MG FF: Someone Like You THREAD #3 - Page 11

Ohh yaar..dadima...nooo plz..u know , I culdnt stop my tears...y did u do this...i loved her so much..it felt I lost my grandmother again...as if I was living with her through this ff...

Nice update dear Mann lost his daddimaa his strength but why you did it dear

oh god dadima left the world.. i guess somewhere she knew she is going .. but it was heart wrenching to see maan breaking down.. the memories of the past.. maan was always known as tough but dadi ma was his weak point.. oh no he stopped talking to all after dadima passed away...

i felt sorry for geet, having lost both her parents she had no one to turn too.. will maan know her pain

I was so engrossed in the update
Getting late to my work
Loved it

Nice update

This part made me cry. Maan is raised by his grand mother. She is the one who tought her many thing and when he was going on wrong path, she was the one who stopped him. Maan had been staying with dadi for a week. N finally she died but before dying she asked maan to let her go if time comes. Maan performed all rituals but didn't cry for once. He was silent and closed himself in dadi's room. Geet was also hurt and complained her kanha. Finally geet talked with maan. She was here to console him but maan denied to take but when she said she has also lost her parents and there is no one for her to look her made maan stunned for a moment. I am feeling really bad thinking now there would not be dadi anymore in further parts. Waiting for next dear

Reading your update I am 😭 the bind between dadima and maan reminded me of mine bond with my grand father and grand mother. Itso always sad to lose one whom you love . It was tragedy but geets sweet reply to main was beautiful ...waiting for next update ...

I can only say beautiful. U r like ...where our thoughts end, urs starts from there...lovely

Emotinal part..
Yaar aap na rula dia aaj ka part ma..
Maan dadima ka saath jo pal bitaya tha unka dream ma hai kaisa dadima usa samjhata tha jab wo angry hota tha school par khana khilaya aur jab dadji ka death ka baad dadima na maan ka lie pakda aur slap kia wo smoke karta hua,maan ko lagatha smoke karna cool guy show karega par usa night jab dadima ko rota hua tuta hua dekha usa apne galti ka ehsaas hua.. Maan na dadima ka saath apne aap ko vi ek room ma kaida kar lia hai dadi ko ek pal ka liya vi akela nahi choda hai.. Dadi na apne album dekhna ko bola tha aur geet maan ka saath wo album deka rahi hai sare pics ki story boal rahi hai aur dadima ko dekha ka usa kuch hona ka ehsaas hai jo bahut bad hai par wo khuad ko sambhal raha hai.. Dadi maan ko samjhta hai ki jab time aye toh unha jane dena maan ka asu ko behana dia kyun ki unha pata hai maan sirf unka pass hi asu bahyega.. Yaar ya comment write karta time isha pal mera ankho ma vi asu aaraha hai.. Dadima hum sab ko choad ka chali gayi hai maan na sab kuch mechanicaly kar raha hai sare rituals sab na roya par wo nahi usna apne aap ko room ma lock kar lia hai.. Geet wapas aagayi hai apne apartment pa par dadi and maan ka moment uska pass nahi chodta hai.. Geet ana sa maan ki warema pata karta hai aur km ayi hai usa baat karna samjhti hai par maan na sab ki ek hi baat suan kar thak gaya hai aur geet ko apno ko khona ka dard kya hota hai pucha hai sahi bola geet na usa jyada kaun janega apno ko khone ka dard kya hota hai uska toh koi nahi hai jisa wo apna boal sake..
Bahut rulaya hai isha part ma next part ma thoda tarash khana hum par please..
Waiting for next part..
Thanks for pm..