Cumber's rampant rantings

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MrsBenedict

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello people. I m here with something .I hope you will enjoy .I won't call this a Drabble because it extends over 100 words. Constructive criticism is always welcome!

The world around me puts on the cloak to elude the mirror reflections . The cloak resembles the stage where each one ventures out to pilot their best.

Hypocrisy and diplomacy ace the test, the deceits and lies bag the second place. The True and honest disappoint themselves and fail the test.

I look straight in the mirror and see the reflection of thoughts and doubts leisurely playing games. The cloak strives to make the truth void and negotiable. The coerced refuge in doubts fills me with sinful hope.

"This mirror is just a mirage "the cloak obnoxiously claims

But truth prevails in my heart, which makes me grieve and reflect on the eternal verity that

Maan is no more .

Over to you readers. Like it, hate it Choice is all yours :)

I m going to keep this thread for posting my insane thoughts.

This thread will contain random OS, SS and hopefully drabble.

Edited by MrsBenedict - 8 years ago

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lizzy84

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Posted: 8 years ago

Cumber

What the hell did you watch yesterday?

This piece makes me depressed

You call these things rantings?

I rant about clothes, traffics, people and food

Not mirrors, reflections and cloaks!

It was brilliant though on a very dark side

Post something funny now!

Kidding😆

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

congrats on the thread! superbly written OS

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Twenty1st

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Posted: 8 years ago

ahh a name change, you had me thinking for several seconds before i drew the line between cumberben and MrsBenedict. Shockingly i never even realised the connection between the UN and Benedict Cumberbatch, yes i do have my slow moments😆

Unfortunately not so familiar with his work, though watched a few films including Four Lions (super shocked cant even remember him in it and I watched that like a gazillion time). His known for being a togue twister here 😆 although he's from here 😆

anyway to your work, was that deep or what?
wow the whole hyprocisy triumping over honestly was, how do i say it beautifully put together in a dark kind a way 😆 you have a way with words 😊

If only though, if only the mirror projected the inner monsters rather than the outer superficiality
but on the whole, great rambings Cumber

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MrsBenedict

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lizzy84
Cumber
What the hell did you watch yesterday?
This piece makes me depressed
You call these things rantings?
I rant about clothes, traffics, people and food
Not mirrors, reflections and cloaks!
It was brilliant though on a very dark side
Post something funny now!
Kidding😆

Lizzy 🤗

Depressed?

Yes! I did it *wink*

Your rantings are very similar to mine

Rantings like this happen when I read quotes or see dogs and cat fight 😉

Lovee you sista

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MrsBenedict

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
congrats on the thread! superbly written OS

Khwaish,

I can't express in words what it means when you come again and again, with or without pms.

Thank you, for being here once again:)

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MrsBenedict

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DaftGirk
ahh a name change, you had me thinking for several seconds before i drew the line between cumberben and MrsBenedict. Shockingly i never even realised the connection between the UN and Benedict Cumberbatch, yes i do have my slow moments😆

You solved the mystery at Last 😉

Unfortunately not so familiar with his work, though watched a few films including Four Lions (super shocked cant even remember him in it and I watched that like a gazillion time). His known for being a togue twister here 😆 although he's from here 😆

Oh! Try watching Sherlock series once, I guarantee that he will be embedded in you heart ..forever;)

anyway to your work, was that deep or what?
wow the whole hyprocisy triumping over honestly was, how do i say it beautifully put together in a dark kind a way 😆 you have a way with words 😊

Way with words?
I hope not delusional sense of writing 😆

If only though, if only the mirror projected the inner monsters rather than the outer superficiality
but on the whole, great rambings Cumber

Bang on!
You know how to dig the crux out
Thank you for being here
I wasn't expecting people at all
Just glance the title 😉😆

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 8 years ago

sad and emotional..beautifully written..
finally the truth reached to the heart through the confusions, doubts of the mind and that of the delusional hope..
I love the things that tell about the heart and mind..and this is one of them

It also reminded me of one of my favorite stories..