Distorted Lives..FOUW..Thread 2..... updtd note pg 105 - Page 9

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Kitna bolte hai ye log😲

I mean thak nahi jayte...

Ok so do do parts ek saat kya baat hai..😆

Anwesha ka full and final kuch karna padega so i decided that she would be by chai break in every update... Matlab i can skip it q k mai chai nahi piti😆

So apart from chai break trying to fight for her importance in the story Geet ko finally akal ayai🥳

It's about time nahi tho i had a doubt she had some kind of mental illness😛

Chalo muskan k chote se brain me itni badi baat daal tho di in logone... Selfish idiots kahike

And geet ko daar tha k she got laid again🤣

U never know geet tu tho pi k tul thi maan gadhe ka kya bharosa...😉

But yaha he was in being the mahan mode so tu bach gayi

Bichari emotionality drained ladki ka faida uthana nahi choda usne.. kya zarurat hai usko touch karne ki 😡

Lekin nahi ussko comforting k naam pe chance maar na hai

In the second part phir chai time agaya

And at the end of the day

We have the super human being and the Mahan athma title sneaked and tactfully stolen by MAAN SHLINGH KHURANA😡

So to summarize dev and geets moment with muskan was a bit too short while that was what should have been the focal point

Even though Geet muskan anee or even brij came to picture

Maans character had overshadowed everything!👏

Gadha kahika

I finally settled to put the blame of the whole story and ruks in everyones lives on his head

Aditi i was thinking i need a break and an OS from u

Please make time

Waiting for the next

You know tumhari comments mujhe humesha hasa deti hai !!😉😉

Ab writer khud itna bakbak karne wali ho toh uske created characters toh bakenge hi na😆😆

Waise agar Annie ko jhel sako toh achcha varna ignore kar dena but woh hai toh important story ke liye toh mera suggestion yeh hai, serial wale Annie na soch ke aise hi ek ladki ki kahani samajh ke padh lena...😉

Ab maan mahaan hai yah saitan hai yah bas ek insaan hai yeh toh dekhne wali baat hai kiuki mai khud bhi nahi janti end kya hoga...

regarding Dev, mujhe pata hai shayad it wasn't upto mark but this story itself is a challenge for me, toh gustakhi maaf ho...ab meri shaadi hi nahi hui, divorce is really total out of bounds area aur bachche ko divorce ke baare mai batana was a difficult scene to write. hopefully agey I can do justice to such scenes but haa focus of this stry would never be on geet and Dev's relation kiuki yeh Geet aur Dev ki kahaani toh kabhi thi hi nahi...
OS ka plot ek hai dimaag mai, give me some time, maybe in April sometimes...😉😉

Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

That's a surprised double update...
Thanks for pm..
Annie was hurt by arjun in worst way possible...he treated her like a granted thing...he never actually tried to knew her...he did love her but failed to knew her...
Annie was confused btn vicky and arjun both loves her...one hurt her while the other healed her in his way..Annie fears to loose vicky while she fears to get hurt by arjun again ...
Maan found his baby suster was all grown-up...Annie met arjun and he did feel something changed in annie...
Geet was scared she did something again...but maan cleared that night was involved both...in no way geet throwed herself on him...
Dev cleared musko that they can't b family...poor muski had to go through this at that age...geet promised herself to b a mother from now on...
Brij was disturbed seeing geet,maan muski yet he felt that was perfect...he needs answers but none had them...which was making him more worried..

Willb waiting for next

Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊 Annie has a complicated situation in hand and I am sure she will do the right thing in the end but as Maan said, she has to choose one of them and she can't choose both. Maan respects Geet and he would not let her down by taking advantage... the night at the pub was different. Brij of course is worried about his sister but then again anybody in his situation would be...

Part 21 - perfect title for the update. Everyone got what reality is. From dev to muskkan to maan to annie. Maan was perfect in giving suggestion to her. He showed what she could do and what not. She can't expect both to be in her life at the same time. Feeling bad for Vicky. He was good friend of her so hope he will not think that she used him when she needed someone and then spending so much time she again selected her first love. Maan too realized that he can't do anything to save her from this problem. Only she can solve. She should think wisely, what her heart says, and then only take decision and be ready for its repercussions. It would be beneficial or could turn into disaster, but it would be her choice only.

Same was with geet & maan. He too got a reality check after talking with his sister. He felt little distant from geet. Something changed bet them. May be it was after geet's drunken night that changed.

Finally dev & geet told muskan. Oh...felt so bad when she asked that why can't they be as a family. It will be hard for that child to digest and habitual to this.

Geet vowed to think about muskan first and then about herself. I feel like this will be big obstacle for maan & geet to come closer.

Hi Aditi, how are you now.? How is your health.?

Part 22 - annie took seriously what maan said to be being herself as knight. Lol. Loved the start. Annie took the right decision. She can't do same with Vicky which arjun did with her. She was right in analyzing her side and tell him where he went wrong. Now arjun understood that he lost annie forever or he should do something big that pull annie to him.

