Darkest Desire updated Final Part on page 13 / 4-4-2017

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Mindblowinggg update...
loved it...
Geet is full of herself...
she is pregnant...
and didn't know the name of his child father...
poor Maan...
got taunts by Geet in all time...
now she Desire him...
looking forward for next part...
continue soon...

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Congrats for new story.

Amazing update. Maan is an orphan. Mr. Handa raised him. Geet hates him and humiliates him. After death of Mr. Handa Maan become MD of Handa Industries. He is also getting married to Geet as per Mr. Handa's will. Geet is pregnant with someone else baby. Mr. Handa gave responsibility of Geet and baby to Maan. Geet saw Maan doing gym and get attracted towards him.

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Monikaarora

@Monikaarora

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

congrats for new story dear...its very interesting part ...here maan is orphan and adopted by mr. handa and now he is handling handa business ...and geet is so rude and arrogent .she is pregnent ...she hates maan ...but in last scenes she seems attracted towards him ..lets see what happen next ...

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priyanka26996

@priyanka26996

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

nyc os...update sonn...waiting for the nwxt part...vl geet realize her mistake...vl she be normal...whosr child she is cag...update soon

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Aditi Choudhary

@aditilovesmsk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

wow congratz for new os
nd it was superb
geet is spoilt brat here
she doesn't even know whose baby he is carrying
mr handa made maan the owner nd both married
now geet seeing maan nd meera
nd something stirred in her
waiting for next

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Vidhi24

@Vidhi24

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Loved the update dear... Yaar yeh geet aise kyun hai... She is so rude... And heartless... And why maan is not back answering her... And taking her shit... Hope koi use akkal de... Waiting to read more..

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@Print

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

H hhmmm like your all updates New story awesome mindblowing don't have ability to explain in words the magic in your writings you are my best writer because I like hatred filled stories which would turned into passion and true love and you write my type stories now coming to story geet is heartless and maan angel funny part was when geet see maan in gym now why is she staring him if he is a charity case and maan with meera the jealous geet for some time but she is for not taking maan smiling waiting for update...

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zariya1234

@zariya1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

so geet a rich spoilt brat
and maa a goodie guy
but i have a feeling maan is the father of baby

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Congratulations for new story, its amazing start. It's interesting bcoz geet is devil and maan is angel. Waiting for the Next update

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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#60

very diffrant story geet is vampish type character, i think read some short of vampish geet character in past and maan fall in love with her it has tragedy end, but love this geet, very diffrant, interesting now she attracted towards him and got jealous he is talking to meera and smiling, i think maan should not give heed to her let her burn in fire of jealousy.