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Posted: 7 years ago
Honestly this chapter is goals.

How beautifully have you written this girl.

I mean, it should break my heart a little that the hero can never love his wife... Although he had come to care for her.

What did he say, his heart is too crowded.

I know that feeling. Not exactly that feeling but wondering if it is possible to welcome more people in life. I honestly don't think I want more. Whatever I have is enough. Too crowded, yes.

But then you never know right? You never know if the area in itself will increase or if someone else will vacate. Lol.

It is such a sweet thing to see his perspective and I don't believe you when you say you can't write a guy. You wrote one so amazing it made me fall in love with him.

The guy talk is such disgusting yet amusing thing no? Happens often.

What I loved about this chapter is I feel him. And I don't take a stand to judge him or pray for him to be over Jasleen. The man that he is, we know if he loves he loves deeply. We know that much from Dadima's earlier remark and whatever we saw of him ab Tak.

I know getting over someone is tough. Does he want to get over, I don't know. But something it isn't in our hands either.

I was surprised to see this sensitive part of him and it only made me feel stronger for the guy.

You write beautifully my dear girl.

Edited by Veil - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
beautiful part..egarly waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

sun meri rani rani

ban meri rani rani
shahjahan mein tera
tennu mumtaz bana dunga😆


Pata hai, I didn't know which song this was but now as I was listening to songs, I came across this one.😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali60

beautiful part..egarly waiting for next part

Thank you Anjali! Aur yeh kya, abhi updt kiya and already waiting for another one 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
I had a feeling about it. What went wrong is the question.
Phir se ek bawaal sa khada ho gya hai.
So is he going to Seoul?
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update. Gives an insight of Maan's thoughts. I feel Maan is trying genuinely to help Geet. He is analyzing things from Geet's point of view too. So did Maan know Jasleen through work? Curious to read further.
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb update
maan is regrating now after saying those word to geet
and who this jalseen
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for updating! captivating update! superbly written! apt title! Maan out with his friends but cannot stop thinking abt Geet! he is upset she did not trust him! she seems to have unknowingly made a place in his heart! he admires Geet and wonders if he ruined her life! so the guys mention Jasleen! seems like Maan loved Jasleen! update soon
Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice pt
maan recalling time when geet came in his life and her present now affecting him
his friend remind him of jasleen
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting Chapter

Maan is thinking about the words he uttered to Geet and why did he do so yet he has no answer
he knows his Daadi know him well and that's the reason she got him married to Geet he realizes how he has hurt her innocent soul over and over again but now he also realizes that she is his wife he may like her as she is a likable person a fierce person at that and I think this stronger side of Geet is what got Maan's attention
but seems like there has been a Jasleen that probably meant much more to him

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