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hira2010

@hira2010

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Awesome update
So geet Walk out
Maan met with accident

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Always wished to see Geet standing on her own leg to save her baby. Still cant see Maaneet away from each other. Waiting for 2nd part.

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REDWINE

@Grey-licious

Stunner

+ 17

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: purrple_orchids
Background:
This story is a continuation of the series from the point where geet walks out of the engagement after realising that maan n dev r brothers. The important change in my story is the character of Meera...In this story, Meera has not entered Deb's life...Dev has realised his mistakes on his own.. he has asked forgiveness from geet n requested her nt to punish maan for his mistakes by marrying him.
In the series it is shown that maan has always been a protective shield for geet..
In this story I'm exploring maaneet separation plus Geet's journey through motherhood without Maan's protection...Maan vl be there mentally but not physically...
Both maaneet vl b each other's shining star, guiding them in d path of life,i.e. channa mereya meaning the shining star..
This story is not based on the song...But on the meaning of channa mereya...
& It vl have a happy ending...Coz I believe in happily ever after...Sadness dekhne le liye newspapers n news reports hain.

@Bold

Channa mereya is a Punjabi words

And it means my moon not shining star

Channa means moon and mereya obviously mine

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Awesome start. Stories based on GHSP are my favourite. Looking forward for more updates.

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purrple_orchids

@purrple_orchids

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: CuteStrawberry

@Bold
Channa mereya is a Punjabi words

And it means my moon not shining star

Channa means moon and mereya obviously mine

thank u for d info..actually wherevr i read d translation of the song it was mentioned as d shining star...n dat song was precisely my inspiration for dis story...anyways wid ur correction ill rename the story as soon as infind a suitable title for it. thanks once again

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

hi lovely update! well written! Geet leaves n Maan met in an accident! update soon

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purrple_orchids

@purrple_orchids

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: snehapriya
Always wished to see Geet standing on her own leg to save her baby. Still cant see Maaneet away from each other. Waiting for 2nd part.

I also wanted to c geet carving a niche for herself in d society on her own...My story tends to explore dat only

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purrple_orchids

@purrple_orchids

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi lovely update! well written! Geet leaves n Maan met in an accident! update soon

thank u...Ur comments mean a lot to me

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

amazing update

oh no hope maan is okay

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purrple_orchids

@purrple_orchids

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Part 2:

Here geet entered d dargah with her lips praying for maan...After offering her prayers she sat down in a dark corner, oblivious to anybody's presence, n continued d reflection on her life...

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Though the accident was severe but maan was able to steer d car away, as such d collision was sideways..Maan though hurt on the forehead n a few cuts here n dere was unscathed. N as he sat in d car composing his jittery nerves, his mind started forming a plan to get geet back.

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It had been quite sumtime since geet had been sitting dere, but her mind was blocked wid maan...However hard she tried...Her every thought culminated to maan. She thought of d grief of her parents wen she was punished by darji...N she saw maan n dadima standing in Deir place after punishing dev...N den she thought of dev...Wat cud b done now...Dev had already confessed his crimes n asked for forgiveness wid a vow never to repeat such a thing in his life...Wat more did geet want...Was putting dev behind d bars a solution...N consequent bad mouthing of maan n dadima 's morals? She cud nt do it...But she knew dat once maan gets to know bout Dev's deeds...He won't rest till he puts Devtara behind bars...N will geet b able to spend her entire life wid him...Hiding Dev's deeds from him?? Again no..She cudnt...

Her chain of thoughts was broken by a ray of light dat fell on her from d strained window...Geet got up n looked outside...It was around 5am...D 1st rays of sun Ver kissing d earth..N it seemed to her as if it was maan beckoning her through d rays...To rise n shine..She got up n decided to get into action.

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Maan sat back in his car n waited for d drama to begin...

Adi had been instructed to inform everybody dat maan went missing while finding geet...N now he wud inform everyone about his accident in sumtime...Maan was sure dat hearing d news of his accident ...Geet will come running to him..Though his family cud pose a prob...So he deliberately asked Adi to skip informing dem till further orders...

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Geet called up pinky n asked her whether she cud visit her for sumtime...Pinky agreed but was tensed...Her home was near d dargah.so geet reached shortly...A short while later both of dem Ver settled in pinky's room...Wen pinky hesitantly mentioned maan going missing...Geet was shocked. She instantly got up n started going out to look for him...Just den Adi called up pinky telling her to give d phone to geet

Geet- Adi sir!!! Maan ko kya hua?? Kese hain vo?? Babaji main keh rhi hu...Maan ko Kuch bhi hua to musse Bura koi nhi hoga...Haan!!! Meri aur Apki Katti ho jaegi...

Adi- Geet! Apne babaji ko baad me disturb krna. Pehle meri baat dhyan se Suno. Maan sir ke Sir par gehri chot hai. N vo zid pakde baithe hain ki jab tak tum nhi aaogi vo treatment nhi karaenge...Geet already bht khoon beh chuka hai...Tum plz jaldi as jao..

Geet- Lekin sir dadima n NT??

Adi- Geet main Janta Hun Sab Kuch..Isliye maan sir ne kaha hai ki jab tak tum nhi aaogi unki family ko bhi inform nhi kiya jaega...Vo painkiller byi nhi le rhe hain...Geet plz...Maan sir ki ye halat nhi Dekhi ja rhi... Hospital paas me hi hai...

Jaldi aa jao...

Geet- main abhi ayi...

Adi cut d call... N looked up at maan who was asleep...

Adi- sir vo as rhi hai...Sir...Sir...!! Geet as rhi hai..

But maan continued sleeping . Adi thought dat maybe maan had already started his acting of being seriously hurt...

Little did he know dat d doctors Ver over convinced wid his n Maan's acting...So had injected him wid a sedative to lower his pain n tantrums...

To be continued...

Edited by purrple_orchids - 8 years ago