MG SS- Tanhaiyan Part 4-pg 22, 04/06/17 - Page 11

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@ Rashmi Di: Arey WAh.. First num aap ne grab kar liya is baar.. Chalo koi toh hai jo iss aashu kamini ko hara sakta hai...😉 Umm Her mother is angel..?? Meko nahi pata khud read karo.😆 Thank u for lovely comment...
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MG SS- Tanhayian



Part 3

Maan was hell shocked when naina said she met Angel.. He thought how is it possible... How can she meet Angel... Naina is a child, may be she would have seen someone else... It might be a mistake...

Maan: Naina did u really met angel beta..???

Naina: Ha paa god promise I met angel.. Mein aapko unse kal milaungi...

Maan: Ok we will meet ur angel Thank u jo kehna hai use...

Naina: Ha paa she saved me from falling.. Thank u toh kehna hi padega...

Maan: Falling..??? Naina did u do any mischief..?? Kahi lagi toh nahi..??

Naina: No paa I m fine and meine kuch nahi kiya sachi.. U can ask angel tomorrow..

Maan: Ok

Maan dropped naina home,played with her sometime and left for office.. In office he tried working soo much but could not concentrate.. His mind was on only one thing.. Angel.. He took piya's photo from table and thought how is it possible piya.. tum hi batao wo angel ko kaise mil sakti hai.. Jab angel hai hi nahi.. Tumne toh kaha tha ki wo... Anyways I have to wait till tomorrow.. Aur tumhari wajah se meine use angel ke bare me bola tha... Now she recognize angel only aur tumhe toh usne jaana tak nahi piya... Kal agar sachi wo angel huyi toh mein use kya kahunga piya... Mein kya kahu ki mein tumhara khayal kyu nahi rakh paaya...?? Kya sochegi wo piya... Grrhhh Maan control.. Aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki wo angel na ho... Par agar huyi toh mein kya karunga.. wo toh mujhe maar hi daalegi... Maan left office as he was not able to concentrate on anything... He thought only naina could distract him.. So he went home...

Here after school veer and Geet came home... Veer was tierd so after having snacks he slept.. But Geet was thinking about the morning incident.. She had smile playing on her lips thinking about naina.. She was awed by her cuteness... She remembered how she refused Mrs. Ahuja for calling her miss.. She laughed at that thought... She felt as if naina was someone close to her... Naina se mil kar use ek sukun sa mila.. apnepan ka ehsaas hua... Geet could not get why she had these feelings about naina... She met her for first time though... Her thoughts were disturbed when gaurav knocked the room door...

Gaurav: Geet u there..???

Geet: Ji papa aayiye na...

Gaurav: Geet I want to talk about something with u.. will u please come outside.. we are waiting in living room...

Geet: Ji papa I m coming...

Both went in living room where sapna was already sitting...

Geet: Kya baat hai maa papa... Kya hua..??

Gaurav: Beta tumne aage ka kya socha hai..???

Geet: Kis bare main papa...

Sapna: Don't pretend geet.. We know u know what we are talking about...

Geet: Maa papa meine aapse kaha na mujhe koi shadi nahi karni hai.. Aap samajhte kyu nahi ho... I have lost all the turst and emotions related to this word... Please mujhe force mat kijiye..

Gaurav: I know beta how you are feeling.. But Akele zindagi nahi guzari jaa sakti geet.. Hum kab tak saath rehenge beta.. Ek na ek din ye duniya chod ke hume jaana hi hoga...

Sapna: Aur har koi abir jaise nahi hota geet... Try and come out of that betrayal beta... It's been 4 years now... Aur veer ko bhi toh ek pita ki jarurat hai...

Geet: Itna aasan nahi hai maa ye sab bhulana... Geet had tears in her eyes...

Sapna: Par mushkil bhi toh nahi hai beta... Samajh ne ki koshish karo geet.. Veer jaise jaise bada hota jaayega wo tumhe uske papa ke bare me puchega.. Kya jawab dogi tum use geet.. ?? Wo school jaane laga hai waha bahaut saare bacho ke pita unhe chodne aate honge... Use ek na ek din uske papa ki kami mehsus hogi geet... Kya kahogi tab use...?? Think about it geet... We are not forcing u geet but think on this...

