new ss- You are my light part 4c updated - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

38

Views

3.3k

Users

11

Likes

125

Frequent Posters

hira2010 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Nice update
Little bit sad .
But it's ok
Pyar mein imtehan Tob HOTA Hai
Hope they meet
snehapriya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Oh no Maan has slept and Geet is coming to see him thinking he is throwing tantrums to get treated.
purrple_orchids thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#23
My sincere apologies for d delay my dear readers...Here is d next part
Part 3:
Geet met Adi at d entrance...Adi led her to maan..But he warned her that khurana family will b dere in approx 1hr...So she shud leave be4 dey enter...Else dey vl humiliate her n maan vl nt tolerate dat...

**************

Dev sat in his room, reflecting over his actions in his recent past...He loved dadi n maan as his own...Dats y he asked geet to leave...N he even asked for her forgiveness...N now ...All his past is clear... Geet is gone...Now no one will bring up his past in front of him..N he promised himself dat he wud never do anything wrong in future...Maan n Dadi wud forget geet in a few days...He vl convince NT to leave KM n KC alone n start Deir own venture...He vl make a fresh start tomorrow...Waiting to see whether Nt vl support him in his new challenging lifestyle or will she prefer to be the decked up khurana bahu...Her decision vl decide d course of his marriage..Whether he vl start afresh wid NT or leave her forever.
With dese thoughts, he drifted into a troubled sleep...

*************


Geet came out of Maan's room to meet Adi's expectant eyes...She just gave him a small smile n asked him to propose pinky soon...Adi blushed being caught red handed...Geet thanked him profusely for letting her meet maan...Adi tried to enquire wat maan said...But geet just asked him to inform his family ..If it's nt been done already.
Adi suspected geet's behaviour but she left be4 he cud ask anything...Scratching his forehead...He called up pinky...N asked her to either stop geet or find out where geet is going to...

*****************

NT sat on the bed wid a thud. N of course, her forehead in her hands...She cud nt believe wat all dev had told her..Dat man had d guts to separate her from d khurana property by his love! But then...Wat did she actually want - dev or the property? N who shud she actually choose?? Her thoughts went to d time wen she met dev for d 1st tym...It was love at 1st sight for her...Den d status , money, game did nt matter...But later she got involved in her mother's high society kitty parties, such things gained so much importance in her life dat love took a backseat...
N today she was forced to question herself, choose b/w riches n her self respect I.e. b/w property n dev...N as she thought bout her self respect...Her decision to stand for her love became easier...She was actually changed in Dev's love!!!!N surprisingly ..She was loving it...

************
I know it's a short update...But lots more to come in d next update...Thanks for reading n liking my work.


Edited by purrple_orchids - 8 years ago
purrple_orchids thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Sorry ppl had to rush...Vl continue dis part later...
khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 8 years ago
#25
thanks 4 da double fab updates! well written! Feeling 4 Maaneet! Hate NT! Dev feels guilty! Geet goes 2 meet Maan! update soon
hira2010 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Awesome update waiting for next please continue soon
purrple_orchids thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Thank u all for ur comments n bearing wid me for being so late...Will b updating soon
purrple_orchids thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Hello ppl,
I'm back wid d next part

Part 4(a)

Geet entered pinky's home to meet a troubled father daughter duo.Pinky immediately started wid her questions, but geet just said dat she met up wid maan, apologized to him n now she's leaving the city for a few days till d media sobers down...Pinky excitedly asked her to stay wid Dem as underground which will b equal to leaving d city.

But try as she might, Geet was adamant to leave. She got her bag from pinky's room n started leaving d house after bidding d duo a teary goodbye... Perplexed pinky was reminded of Adi's words n took a promise from geet to call her up at least twice a month. N send dem photos of d baby.

**********

NT entered her maiden home in Jaipur. Her family was pleased to see her . After exchanging pleasantries, Nt excused herself saying she was tired. She immediately went to her room n bolted d door. Den she started searching her cupboards.

