BE MY LOVE(SS) Part 4..pg 29.. 7 March 2017

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Mayuvani5

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Posted: 8 years ago

Be My Love (SS)

( Any resemblance of the story line , title is purely non intentional.. please pm me )

Kabhi yaadon mein aaoon
Kabhi khwaabon mein aaoon
Kabhi yaadon mein aaoon
Kabhi khwaabon mein aaoon
Teri palkon ke saaye mein aakar jhilmilaoon
Main wo khushboo nahin jo hawa mein kho jaaoon

He saw her happily getting engaged too her love...

the twinkling in her eyes when they were exchanging rings, he felt if it was him, but he lost the chance...Her memories are enough for him now...she was laughing heartily when her friends cracked jokes...she was feeling shy her love spoke something in her ears...he decided to leave forever giving one last look with tears...

"pyaar kiya isiliye jaane diya...agar zid kiya tho baahoon mein hoti"

( note...the poetry is not mine...😆)

He was brought out of the reverie when he heard the pilot announcing

"Please fasten your sea belts, we are about to land in Zurich, Switzerland"

Character sketch...

Maan singh Khurana...a psychiatrist by profession...

Geet Chopra... wife of Prem Chopra

Prem Chopra...one of the renowed businessman in Switzerland

Aayushi Chopra...5yrs old daughter of Geet and Prem Chopra...

Jia and Arjun Malhotra...elder sister and BIL of prem

Maggie...Nanny at Geet's house...

Will update based on your response...

TEASER PG 3

Part 1 pg5

Note pg 7

part 2 pg 15

Part 3 pg 20

Edited by Mayuvani5 - 8 years ago

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 8 years ago

congrats for new story

very nice prologue

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

Congrats on the new story! superb prologue! lovely cs! update soon

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nishamna

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Posted: 8 years ago

It seems interesting. Waiting for update dear.

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swapna.p

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Posted: 8 years ago

Congrats for new story..

Nice prologue..

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cutical

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Posted: 8 years ago

lovely stroy maan love some one but she going to marry someone else nice cs dear update soon

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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

Congrats on new story so sad prologue poor maan feeling bad he loves geet but had to let her go for her happiness update soon

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Hanishadevi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Emotional prolong... Can't wait to read the story..

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IMA9167

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hai..

Nice prologue

Congo on new story..

Can u pm me the updates...

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Mayuvani5

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Teaser:

"Maggie...Maggiee..where the hell is Geet?" she shouted..."Doesn't she know that its time for breakfast? She should have prepared it by now"

"Madam...She is making Ayushi ready for school" came the reply

"Doesn't she knew Ayushi will be home schooling...she is not allowed to go outside and where the hell is Prem?" angrily she left towards Geet room...

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