Gaurav and sapna left geet alone as they knew she will take time to digest their words.. Geet was silent after listening to sapna.. She knew sapna was right.. Veer one day would ask for his father... Is she prepared for that day... ??? Kya kahegi veer ko wo... But then what about her.. Will she be able to trust again..?? Will she be able to love again..??? No No she can't and how can she give justice to that relation if she has no trust in love and marriage... Geet went to her room where veer was sleeping soundly.. She went laid near him.. Geet kissed his forehead and cheeks.. She hugged him tightly... Her mind went numb now.. She was still living in her past... Past memories haunted her at night... She slept thinking about all these...

After an hour or so Veer got up and saw his mumma sleeping near him.. He kissed her cheek and geet had smile in her sleep as if she recognized whose touch it was... Veer got up and had a naughty grin on his face... He slowly got out of bed and came from other side where geet was... He went near her ear and shouted.. "Mumaaa... Aaahhh I got hurt mumma..." Geet was startled with veer's voice and at once got up from her sleep.. Veer started laughing when he saw his mission was successful of scaring his mom... Geet gave angry look to veer and before she could say something veer ran out of room.. geet also got out of bed and ran behind him shouting "Veer Ruk ja.. aaj tujhe chodungi nahi main.. Bahaut badmashi karne laga hai..." Geet went to living room where she saw veer was hiding behind gaurav...

Geet: Veer bahar aao abhi.. Daadu tujhe bachane wale nahi hai aaj...

Gaurav: Geet jaane do na bachha hai...

Geet: Aap toh rehne do papa.. iske saath aap bhi bache ban jaate ho...

Veer started to giggle at her remark...

Gaurav: Geet ye kya baat huyi.. Mujhe kyu daant rahi ho.. Ye lo tumhara beta.. Ise daato saying this gaurav pulled veer infront of him...

Veer: Daadu bacho mujhe.. Meine kuch nahi kiya... and U did cheating... Mein GF ko ab aapke saare secrets bata dunga...

Geet Pulled veer towards her and said " Oye badmash Daadi hai wo teri koi GF nahi... aur aaj no chocolates for u..."

Veer pouted at that and made sad face... Geet felt bad seeing his sad face so said "But hum aaj ice cream khaayenge after dinner.. Veer ki fav wali... Hai na papa"

Gaurav: Ha aur mein toh double ice cream khaunga...

Veer hugged geet and said "Sorry mumma and I love you.."

Geet smiled at that and said " I love you too veer" She kissed his cheeks..

Next Day was as usual for both families... Running after their grand children for making them have breakfast and getting them ready for school..

Naina had smile on her face today while going to school.. Whereas maan was nervous because he will meet angel of naina today... They reached school and maan went inside with naina...

Naina: Paa jaldi chalo na mujhe Angel se milna hai...

Maan: Haa baba I m walking fast na...

Naina's eyes were searching for geet but she could not see geet anywhere... She made sad face... Maan saw that and asked "Kya hua meri pari ko..??"

Naina: Angel kahi nahi dikh rahi...

Maan: Aapne kisi aur ko dekha hoga beta kal...

Naina: Nahi Paa wo angel hi thi... She promised she will meet me today...

Maan: I m getting late for office beta... Hum angel ko kal mile..???

Naina made a sad face and said: Please paa bas thodi der aur...

Maan could not see her sad and said "OK I will wait"

Here today geet got late because veer was no where ready to have his breakfast and was throwing tantrums... Geet somehow managed to feed him and they came to school in time... She entered the school gate and told veer "Veer be a good boy ok and Take care.. No badmashi.."

Veer: Haa mumma no badmashi... Saying this he said byee to geet and went towards his classroom...

Naina saw geet coming towards office and her face glowed with happiness and she shouted "Angel... Dekho paa angel aa gayi... I told u na she promised me to meet today.." She ran towards geet leaving maan's hand... Maan was shocked to see geet there... Indeed she was Angel like naina said...

