BE MY LOVE(SS) Part 4..pg 29.. 7 March 2017 - Page 2

Painful prologue
Poor maan feeling sad for him
Nice cs
Great teaser
Are you going pm for this story if you please do me
Waiting for update

Lovely concept

Congrats for the new story 👏

Originally posted by: SoniyaLovesGc

Painful prologue
Poor maan feeling sad for him
Nice cs
Great teaser
Are you going pm for this story if you please do me
Waiting for update

Originally posted by: shah10

Lovely concept

Nice teaser

Why ahyshi have to home schooling

Originally posted by: -padmarao-

Congrats for the new story 👏

Nice prologue and CS👍🏼

Teaser...Interesting

Very promising concept. Maan lost his love physically but from heart Geet is his only. Looking forward update soon...

Originally posted by: SHRADDHA2102

Very promising concept. Maan lost his love physically but from heart Geet is his only. Looking forward update soon...

Part 1

New character...Rohan...Maan's friend...

Zurich Airport

He came out of the airport clearing customs and Immigration to find his friend Rohan waiting for him.

" Hey Maan, long time... How are you?" he hugged hom.

Maan reciprocated his hug " I am good. How have you been?"

" I am good...why are you here now? Jab mera suhaag raat hone baad, phir bache hone ke baad aajate?" clearly taunting him for coming only a day earlier for his marriage.

" You know Rohan...mera clinic" Maan replied " Haa mujhe pata hain...tumhare clinic...kabhi friends, family ke saat enjoy tho karo" Rohan continued cribbing.

" Chal ghar chalte hain...phir sab baaki baat" rohan said settling the luggage in his car and drove towards their destination.

Chopra's Residence

The morning is calm and serene for all except for one who want to run away from the cage, she has been living ever since her arranged marriage to Prem Chopra.. Her husband married just because she is beautiful. Since she has been facing abuse at the hands of her husband Prem Chopra and sister in law Jia Chopra. Jia is jealous of her beauty and she feels that her hold on business will be lost if Prem and Geet get very close. They doesn't allow her to mingle with outside world. The only time she is allowed outside is when they have to attend any business parties. Her needs are looked by Maggie. Their behavior did not change even after Ayushi was born. Prem doesnot even care for their daughter. She is just treated as another maid in the house. She tried telling the same to her parents, but they dismissed saying her husband has more rights on her. She stopped calling them since then. Why did Prem even married her if he doesn't love her...

She woke up from bed looking at her 5yr daughter sleeping peacefully. The red fingerprints were still fresh on her daughter's cheek which were given by her so called husband, when she just demanded to watch a cartoon show. Wiping her tears, she went to freshen up unknown whats in store for her today.

Dining area:

" Maggie...Maggie, Where's that good for nothing Geet, Jia Malhotra, sister of Prem shouted looking at the empty dining table'

" Madam...she is in her room getting Ayushi ready for the school" a long time maid cum nanny of the Chopra's came running from kitchen.

That was it. Jia could not stand her anger " Doesn't she know Ayushi will be home schooled from today...Better she be ready for the punishment" saying she marched towards Geet room.

Geet's room:

"Mumma...yestelday I learned a new poem" ayushi said in her babyish tone.

" What's that my pari..." replied Geet with a sweet smile...

"chubby cheeks, dimple chin, losy lips..." she was singing in her ever sweet voice, when she pulled forcefully by Jia...

"Did'nt I tell you Geet, she will be home schooling today?" shouted Jia...

" Please bhabhi...let her go...please..." pleaded Geet tearfully...

" bhabhi nahi...call me as madam...madam understood..." Jia spat on Geet's face...

" Please Madam...she loves going to school..." she pleaded again...

" Let her go?...ok then...accept the condition...that we told you yesterday...simple"

"Please...I cannot do that..." Geet said...

" then she will be home schooled...think of your decision Geet...later the little privilege of having home school will be taken of if you are not going to become Mistress...you know it will benefit our company.. that person is ready to pay huge amount, our company will be saved from bankruptcy..." saying she left leaving a distraught woman in tears...

Back at Rohan's place...

Maan met with Rohan parents and they all had a gala time...

" Sunna hain you are going to get engaged Maan." Rohan' mother asked while they were having lunch...

" Yes Aunty" he said with a sad smile...

Later Rohan came to Maan's room to find him lost in thoughts...

" Maan..." he called...

" you need any any help Rohan...waise how did your bachelor's party go..?" Maan asked him with a teasing smile...

" mera baat chodo...you did not still forget her right?" Rohan asked

" How can I forget her Rohan...mere dil ke har khone pe Geet ka naam likha hua hain...Now she is married...life has to move on Rohan...But Geet will always be my first and last love in this life..."

" CHal..we will roam outside" Rohan pulled him to make his mood good...

Back at Chopra's residence:

Night;

Jia was waiting for Prem to come...It was almost 9 when he came...

Prem came home to find his sister pacing in the living room...

" Hey sis...whats up?" Prem distracted her...

" Kya ...whats up...Prem...That Geet still did not accept our condition...if she doesn't do that...we will be bankrupt...loss will be in millions...Mr.Ahuja just need her for one night..." Jia replied...

" Not one night sis...for whole life... they are going to give us double the money..." Prem smirked...

" Reallly" Jia exclaimed...

" Yes...on a condition that we should not be in touch with Geet...That little kid will also be leaving..."

" Will Geet accept this...?"

" Oh...come on..sis...I will take care of that"... saying he marched towards Geet's room

Part 2...based on your response...if there are no readers will shift to blog...

Ignore any mistakes...

Will update A fight for my daughter next...😛

Omg it is shocking part. Maan sacrificed his love so that geet can stay happy but unknown to him, she is being tortured by her in laws. How disgusting man is this prem. How could he sell geet for money. Disgusting people. He even doesn't care of his own daughter. Waiting for next dear.