All it was?||Chapter 3 Pg 16||13th April||

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Krupa

@idunno

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#81

start is good, sounds like married couple facing problem after marriage and had some mu but husband wants to compromise but wife run away, who are they geet and maan as maan called her bee may be nick name yes u kept suspense the name of characters sure will unfold in next chapter,your portrayal of his broken heart,his anger, his frustration sounds so real you portray real feeling of characters in this condition of despair.

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Deepabhargav

@Deepabhargav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Good start to an interesting story,lots of curiosities risen, is geet Anjali changed her identity and is running away from her husband.Gemma is unaware of anjali's past .Looking forward to read this story.

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Deepabhargav

@Deepabhargav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

So Ist confusion sorted ...Anjali and Geet are same.What must be the reason why Geet took the step to walk away without explainations...Geet seemed a timid soul changed due to circumstances.Maan will surely find his way out to find out the real reason.Wondering if the misunderstanding is self created or a concoction of a third person ...

Waiting for the answers

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Interesting. Is geet n anjali same? I mean is she geetanjali?

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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Part 2 superb part
Oh wow my guess is correct so its geet anjali n she is using the short name so no one recognize her n so finally maaneet face off maan is angry that geet left him he is frustered its two yrs now now he saw her in a bar n
Lost wait so much dark cirls maan is shocked to see her like that that she left a
Luxurious life n doing this kind of job he asks the reason from geet wy she left him but she not want to answer her n threatens him to left her others wise call police
Hope the mystry un fold soon wy geet left him wat was the reason well update soon

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deep002

@deep002

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+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Amazing update, feeling bad for maan, he didn't know the reason why his wife left him

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sanum23

@sanum23

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+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#87

so maan found geet and she was shocked seeing him in front of hr maan felt hurt she didn't felt happy to see him

he demanded answered but she said he won't understand hr pov but she told that hr family knows about it

geet threatened maan to get out from hr car or she will call police maan wen realize seriousness in hr voice so he left from car and saw hr going away wat and where their relation went wrong

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

lovely update maan was drowning himself in work maan has been searching for geet for 2 yrs since she left him he loved her immensely but geet didnt cared to tell him why she was leaving maan finally saw her working in a bar he followed her he wanted answers geet who usually lit up seeing maans face was very shocked to see him maan totally drunk finally cornerd her but geet still wouldnt tell him why she left him and maan wouldnt leave her until he has his answers there has to be some very big reason for geet leaving him i think her mom has something to do with it

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Aditi.kesari

@Aditi.kesari

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#89

What happened that they both are not toger

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Pika

@Prettyliars

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#90

chapter1 ...in first half part i was confused who is this girl anjali...why is she working in bar with this drunkard peoples...she got brake and reads her mother message...now again who is jase...her frnd wants hook her with some hot shot but she is dening...someone stalking her and that hot shot left his details but she throw that ...ommmggg i goted she is maan wife and her stalker is maan...