when he saw naina making both his parents run after her.. He laughed when she told them about exercise.. He was amused as well that naina understood what he said and was doing exactly same as was told... He came downstairs and sat on dining table..

Suraj: Maan How is office work going beta..???

Maan: Everything is fine papa.. Just busy with recent project of Mr. Sharma..

Supriya made naina ready for school and both came near dining table..

Naina: Paa did daadu scold u..?? She went near maan and made her hands up so that maan could lift her and make her sit on his lap...

Maan made her sit in his lap and kissed her cheek.. No bacha daadu did not scold me.. He knows I m right... Maan smirked at suraj..

Suraj: Wah ye acha hai baap beti ab ek team me ho gaye ho.. Not fair...

Naina: Daadu don't worry mein aap ke team me aaungi na jab mujhe paa ko satana ho... Now suraj smirked at maan..

Maan: Haaww meri naina mujhe stayegi..??? Paa ka dil tut gaya... He said while keeping his hand on his heart...

Naina saw this and said "Han jab bhi aap office se late aaoge mein aapko khub saraa sataungi... and aapka dil mera toy jaisa thodi hai jo tut jaayega... Aap toh strong ho na... And I love my Paa.." Saying this she kissed maan's both cheek..

Maan was smiling at this gesture of her and her talk made him amused once again.. How his life has changed from being a businessman to a father and at times he have to be her mother as well... Maan made her eat breakfast and drink milk.. He also had his breakfast and both bid bye to suraj and supriya and went for school...

Suraj: Pata nahi aage kya hoga... Abhi toh naina ki wajah se maan muskuraata toh hai.. Par kab tak aisa chalega.. Naina ko bhi ek maa ki jarurat hai.. Hum kab tak saath rahenge uske...

Supriya: Thik kaha aapne... Meine bahaut koshish ki maan ko manaane ki par wo nahi manta... Piya ke jaane se is ghar ki saari khushiya chali gayi.. Bas naina ne sawaara hume.. Maan ko... Warna maan aaj hume aise nahi dikhayi deta.. Yaad hai piya ke jaane ke baad maan ne 2 din khud ko kamre me band kar liya tha bina khaaye piye... Usko toh naina ka khayal bhi nahi tha...

Suraj: Han supriya yaad hai... Naina toh kitni choti thi... Usko toh na maa dikh rahi thi uski na uske paa... Kitna roo rahi thi wo...

Supriya had tears in her eyes.. Han usi ki aawaz toh humne maan ko sunayi tab jaa ke wo room se bahar aaya.. Kaise rooya tha naina ko pakad ke... Par naina hi thi jisne maan ko us gum se bahar nikala... Mein aaj bhi use bas naina ke saamne hi muskuraate huye dekhti hu... Warna toh wo muskuraana jaise bhul hi gaya hai...

They sighed and went for their respective works praying in mind to keep their son and granddaughter smiling always...

St. Xavier's School

Geet entered the school premises and everyone greeted her Good morning and she replied them with smile...

Geet: Veer u know na where ur classroom is..?? So come on go to ur classroom and be good ok.. No naughtiness.. I don't want to hear any complain from miss..

Veer: mumma Aap miss ke jaise mat bolo.. aap toh meri mumma ho na.. but I promise I will be good... He said making innocent face...

Geet smiled at that and kissed his both cheeks and left for staffroom...

Here maan also came to drop naina in same school... Maan got out from car and took naina out...

Naina: Paa I m scared.. This is new school.. Mein kaise rahungi yaha.. She made a cry like face while saying this...

Maan: Bacha don't be scared.. U r brave like paa na... U will be fine.. See u will have new friends to play with.. Don't worry... I will come in afternoon to take you... Now come on give me smile and kiss...

Naina smiled and gave kiss on both cheek's of maan.. Maan took her hand in his made his way in the school... He went to office where he met Mrs. Ahuja, class teacher of naina.. He left naina there and went away saying bye to her...

Mrs. Ahuja: Hello Naina... I am your new miss... We will go your new class just wait here for 5 mins I will go in office sign and come.. Be here till then... ok.??

Naina: Ok Miss.. I will be here...

Mrs.Ahuja went in office to sign the register... At same time some boys were running in corridors and one of them gave push to naina by mistake.. But before she could fall down She was caught by someone...

