PYAR KE EHASAS THREAD 3 ,note on page 129 - Page 39

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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for note
Will be waiting for update
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thanks 4 the note! will wait! oh and Happy Belated Birthday! hope u had an amazing day
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Posted: 7 years ago

Previous ~ Part-74


PART-75

Maan completely broked down when he heard

the news...He immedetely went into icu ,holding geet,

shaking her..

No...geet you cannot do like this to me, if you angry on

me , just give the punishment, but do not behave like

this, I promise you I will bear everything but cannot bear

this ,please don't do this to me .please wake up, see ,

Yash see..how she is sleeping tell her to wake up, see she

listens to you,please yash please tell her to wake up, I

cannot live without her


Maan ,yash who could not hold himself ,placed his hands

on his shoulder, he immediately hugged him, as if he want

to hide his pain,


Even yash could not understand how to control maan .

Maan beta what you have done to yourself..hearing dadima

voice ,

Dadima see what happned to geet, she is not listning to my

words, atleast she will listens to you.. ...she never used tell

no to your words..


After adi call Savitri devi and told her situation here, she

immediately gave instructions to adi to make necessary

arrangements for her to come here,yes, how can I leave

maan alone there.

Maan beta..do not lose hope like this, if you break down

like this, who will take care of Vicky, what you will tell

him,

I cannot face him, what I will tell..i separated him from

his mother, and now I because of me she is lying like this,

no..dadima I cannot take this..

Maan beta bhagvan ke uppar bharosa rakho ,Sab tekkh

hojayaga..

Maan was staring at geet who looking like as if she is in

deep sleep ...surrounding with all mahcines...

What ever geet I will never let you go away from

me...you have to come back , itna asnai se haar nahi

manuga , I will fight with your babji,at the same time he

saw priya was coming inside the icu..

Aunty , ..

Priya was surprised when maan came towards her, ...her mind was occupied with geet ,how to save her ...She got shock when she saw maan kneeling down before her..

Aunty I know you hate me...but now I need your help please..

khurana..there is one doctor who could save geet now. He is nuerogon specalist ,if you able to bring him here..Priya, got the glimpse of the maan power when she saw the doctor whom she refered was in hospital with in half hour .

What are you thinking priya, geet ke bare mei...

Ha raam , I never thaught geet belong to a influential family, but I do not know the whether power, or the money will help her out .

Priya why you are talking like this, you never leaves hope , but now why you are behaving like this..

Raam , if everything goes out of our hands, we start believing in God.

Maan was staring at the geet , his hands were on the geet .. doctor words are ringing in his ears,

"Mr.khurana we try our level best to save her, but there is only 10 percent chances in this treatment ,and mircales do happen, so believe in god .

At the same time he saw manasi entering ...the icu ...

Mannu...

uncle mama ko kuch nahi hogana ..uncle the words periced his heart like any thing..even yash became help less seeing maan face,..

mannu...yes uncle..

I want to tell you something...do you believe me...

Iam your dad beta,..will you call me as Dad..

Dad ...no .. you cannot be my dad...

yes beta iam your dad..please call me once ...

He tried to take her into embrace ..

NO..she snapped his hands and ran away from there.

Yash was helpless seeing everything..maan ..just be patient...I know it hurts you..as a child she saw so may times her mother suffereing ,give her some time ..she will definitely comes to you, I will check with her .saying that he left the place.

Geet please come back..muje kuch nahi ho pa raha hai..you see how manasi is hating me..only you can handle her..his hands on her palm...he could sense her finger touching his,

He immediately called doctor..he felt happy when doctor told she is responding to the treatment .

When yash entered he saw manasi in the park near the hospital.



Edited by rsusmita - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Once again sorry friends for not giving the updates...thank you for waiting patiently ...
Once again Anu thank for your lovely wishes which made my day happy,
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update susmi
Geet in coma and maan is out of control
He wants her to come back to him safe
He was hurt when Maansi refused yo call him dad.. And she was right..thankfully Geet responded.. I m sure she will be fine.. Yash is with Maansi.. Will he be able to convince her
Waiting for next.. Update soon

Edited by gorgeousqueen. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update dear
Loved it!!
Maan was devastated with Geet's condition and was feeling restless witnessing Geet's state. He wants Geet back in his life even dadima couldnt control Maan's demeanor . Maan revealed truth and stated Maansi that he is her father. She refused to acknowledge his words after witnessing Geet's pain. Out of blue it's difficult for the small kid to understand and accept the truth. Geet responded and hope she is fine.
Thanks for updating !
Looking forward to the next update
Update soon.
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank u for the update after such a long.
Maan is hurt and not able to see Geet in coma.
Even dadi is there in hospital but couldn't console Maan.
Priya got to know of Maan n his power.
Maansi not ready to accept Maan.
Geet also responding to the treatment.
Waiting for next.
Update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
VERY EMOTIONAL
MAAN IS NOT ABLE TO SEE THAT GEET IS GOING AWAY FROM HIM AS SHE IS IN COMA
MANASI ALSO REFUSE TO ACCEPT HIM AS HER FATHER N RUN AWAY
GEET SHOW SOME IMPROVEMENT N DOCTORS SAY THAT SHE IS RESPONDING TO TREATMENT

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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update but short one..
finally able to say manashi that he is her father
Geet is responding ..Geet reaction when she knows maan know the truth of vicky parents and his redemption. But geet pain and suffering is nothing compared to his redemption

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