Here geet got startled when naina ran towards her and hugged her legs.. Geet also hugged her and made lil distance between them... Geet sat on her knees and said "Naina aise bhagte nahi hai beta.. Gir jaate toh.."

Naina: Aap ho na Angel toh mein kaise girti... Aap mujhe bacha lete na jaise kal bachaya tha...

Geet was spell bounded by the trust naina showed on her... She could not understand why this lil child was showing so much trust on her... Naina was making special place in geet's heart now... Geet kissed her both cheeks and hugged her...

Geet: Haa baby I m there for you... But why u came running like this naina...

Naina slapped her own forehead at that and said " Off ho mein toh bhul hi gayi... Angel aapse milne koi aaya hai... Chalo mere saath.."

Geet smiled at her antics.. Naina dragged geet where maan was standing... Geet was shocked to see Maan there... Both were looking at each other... Different emotions passing through their eyes.. which both could understand well after all they knew each other through one person.. Piya...

Naina: Paa dekho ye hai angel.. Ab aap bhi dekho yahi hai na humari angel...

Maan and geet broke their eye contact listening to naina... Both felt awkward to the situation... No one know what to say... It was naina again..

Naina: Angel ye mere papa hai.. Aap toh jaante ho inhe...

Geet: Ummm Naina it's class time why don't u go to ur class beta...

Naina: Ok Angel.. Byee.. Byee paa...

Maan said byee to naina and naina left for her class... There was again silence between maan and geet...

Geet: How are u Maan..?? How is Piya...???

Maan knew this was to come when naina mentioned about angel... He was scared to answer this question because he knew what piya was for geet and vice versa... but he had too...

Maan: I m fine geet... Tum batao kaisi ho and kaha chali gayi thi geet.. Piya was so much worried about you when u left without meeting or saying anything to her...

Geet: I know maan I m at fault.. But life make us change so much.. I had to leave... I could not face piya because I knew she will be shattered after knowing what I went through... She knew me soo well maan... Anyways Piya kaise hai tumne bataya nahi... Usko bhi toh saath laate... Naina is so like her maan... Tabhi mujhe wo apnepan ka ehsaas dila rahi thi... Geet smiled at that...

Maan: Geet Piya... Wo piya..

Geet got scared by his low and shivering voice...

Geet: Maan bolo na piya kaisi hai kaha hai...???

Maan: Geet piya is no more... She died 4 years ago after u left without saying anything.. I had no contact num to contact u... and in my sorrow I forgot to search u which piya was doing...

Geet was first shocked at the statement maan made... She nodded in no saying "aisa nahi ho sakta... Piya.. Piya mujhe chod ke nahi jaa sakti..." She was crying by now... Maan immediately went to her side and side hugged her...

Geet : U r lying maan... Meri piya ko kuch nahi ho sakta.. Bolo na she is fine maan... Bolo maan wo thik hai na...

Maan: Geet it's true... Piya left this world.. Piya left me with naina... Ur piya left u geet... maan's voice also cracked while saying this..

Geet: Maan ye sab.. Before she could say anything the bell rang making them aware of the surrounding and where they were...

Maan: Geet sambhalo apne aap ko... I will see u in afternoon after school gets over... I will tell you everything and I too need my answers geet...

Geet: Naina maan.. piya naina ko... she is piya's daughter.. Mere Piya ki.. That's why she called me Angel... But how maan.. Piya toh hai nahi toh naina ko kaise pata mere bare main... She again had tears in her eyes...

Maan: Geet I will answer ur all questions in afternoon.. Now I have to go.. and I guess u work here so u also need to go... See u in afternoon...

Geet: Hmm.. U r right... See u in afternoon.. Byee maan...

