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Rashmi234

@Rashmi234

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#681

Very nice update

Waiting fr nxt

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Cartoon.Buff

@Cartoon.Buff

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#682

These 2 updates are among my most favorites, for they gave a lot of insight into their thoughts and they progressed from the status quo, albeit passively.

I have come to love that man! No matter how indifferent he appears to be, he is affected and he cares deeply. Finally he has admitted that to himself too. Although, he is unsure of what lies ahead of them, he has come to admire her.

I am not sure of his equation with Jasleen, but the fact that he seeks out her words in times of struggle, to grapple with pain, has me thinking, if theirs was a relationship (if it was one), that of a mentor-mentee. From what I have read of her thus far, she seems like a person who is wise and is looked up to. He must have loved her, but not in a purely romantic way. Also, his thoughts about his heart being crowded, I am guessing it is not just about Jasleen. There is a lot more to him than just her that is keeping him away from Geet.

Also, his answer to Geet's question, as to why he thinks them being intimate is going to make her accept his help, had me fall for him all the more. If this is how he is like when he simply cares for her, I am just wondering how is it going to be like when he actually falls for her.

I understand Geet and her reaction to Maan's words. Had she distrusted him, she would not have shared the room and the bed with him. It was purely a reflex on her part at being caught off guard. Had she distrusted him, she would not have questioned the reason behind his words. Subconsciously, even she cares for him, but I guess she has not accepted that it is more as a wife than a fellow roommate.

Waiting for next. Continue soon please.

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#683

Came across this ff just yesterday and needless to say, i'm hooked!!!

Please continue soon. A very realistic concept

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#684

The Jasleen mystery is intriguing... i wonder what happened there? He seems to be still living in her memories through her journals.

On the other hand, does Ayush loves Geet? Their comfort level is evident and Maan did show some disconfort despite the fact he liked Atush as Adi's brother. Will he now still be ok with Ayush? Will he let Geet continue to meet him? Was he jealous or mad that Geet did not mention about him earlier... they are opening up a little. Maybe he will tell his story of Jasleen and she will mention about her's with Aayush.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#685

Crowd in my heart (I) ---- is part 46...you mistakenly put as part 47.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#686

Part 46 - Crowds in my heart (I)

Good to see what he feels about all this. Good to see his caring for geet and his starting to like her. He was cursing himself for speaking like that in front of her. He started to notice her diff shades and liked her retorting back to him. He missed all this since they fought.

He was with his friends but could not enjoy a bit and all the time he was thinking about geet only... till jasleen came into conversation. He felt pang in his heart listening about her. He was little confused with his feelings when all seeing her pic in phone. First he wanted to see but then refused to see her but still his eyes caught her sight. Seems he loved her but it was hard to get her, reach her. Was it one sided love. Seems like that, how he explained about her that she was hurricane in front of him like drizzle.

I am surprised to see this emotional side of him.

Would like to know more about jasleen.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#687

Part 47 - Piya Basanti

His last dialogue blow me up. Actually I stunned with her question than his answer. Its true that sharing physical intimacy would not change anything bet them. It always should come from heart which they far aware from it.

It means he was ready to give that most intimate part of him to her, but I think it was all of sudden. Its not like that he loves her or he accepted her as his wife since their marriage. I find it little odd. What is in his mind that time? Or it was just moment of fight that it came out of his mouth.

He asked apology for his words and she did not accept it nor rejected it.

Like him she too was worried for his, cared for him. She waited for him to come back home. She made pasta for him in acceptance of his apology and wihsed he eat that. But seems her plans will go in drain. He already bugged with jasleen and little drunk. I scare that he will not give a glance to her and she will be hurt again. Oh...its getting complicated bet them.

Waiting for more.