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Hello guys! I m nt new here as m reading on this forum for d last 2 yrs! Yeah, I m an unnoticed one,, as I have always been a silent reader! Finally reading around a hundred of concepts on our beloved MG, I finally decided to give try to a concept of mine!

I just request you all fr an honest opinion on my work! Even if it is abusive!
Before starting it i have checked the forum thoroughly once, and I haven't find any ffs regarding my concept! It is entirely my idea with some tracks from Zoya Akthar's Dil Dhadakne Do!
M really sry for any of d scenes if it matches with any of ur works.

Wish me luck!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Character Sketch

Raj and Naina Khurana
Savitri Devi Khurana
Vicky/ Vickrant Khurana
Mohinder and Rano Handa
Kulbhushan Handa
Maan Singh Khurana
Geet Handa

Samaya: Maan's Gf Pari Rathod
Meera Gupta
Yash Malhotra

Extra characters will b added accordingly
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Congo dear...
All the best


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DO UPDATE SOON
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Index

Character sketch:pg 1
Part 1 : Pg 1
Part 2 : Pg 3
Part 3:pg 6
part 4: Pg 7

Part 5: Pg 11
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Chapter 1

Delhi:

Khurana Mansion

Early morning were always busy at KM! Servants bust with their respective chores wih the mistress of d house Naina Singh Khurana instructing them. Where as Savitri Devi was busy reading newspaper in the beautiful hall room.

Naina: Ma, have u taken ur meds? Asked a concerned DIL to Savitri Devi. In reply to which dadima simply nods. Seeing her MIL busy in reading she asked d servants to call other members of the family fr breakfast.

Moments later Raj Khurana joins them ready in their office attire.

Raj: Haven't Vicky gotten up yet? To which his wife simply avoids him n gets busy serving breakfast asking a servant to call Vicky.

Dadima,sitting on d head of d table simply shakes her head seeing the cold war b/w her not so young son n DIL.
Dadima: Wait fr a moment Naina, Handas would b joining shortly. I have called Rano early morning to join us fr bf,so they might b a bit late.

There's no need to wait dadima. Came a cheerful voice from the entrance. Turning their heads towards the voice, they found Handas at d door step.

Smiling n exchanging a set of good mornings to every one Geet huged dadima,who fondly huged her back caressing her hairs. As everyone sat at their places, Geet noted d absence of Vicky n left to his room to wake him up.
Whereas everyone got busy in ifferebt talks.

Reaching the hallway of first floor, Geet found a nakul,the head n loyal buttler of Khurana's knocking Vicky's room door,calling him. That was the other thing his calls went unreplyed. Asking nakul to return back to d dining hall, Geet entered Vicky's room or better called store room.

It was nothing new fr anyone who know Vicky to kno his room is NEVER clean. Walking to bed, she shook Vicky asking him to wake up to which he didn't buzzed.
Throughly annoyed by his behaviour, Geet simply kicked him off d bed, waking him up at once.
Ahh,, Vicky screemed rubing his butt.

There was only one reason Vicky regreted waking up late every morning that were geet's wild and insensitive ways of waking him up! Sometimes kicking him off his on bed, drenching him with cold water in winter season n hot water in summers or d worst of all bring his dad up to his room to force him have an early morning lecture on his lazy habbits ruining his entire mornings!
So much Vicky wanna crib to someone regarding Geet's ways with him But Vicky knew no one literally no one at KM would scold her or oppose her in Khurana household! Not even her own parents. Coz if they did his very own dadima and strict father would literally take their class. Let alone others, he himself would stand against anyone who would hurt his jerry. Yeah, that's what the relationship they shared tom n jerry! They were like "cant tolerate each other,nor could stay away" something that completely define them.

God!! Why the hell nights end so soon!! I hate early mornings!!Vicky groaned.

Yeah, ur right Vicky, see the early morning outside. I guess bade papa(raj khurana) have been up very early today, see its just 9:15 in d morning. Geet said sarcastically throwing d alarm clock at him.