Both went to their respective work thinking about each other... Most shattered was geet... She thought of Naina... She was like how life can be so cruel towards someone... How can god make suffer naina by taking her mother... She was reminded of her days with piya... Piya was her childhood friend... Geet had saved piya from some children who were teasing her and from that day Piya always called her Angel... They were inseparable... though geet was an orphan but she was bright student so was studying in best school on scholarship.. Even they took same course in college so that they could be together... Piya was like family for geet... Her only family... They even use to say that they will marry in the house where there are 2 brothers so that they will be together forever... Geet had a smile remembering all that memories... Then she remembered the time when they both fell in love and were sad that they can't stay together... But were happy for each other... They were in contact with each other until their fate took u turn and snatched everything... She never knew that she will not be able to see her best friend when she left everything because of Abir... She now hated abir more... She was waiting for periods to get over fast... She wanted to meet maan and ask him so many questions about piya and naina..

Maan was no less... He was waiting for afternoon to meet geet... Angel of his Piya... Maan was reminded of his starting days with piya where he use to get Jealouse of geet whenever piya talked about her... He use to get irrirate with geet puran of piya... Finally when they confessed their love to each other piya had introduced him to geet where geet had intorogetted him like a Father of piya threatening him that if he ever hurted piya she would make his life living hell... Maan smiled at that memory... She was indeed Angel for them as because of her piya and he got married... She was the one to convince Piya's parents about their love... She was soo bubbly and lively but the geet he saw today was someone else... She was not the geet he had known from piya... What could have happened in this 4 years...?? One thing was sure this 4 years have changed their lives... He was now waiting for time to pass immedialty so that he can meet geet...

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How many of u thought piya and geet look same..??

How many of u thought maaneet are clg friends..??

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Edited by mishtiritu - 8 years ago
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Lo Ritu...aa gayi main😛😛
OMG
angel ke naam se Maan ko 440 watt ka jhatka laga..
he is actually scared of Angel..bechara Piya se apna darr bhi share kiya...
It's very clear now that maan and geet are known to each other and maan had shown the pic of geet to Naina saying that she was angel.. and now naina has seen..
Maan is now concerned about geet.. he is sacred of her reaction after knowing about priya's demise...

there geet's parents are asking her to think about marriage but she has lost her faith in love afater Abir betrayed her

But the logic gaurav gave her forced geet to think about it.. Veer needs a family..and father too..
Veer is little spoiled kid.. as he disturbed geet in her sleep..
Finally Maan and geet meet.. they both are shocked to see each other after along time...and geet got the worst shock of her life when Maan told her about piya.. She was not ready to believe him but she had too..
Both went to their work after making a promise to meet again.. and then we knew about their past...thank God..In past there were no Maan and geet involved..It was piya who was in love with maan and geet with abir..

ab Maan ke saath saath mujhe bhi intezaar hai dono ke milne ka... jaldi se dena update😃
Edited by Rashmi... - 8 years ago
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Superb update
Maan thinking of angel... He was scared to meet her
Geet n piya were friends n maan was jealous of as piya used to do geet puraan... Geet was the one to convince piya's parents for their marriage... Geet was in love with abhir
Geet felt something after meeting naina as if she had some connection
Veer masti khor bacha hai... Her in laws wanted her to move on in life as Veer needs a father figure... Geet has lost trust on love
Maaneet shocked to see each other
Eagerly waiting for their meeting
Edited by -padmarao- - 8 years ago
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Roller coaster of lives ...destiny played crucked role with their lives...andheri raat ke baad bhor sunhari hoti hai ...uski dastak unki zindagi Mein aa chuki hai ...continue soon

Edited by hermosoanu123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
great update
so maan n geet knows each other but after 4 years they meet different persons altogether

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Posted: 8 years ago
nice ud
maan was thinking about geet piya gave this name to hr
but y she left piya wen she consider piya hr only family
veer dadu try to convince geet to get marry
maan met hr and both have lot of questions in their mind
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
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wow lovely emotional update.. te way geet's parents wants her to settled in her life but her past not allowing her was lovely emotional..te way my maan ki eagre to see his daughter's angel and te way shocked to see geet and geet to shock to see my maan and more startled wen she came to know abt piya her best friend was lovely emotional..i love te update yar
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Wow interesting update. So Maan and Geet know each other. cant wait to read more.

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