Maan again making her understand that she was not wrong as mother. Muskan was kid...will understand slowly slowly. It was better than to see parents fighting daily. It will affect more badly than this one time shock.

Brij was suspicious about maan & geet. Still he felt right, not any sinful, seeing all three together. Still he wanted to know about them. He was straight forward in asking to geet. Geet was unable to answer and maan again came to her support. Brij understood that he was not telling all truth. He dreaded that maan will also hurt geet as dev did. Maan too straight way answered that he can't promise about the answers but he will never hurt geet. This increased brij's suspicious more. He was now sure that they can't give him answers he needed.

NYC update dear

Thanks for the double update and pm

Originally posted by: nishamna

Great part. So finally aniee shared her problems, her dilemma with maan. being a good listener and brother, he heard everything and gave her needed assurance and asked her to know what she wants. She can't get both guys so she has to think, with whom she can spend her whole life. N I guess she understood. Her behaviour in restaurant and the way she questioned arjun was really a mature act of hers.

So geet awoke in the morning and was thinking what happened last night. She was thinking all wrong but maan cleared it saying the truth. Geet still thinks that she is the reason of maan's divorce. Though maan tried to make her understand that it was sam and him who are responsible, still geet couldn't able to overcome this guilt.

Geet got so upset when dev and she informed muskaan that now they can not stay together. She was feeling like a failure as a mother. Maan tried to console her with words but it will take its own time to over come these problems.

Brij saw maneet together. He saw how maan was helping geet and he could see some kind of bonding between them. But being a brother he wants to be careful so that no one can harm his sister again. Maan could sense how brij is feeling but for now he hasn't anything to tell him waiting for next dear.

Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊 Maan had been a great elder brother, one who listens, advises and in general teaches a younger siblings about life. Annie of course will have a lot more shade I think though I haven't written anything more I somehow am fond of Annie character.
Geet's guiltis stemmed with her own divorce. She cannot condemn Meera without condemning herself as in some way they both had done same thing as Meera even if things were different. Brij and Maan has a lot more and Maaneet had a slow moving journey. I am not going to rush them because that will destroy the essence of the story.

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Part 21

Welcome back sweety
About the part...it was beautiful
Loved how maan handled annie...instead of sugarcoating the words...he served her the reality of life..lovely
Loved how strong maan is in his conviction that only geet was nt responsible for that night in pub...love how they have this diff bond..yet they don't seem to acknowledge that...guess thts what life is all about
Wonderful part
Lovely story

Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊 sometimes we need reality checks in life and Maan did exactly that. About Maaneet's bond, it is not easy to accept it. But love can do wonders I guess?? Theirs will be a slow moving story.

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Part 22
Loved how annie gave arjun the taste of his own medicine
The way you choose placing of order as a significant thing to prove Annie 's point was nice...

Dev and geet and muskaan...that has become complicated but I guess its necessary for muskaan to understand their relationship now itself...as maan said it wud be helpful and less hurtful in future

Loved brij's and maan's interaction at the airport
Loved how you have kept the ending quite open...like talking about answers to questions that they dnt have...its interesting and quite intriguing to find out
Really looking forward to this story

Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊 Arjun was a tad bit arrogant about their relationship and Annie he met was stronger one than the one he met earlier so of course he was in for surprise. This Annie had braved a storm and even if she had help at the end it was her emerging as a new person.

Divorces are messy and downright cruel to the children but a messy marriage between parents is crueler and no child deserves that...

Brij and Maan have a long way to go.

Originally posted by: sanum23

grt two uds

both pt was awesome

maan very sensibly answered his sister and his encouragement gave boost fr taking decision

he assured hr he's always with hr to protect hr wat ever

is her decision but it's hr right to take decision of hr life

with whom she wanted to spend hr life but it's lifetime

decision so she get to know with whom she can't imagine

hr life

geet wokeup with heavy headache she realize she in maan room she want to know wat happened last night exactly maan came in room seeing his face she guss she did blunder but maan told hr noting happened between them last night he tensed bz of his sis and he cleared geet to stop thinking low fr hr self both was equal needed that night to distract from their

worries to take decisions boths already lost their partners before that night

muskan was very disturbed after knowing about divorce

Annie gave time to arjun to prove him self but his excuse

was not satisfied Annie fr breakup if in future again he face same than he also take decision on hr behalf she's right hr life always on risk as she's Khurana's heiress too and sis of msk but hr bro never stop hr fr living hr life

so knw she need time to decide wat she want

geet was upset maan comfort hr that muskan will b alright she's giving hr better life rather than she see mummy dady fight every day and get disturb

brij saw them together and their comfort level he's not stupid to not to guess maan assured him he never hurt geet

Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊 Maan did what any elder brother should do... He advised but let his younger sibling decide for herself what she wants to do.

Geet and maan have a long way to go before they can be typically romantic in love. Dev- Muskaan and Geet have to settle for the new normal as well.