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Sowmiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Thanks for the pm

Will be waiting for the next update😊

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Nefret19

@Nefret19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Congrats on the new story dear:) And its super intriguing dear. The man in the park has been waiting for 10 years. I have a feeling that its Maan but who has he been waiting for? Geet? What could be the connection between them? Why is Geet drawn to him? I am super excited to read what happens next dearie:):):) Awesome beginning of an intriguing story dearie:)

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saadi88

@saadi88

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Hey..new ff..I am sooo happy...read both the parts together...

Geet is frm this village and then they left frm here and now again back to hometown and around same time maan was also dre...feels like koi purana rishta hai in donu ka...kya geet usse janti hai ???? I guess have to wait for that answer..maans dad has betrayed him..kameena insaan but dadi is always his support..now he is back looking for sum1 ..I am guessing geet maybe...will be waiting to know further...thanku..

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tessyrani

@tessyrani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

you havegiven a glimpse of Maan's past What is Gee's roll

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Chandrika varshney

@chandrikaVARSH

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Nice update dear Mann left from park to bus stop Geet also follows him both got same bus but next stop Mann get down it's said that what Mann father did with him but what crime he did

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preeti

@pari1689

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

nice update ...
geet follow maan she attract towards him...
maan's dad such cheap person...

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AshelySpinelli

@TJ_spinelli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Nice update

geet made excuse 2 pinky nd went 2 park 2 luk at d stranger

He was in his own wrld he nd geet caught d bus nd geet kept on lukng at him bt he was nt bothrd

it was maan who was lost all d time his dad was gambler nd lost all d money nd forcd maan 2 handel business

Den he fixd maan's marriage wit his business partner when maan refusd he put maan out nd didnt allow anyone 2 hlp maan bt daadi hlpd him through mohan

waitng 4 d nxt part update soon