One shot: Victory song - Page 2

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

brilliant concept..
loved the wandering like gypsies and no place to call as home..and then that welcome back !
you really have unique concepts and narration style..
for some words I had to take help of the google dictionary though 😆
wonderful one shot..
PS - I was expecting that hope and desire (will/willpower) will make their appearances too..😉

Originally posted by: Commelina

I like your style began!

This was one profound piece and I loved it.

Thank you for writing this.

Originally posted by: Commelina

Also I like the concept of the new story you have started. Going to start reading it soon. Abhi AD is being demanding

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Different but nicely penned.

Originally posted by: cumberben

Hey,

Thank you!

Expectations are like that ,aren't they:p

By unique I hope it's weirdness proof😆

PS- The back story of this OS goes like this

My mother is buying home decor thingies , I am bored as hell

shopkeeper goes on showing stuff, my mom says

' Bhaiya, ye toh thik hai par mein kuch aur thoondh Rahi hoon'

I m like nooo!

She cannot say that after 2.5 hours of literally vandalising the poor shopkeeper's shop.

I sulk for 1 hour more and then she goes on to buy some glittery matka .

Story ends

I sit in the car look at Mom and matka

And the inner weirdo in me pipes

Dude! Let's spout some insane stuff

Puff

OS is hatched 😆

Conclusion

Don't go for shopping with Mom, it's a living breathing hell!

PS - thank you! for telling what more you were expecting .

Your review is pinned 😃

nope writing/concept is not weird...but the relation with the back story seems to be a little bit..😆
the back story is interesting..looking at your concepts, I will not be surprised if you come up with another story on that "Main kuchh aur dhoondh rahi hoon" 😃

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[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oLefr1CWEkl [/YOUTUBE]

Should have posted in the other thread but too lazy to find it 😳

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