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Honeybunch1

@Honeybunch1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

ohhh Anjali is from geetanjali ! Nice
awesome update please continue

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Surprised to know Anjali is Geet. At first I thought Anjali left Maan and later Geet will enter his life. But they are the same person.

What compelled her to leave her marriage. Maan surely loves her irrevocably as we can see how much he is in pain now.

Face off for the first time after marriage. Maan demands some answers. Of course it's his right. But Geet keeping her mouth shut. Maan devastated seeing the changes in her both physically and in behaviour.

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Piyu75

@Piyu75

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Nice concept. Different story. So Maan was going to propose again but his wife left him and now he is devasted. Can't wait to read more

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Shradhapriya

@Shradhapriya

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Its a very complicated story .

Maan loves geet . Geet also loves him but due to something happened in past she is hurt and left him . But then whose the guy in the first part .

Nice story but complicated . I guess i l understand once you go ahead with it

Waiting .

And if you read my comment please clear my doubts

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mani24

@mani24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Woah such an intense update , fills me curiosity to read d nxt . Desperately waiting to read d nxt update

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

I am sure Geet and Maan still love each other, it has to be something really big that Geet had to leave him and go away...that to without explains anything or reasoning it out with him,...I think she is hiding the truth because he is hot headed and she feels he will not be able to hear the truth, she maybe doing it to either protect him or herself or under some duress she has left him...

Thnx...

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

wow lovely emotional update..te way my maan was hurt and shock to see his geet who hurting herself and lost herself..te way my maan wants his answer but his geet is hiding some thing,i know my maaneet fate have played its game..i love te update yar

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mehreen malik

@Lavender4545

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Chapter 2 maan luckily usi bar main pochta a drink ke liye jah geet bartender kam kr rahi hotii hai
Maan us gusa hota hai ke wo sb kuch chor kar ek chote se bar main kam kar rahi hoti hai maan us se ghar chorne ki reson batata ta hai to wo use police main compkain karne ke damki deti hai
Maan jane deta hai use geet chali jati to geet hi anjli asa kya hua ke wo maan ko chor ke chli gai koi both mis understating hai hope ke dono jaldi solve karle .

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vrishtigoel

@vrishtigoel

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Hey interesting prologue and part 1.. I was kinda sure that geet is his wife.. But i m confussed now after reading the first part.. Or is it that geet calls herself as anjali in the bar..
Curiously waiting fr d nxt part

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vrishtigoel

@vrishtigoel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#110

Aww i feel bad fr maan.. Like being helples .. Meeting her and still not able to solve the puzzle.. But i think geet has her reasons too.. Maybe maan loved her but dint make her feel so.. So she is happy away from him in her own small life,,
Excited to find out .. 😊