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I don't know whom to cry for maan or geet thats the beauty of ur writing u make us feel for every character you weave. Well aware that one day iam going to fell for Jaslene too but right now I didn't like her for being the woh' factor in their not so happy marriage life. I feel for geet for despite knowing the fact that her husband loves another woman this big hearted lady went to coo him to sleep. Here maan is Vulnerable. Torn between two women ek jo bolti nahi aur Ek sunti nahi and under the wait of unshed tear. He probably had no one who he can share his Grief with till now. Hope he would soon seek solace in geet instead of jasleen ji's diary and disclose tits and bits of his life.
Did jasleen reciprocated him?
Last but not the least what about pasta. Seems like she didn't ate them? Did she kept it in refrigerator?

superb update

Oh my God, this was very painful yet hopeful.

Painful knowing one's husband loves another woman. Hopeful as Geet took an effort to take care of him despite his state and mind. She is somewhere fulfilling her duties of a life partner unknowingly. Isn't that what Indian culture all about? No matter what your situation, you are bound in this wedlock for good and the duties one has towards the spouce?

Could you please update the index also? New readers like me could miss a few chapters otherwise. I missed chapter 48 and discovered it just an hr ago while waiting for your update.

Thanks for your beautiful writing!!

Mera comment phir se kho gaya. Commenting baad mein again with more interpretations...

Just saying it was beautiful...

most beautiful part ever...too much anxiety i was feeling during reading this part...th first portion was breathless but after mentioning jasleen it was just so heavy n painful...will maan remember this night...i thought rain wash away th drunk state...is geet falling or its just an wife duty to look after her hubby...but maan still didn't forget jasleen...so there will b long way to go for maan falling in lv wth geet

Loved how you described the rain in the outside and the feel of water loaded clothes and hair. I could clearly picturize the scene with sound effects of squeaky shoes.

Wonder what was hurting Maan's hand that be was in ain. Or is it just an effect of drinking. Don't know...

To be honest, it hurts to know he is still in love with Jasleen and she is alive, around and successful.

Are Maan and Geet not meant to be together in this story and he will find Jasleen and Geet will end up with Aayush? Just a random possibility and thought and it really hurts though.

Maybe despite their liking of others, they will find love between each other still? Isn't that the crux of arranged marriages? Despite your past and background, you move on and conpromise with what you have? Will they have to compromise after all? Or will love develop eventually? Ouch, this still hurts and can't wait to find out what happens next.

This is kind of a suspense- thriller love story where we don't know what will happen next... hahaha

Awesome update