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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

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Posted: 7 years ago

#671

part 47 n 48...both parts r so amazingly written...both their perspective...current state of mind...just wonderful...

"Since I would've given you the most intimate part of myself, perhaps then you'd not feel uncomfortable sharing my material possessions."
OMG THIS LINE...

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hermosoanu123

@hermosoanu123

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#672

Just spell bound ...to b continued

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#673

update from geet POV...very interesting...she realizes that maan is hurt not angry when he voiced his thoughts...so glad she asked him what that would change and he told her - beautiful line by him here...or rather by you here...and to make peace she makes pasta...but then she is not able to figure why she is not able to take his help...why does she still feel rejected...maybe jasleen has something to do with this???

waiting for you to tie the two chapters together...waiting eagerly to see how maan reacted and his actions after seeing the photo...

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Anjali60

@Anjali60

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#674

part 47

outstanding update..

I am in love with your writing skills.

maan started caring for geet...

but I did not get what he felt after seeing JD's photo.

I actually did not understand last paragraph of this chapter

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#675

very nice update

geet know she hurt maan very badly by her reflex action

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#676

fab update! brilliantly written! loved how you portrayed Geet's turmoil! nice song which describes her mood! she made pasta to apologise 2 Maan and is waiting eagerly 4 him! she hasn't even eaten! update soon

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sgmiss2003

@sgmiss2003

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#677

Superb. Amazing update. Depicts Geet's state of mind so well. She realizes that Maan is hurt. She is worried for him. Enjoyed reading the chapter. Left me craving to read further. Yeh Dil Maange More. Your writing leaves great impact on mind. Hope you update soon. Waiting eagerly.

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vydehi

@vydehi

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#678

Beautiful updates. You depicted Maan's POV and Geet's POV so well. They both are changing.
Geet is definitely falling for her husband. With each update you are making your readers fall for this guy.
Was Jasleen his classmate?
You are an amazing writer. Please don't ever stop writing.

Edited by vydehi - 7 years ago