MG SS- Tanhaiyan Part 4-pg 22, 04/06/17

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Rituja

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Posted: 8 years ago

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Congrats on starting this ss ritzz.
its been a long time since i have seen you writing something, especially ss.

all your works are poetic so its intereting to see what you have in store for us here.

Beautiful start. Maan and Geet both are burdened by the baggage of the past yet two little angels are still there to brighten up their days. It is not easy to live alone and being a single parent is already difficult enough.

it would be an interesting story to read. How the two broken souls would come closer and fall in love.

how the "tanhaiyan" at their indivudual levels would gradually merge into a world of love... that would be interesting to see.

Put up the first chapter asap.

waiting...

love always
your doll❤️

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priya

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Posted: 8 years ago

welcome back ritu dekh kaise band bajakar swagat karrahi hoon😆

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Rituja

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

welcome back ritu dekh kaise band bajakar swagat karrahi hoon😆

Thank u sooo much di... Hugsss

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priya

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Posted: 8 years ago

poetry se shuru hua prologue... kisi tarah samajh gayi mein...nishu ki poems se adat hogayi thi😆warna mere dimaag itna sehen nahi sakthi😆😆😆nice prologue..maan geet ke shadi kisi aur logon ke saath chalo koi na ..undono ko ram naam satya hai karwado ya phir talak karwake dusre se set karwado. maan geet ek hona haina humare liye😆

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angel0912

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Posted: 8 years ago

Congrts for new ss plss add me in ur pm list

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Aakriti Srivastava

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Posted: 8 years ago

Kar Diya... Kar diya... Aakhir kahin pe to maine apna Comment Unreserved kar hi diya😆... Welcome back Veeru... And thank you for coming back with such a beautiful story👏👏...

What i can guess from prologue and Character sketch is that both Maan and Geet are married to different person and had been left by them...

Waiting eagerly to see how their paths will crossed in future... Continue soon...

I like the way how you use poetic way of writing... It just give a different feeling to the whole story...

Continue soon Veeru

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 8 years ago

dont be shocked... its really me😆

Congrats for starting a new story...

i am so bad in reading and understanding poems... school mein kiya wahi badi baat hai... ab try bhi nahi karti... sorry i know u love poems... lekin is maamle mein we are opposites... story bola isliye meine thread par kadam rakha hai😆

maan ki patni koi aur😲... geet ka pati bhi koi aur😲

kya kar rahi ho ye... maaneet kaise banenge ye?

will be waiting to know that

Edited by -lakshmi- - 8 years ago