Here geet was coming towards office after keeping her bag in staffroom.. She saw boys running and playing in corridors as there was still time for school to start... She saw one of the boy giving push to a girl.. She immediately ran lil faster and caught her on time...

Naina was so scared that she hugged geet tightly... Geet patted her back softly and said "Kuch nahi hua baby... See u r fine..." She consoled naina... Naina finally left geet and saw towards her... Naina was soo surprised to see her angel their... She smiled towards geet and hugged her once more...

Naina: Are U an angel...?? Paa says god sends angel to help small kids..

Geet laughed at that came out of hug.. Geet loved this girl.. She was too cute and was talking very softly.. Geet smiled and said.. "Pata nahi baby If I m ur angel or not.. but ur Papa says right... God sends angel to help small kids.."

Naina: Papa nahi angel.. Paa...

Geet smiled again and said.. kk baba Paa... Whats ur name bacha and are u new here..??

Naina: I m Naina.. Naina Maan Khurana.. Yes I m new and aaj mera first day hai.. Paa says I will make new friends here... I was soo scared to come to school but paa said I m brave girl..

Geet: Han bacha ur paa is right.. U r brave girl... But what u r doing here..??

Before naina could say something mrs.ahuja came out of office and saw geet and naina talking...

Mrs.Ahuja: Hello geet.. Good Morning..

Geet: Oh Mrs. Ahuja.. Good Morning...

Mrs. Ahuja: I guess u met new member of school... She is naina.. I told her to wait here for me..

Geet: Yeah she told her name.. She is really cute and smart girl... See u in staffroom.. I have to go.. Geet started to move but naina hold her hand...

Geet: Kya hua naina.?? See now Mrs. Ahuja is here.. She will take u to ur class.. Don't worry bacha...

Naina was looking at geet with different emotions... and was smiling.. Geet thought she is still scared...

Geet: Naina let me go beta.. U r brave na.. U will be fine..

Naina: Angel... I saw u for first time.. I want u.. I won't let u go.. U r my angel.. I found u angel...

Geet didn't understand a single word why was naina saying like this... She just helped her...

Geet: Beta.. I have work.. like ur ahuja miss I m also teaching here.. I have class.. Let me go...

Naina: Ok angel.. But u will meet me again na..?? I will tell paa also I met you...

Geet: Han beta I will meet u again.. I m here only... now go to ur classroom..

Naina: Ok Angel..

Mrs. Ahuja: Naina she is a teacher here.. U should call her Miss like u call me..

Naina: Nahi Miss.. she is my angel.. not miss... she said making sad like face..

Both geet and Mrs. Ahuja were shocked to hear that.. They did not understand why she was saying like this... Geet thought maybe she is calling her angel because geet helped her...

Geet: Ok Naina.. U can call me Angel.. Happy now..??

Naina smiled at her and told geet to bend down lil... When geet came to her level.. Naina kissed her both cheek's and said "Bye Angel.. I will meet u again..."

Geet smiled at her and said bye... Mrs. Ahuja took naina in her class...

In afternoon Maan came to take naina.. Naina ran towards maan when she saw him getting out of car.. Maan took her in his arms and kissed her cheek.. Made her sit in passenger seat and he went and sat on driver s seat and started the car...

Naina: Paa... I m sooo sooo happy today...

Maan: Kya hua bacha.. Aaj itna happy kyu.. U made new friends and loved school isliye..???

Naina: Off ho.. Paa nahi... I liked school and made new friends also.. But u know what Aaj mein kisi se mili...

Maan smiled at that and said.. "Accha.. Kisse mili aap jisne aapko itna happy kiya.. Mein kal unse milunga and thank u kahunga for making my naina happy.."

Naina: Paa I met Angel today...

Maan applied sudden break to car as he was shocked hearing what naina said.. He saw towards naina who was smiling whole heartedly while telling him about Angel.. He did not get a single word she said as his mind was on the words naina said some moments ago "I met Angel Today"

So How is 2^nd part guys..??? Left on wrong time na... Think think Angel naina maan.. Kya connection hai... Hehe.. Sorry no precap...

In next Part u may get Maaneet.. Not Sure though.. The story will mostly focus on 4 characters Maan,Geet,Naina and Veer..

Hope u like the update.. Please like and comment as it motivates a lot for writing...

Thank u...

Really nice one. cant wait to see manneet together. Geet is Angel.