***********

Geet was preparing food at d gurdwara. She had decided to stay here for sometime till she decides her future track. She knew she has to leave d city before maan gains his conciousness, else all hell wud break loose. D thought of maan lying in d hospital all bandaged bcoz of her brought a fresh trail of tears in her eyes. She quickly wiped Dem off wid her dupatta & exited d kitchen as she heard footsteps round d corner.
"Suno beti!" Geet turned to see a tall fair man in his early 50's, dressed in formals.
"Aaj ka Khana bahut acha bana Hai. Mujhe mere maa ke hath ke khane ki yaad aa gyi. Babaji tumpar apni meher hamesha banaye rakhein.tumhara naam kya Hai."
Geet's hands reflexly went to her tummy.she did not want to take her real name as she feared day NT might still be after her, so she said" Geetika Singh"
D man was intelligent n cud understand her condition as he saw her hands on her tummy. He further blessed her n her baby n gave her his daughter's visiting card. She was running an NGO for single women in Mumbai. Geet looked up to him gratefully n he said-" mujhe nhi pata ki Tum kis musibat me ho, tumhe Meri beti ki zarurat hai bhi ya nhi, par Meri beti ko tum jaise logon ki, Jo sacche Seva bhav se kaam krte hain...Bahut zarurat Hai. Agar uchit samjho to uske pass ja Sakti ho."
D man went away, giving geet a ray of hope-
Aisa q hota Hai maan, ki jab bhi aapka khayal aata Hai, babaji mere liye roshni ki 1nai Kiran bhej dete hain.thank you babaji!!

**********

To be continued


Edited by purrple_orchids - 8 years ago
purrple_orchids thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Part 4(b)
NT sat on her bed softly caressing d blue folder containing her documents. Her thoughts ver drawn to the time when she was so excited to study, enter college, work hard on d road to success n prove her mettle to her royal family. But her mother's company had defeated her. Instead of encouraging books, her mother encouraged looks...Family instead of career. For her a girl had to just marry a rich guy, love him n survive on his resources...NT had found it strange, but abided by her mother's words. N slowly she lost herself n her dreams. N now looking at d folder, she was rejuvenated to strive for her dreams all thanks to dev...
On an impulse she called him n simply said- thank you dev! I just realised I fell in love wid u all over again.

***********

Geet entered d train which was to take her to Mumbai. She had talked wid d old man's daughter, explaining her homelessness n willingness to work. Meera Roy- owner of the NGO n d old man's daughter was more Dan glad to help geet. Hence she had explained d address n also sent a car to receive her from d station , as her father had described geet in gr8 detail to her(including her pregnancy) n extracted a promise from her to help out geet however possible.
Geet looked out of the window. Unknowingly her eyes were filled wid tears to think of d fact dat she may never get to see maan again...

************

Dev cut the call after talking to nt n walked to d open window. As d cool breeze touched his face he was reminded of his conversation wid dadi a few hours ago.
Dev has told Dad dat he has decided to take his life seriously. He n nt wanted to settle in a different city n start dere own business. dev promised to call daima from dere n ask her to stay wid him once d business starts flourishing. Dadi had initially takes a gud look at him from head to toe...Unable to believe dat her flirty careless grandson can ever get serious. After much promises n cajoling from dev...She finally agreed n blessed him fom d same.
Dev's thoughts were interrupted by his phone ringing...He picked up to learn dat maan had regained consciousness. He immediately left for d hospital.


***********

Hello, part 4c to be updated by tomorrow. I know all of u r waiting for maan to wake up n his take on d whole scenario...But I guess his pov needs a separate part...So his re entry in part 4c ..Till den enjoy d previous parts.
aparna3011 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
#30
congrats for new story
interesting story
read all part

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

MG-inayaat ya ibadaat/part 28/29/30-pg87/88/90- 30 aug

Hello everyone i know i already written many stories whi complete nhi ho paa rhi hai and i start one more actually, i written this for OS...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

1 years ago

FATE 3 Updated P 46 on Pg 76 / 7-9-2025

Introduction Small os or ss not decided yet... might be dependent on the response 🤔 I am not sure.

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

Tera Hone Laga Hoon #2 Chapter 74 pg 46 Updated 28/07 Tera Hone Laga Hoon #2 Chapter 74 pg 46 Updated 28/07

Chapter 52 Sameera watched as Maan arrived at her house. He hadn’t visited for a couple of days and Aavya had started asking when her new friend...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Dragon-Heart

2 years ago

Kismat Connection 4 Updated Part 24 on PG 46 / 29-6-2025

INTRODUCTION A new season of this fiction. It's not an FF it's an ss

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

2 years ago

BROKEN HEARTS 2 Updated P 41 on Pg 86 / 24-8-2025

INTRODUCTION NEW SS FOR MY READERS. FIRST SEASON WAS ORIGINALLY WRITTEN ON MY PAGE. BUT THIS ONE I STARTS HERE. LET'S SEE HOW MUCH YOU...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".