Vicky's eyes widen n he quickly rushed towards his wardrobe getting ready fr d day. Geet rolled her eyes n left downstairs.

Climbing down d stairs she found her parents busy with business talks and she silently took her seat.
Throughout the conversation dadima has been noticing the cold war b/w both d couples, to which she sighed. Rano n Naina both were talking to each other and dadima completely avoiding their respective husbands discussing abt their nxt week trip to Jaipur regarding the Light Foundations which was run by Handa n Khurana group togetherly.

As Geet joined they asked her abt Vicky to which geet made an excuse that he was almost ready. N winked at dadima.
As Vicky joined everyone in record time of 15 mins everyone started their bfs.

Couple of mins later the phn of d hallroom buzzed n nakul answered.

Nakul: Bhabiji it's Maan beta's call. He adressed Naina.

As Naina attended d call with a big smile on her face, everyone guessed for a good news.
Joining them back she told them about Maan's return after 3 weeks, to which everyone rejoiced n Vicky n Geet gulped though happy. They know once Maan is back he's gonna b d biggest pain to them.

Completing their bf Raj n Mohinder left to Khurana head office and Handa textiles resp. Whereas women got busy about upcoming Jaipur charity event. And Vicky n Geet left to Khurana constructions and Handa D'cors resp.

Khuranas n Handas are frnds from 3 generations. Savitri Devi n Savita Devi,Geet's dadima have been cousin sister had their husbands Ranjeet Khurana and Daljeet Handa were bffs. Their frndshp has been carried forward by their sons n DIL's n now their grandchildrens.

Handas n Khuranas were popular in Delhi bcoz of their huge bussiness empires which made them finest business houses in d country and their frndshp.

London

Khurana Villa

Maan Singh Khurana have been living in London for d Last 3 yrs. He came here fr completing his MBA. Then taken over Khurana Construction in London. It has been 3 years since he last visited India. Even thou his families have been visiting him once in while.(guys families include both handas n khuranas). As he expressed his his wish to his dad in d last conversation to permanently settel in London, dadima was strictly against it. Emotionally blackmailing him, to want her whole family with her in India in her old age. She asked him to take time but at d end she wants him home. N as usual he couldn't deny!
Maan loved his parents n dadima very much,n he knew this time they were right. His parents have given him freedom to pursue his dreams at his own conditions n hence he respected their wish.

Finally decided he called his mom in d morning telling about him coming back home as soon as completing his major project here. He knew it was time fr him to b back home!

He wondered how r they gonna react knowing abt Samaya.

Picking up his cell t he informed samaya abt his plans.

Samaya was a leading top model in London n was Indian. They were dating since 1n half years. He wont say he loved her, but they were happy n compatible together. Samaya was an independent model, someone who could stand beside him. He never bothered abt love as he believed in practical life there no such thing existed.

Abc studio, London

Sanaya was shooting fr her upcoming consignment when she got maan's call. Knowing abt his plans of shifting to India, she was okay! Samaya have never been in relationship earlier as she was a successful model but her mother, Ira have asked her to secure a future, as in modelling industry nothing was permanent except change.
Finally Coming across MSK in a party, she decided to give it a try. MSK was everything she could ask for Handsome, successful, heir to one of largest bussiness house in India. A complete package! N he didn't believe in love !! Chery on top! After a few weeks of frndshp they started dating! Even if she failed in d industry, she knew she would never b doomed.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice story yaar
Detail comment later yaar
Gotta go
Best wishes
For you
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good luck! I hope writing gives you as much fun as it does me 😃
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Hi congrats on the story! fab cs! nice concept! superb update! Handas n Khuranas friends! Maan in a relationship with Sanaya! Bt she seems 2 b js using Maan! update soon! do add me 2 ur pm list!
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so sanaya want maan to secure her future i hope maan realize that sanaya is using him ..i hope khurana will not accept sanaya ..maan should marry geet

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