Distorted Lives..FOUW..Thread 2..... updtd note pg 105 - Page 11

Originally posted by: kabslocks

Wonderful updates.

Thanks for double updates.

Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! Beautiful updates...

loved it dear

Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊

Originally posted by: chiki143

Wonderful updates dear... 👏. It's really so good to see u back. And the updates are as usual the best the way u write. The bonds are forged now. It's good to see u not rushing in m aking maaneet couple. Maan even though is somewhere getting to his feelings Geet will have tough time to accept it. And Annie and arjun that is wonderful. Every female character in ur ff is awesome and wonderfully strong. Loved every one of them. Loved it totally.

Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊 I am sorry for being so irregular but there were stuffs going on and are still going on. I won't be rushing with Maaneet because they are a story where the beauty lies in the slow pace of them. I believe in the strength that we women possess is no less than that of a man's. So yeah, my characters tend to be strong. Thank you once again.

Originally posted by: taahir004

Annie it does seem like she is still in love with Arjun , Vicky may love her maybe she too loves Vicky but I doubt she will be able to fall deep in love with Vicky

Annie was hurt by Arjun she then started dating Vicky but now that Arjun is back its a whole different scenario facing the person she has deep feelings for yet fighting with herself that she is in love with Vicky will not get her anywhere she needs to make a hard decision one that she can live with and that would make her happy with the person she is with should also be happy

I never really thought Annie was close to Maan or that she would express her problems to him but its good to see that she can turn to him he is a good person and not forcing her to make any decisions but advising her to do the best she can

The more I get to read about Maan's character the more real he seems to be he is so honest with Geet when talking about Sameera he hides nothing and I suppose both he and Geet has created that level of ommunication where they can trust each other to confide in each other and likewise I felt Annie too knew speaking and confiding in her brother she won't be judged rather Maan would help her and that's what I admire about him

he puts no charade or facade on he is a man with flaws but respects every relation

whereas I find Annie is using Vicky as she is alone maybe angry and still hurt by Arjun I feel she is disrespecting her relation with Vicky by been dishonest

Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊 Annie had a relation with Vicky more like a rebound trying to stop being in love with a guy who doesn't love her. It is never healthy to be in a rebound and I am sure now that Arjun is back Annie would finally confront her heart. You are right that it is not fair to Vicky. But then love is a very mysterious concept. It creeps up on us when we least expect it. I haven't written much about Annie so I am not sure what she would do but it will be something good.

Maan is not perfect obviously but yeah, he is no hypocrite. He has the strength to accept when he is wrong. Maan and Geet will be a slow paced story because rushing them would kill their essence.

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapter 21

Maan again so right in his advise to Annie yes she is the only one that has to make that decision its difficult but she needs not rush she has to weigh her options and also see which men is the best for her only time will tell haste decisions will just cause more hurt and pain

I liked that once again Maan and Geet speaks about the night they met in the pub , Maan takes equal blame but the respect he holds for Geet telling her not to make herself sound cheap its just so admiral

making sure Geet is comfortable yet for some reason there seem to be some awkwardness or is it that both are slowly realizing their own paths in life

Muskaan its true when a child's innocent heart breaks when she can no longer be with both her parents at the same time , as a child she would think she did something wrong as her parents don't want to live together

both Dev and Geet has wronged their child yet at the same time in the future its best that a child is not in a loveless home

Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊 Sometimes we should take time off before deciding. I am sure Annie would make the right choice at the end. Maan just did what an elder brother should do. He promised to be there for Annie no matter what decision he takes.
Maan is a good man and he never wants Geet to be guilty for something which he was equally responsible for. About the slight awkwardness, I guess that would be unresolved feelings between them,
No matter what Dev and Geet did, Muskaan was bound to be hurt. At least now she can grow up without witnessing a dysfunctional family...

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapter 22

I liked that Annie actually spoke as a determined woman she stood her ground and was strong though she loves Arjun yes he did hurt her and maybe his explaination is the truth but the fact that she did not crumble into his arms that makes a difference and that for me shows that her talk with Maan was fruitful

Maan seems concerned about Geet , they both have no idea what tomorrow will bring if they will still be in talking terms as for Geet she now first wants to be a mother before anything else and I truly respect that but it also seems at the same time as if Maan wants more as if he is determined to have Geet in his life yet he knows he cannot rush himself nor Geet but his statement that he'll never hurt Geet tells me that he would want something blooming between them in future

Once again all three chapters were just Awesomely Amazing

Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊 Yes, Annie truly did become Anwesha Singh Khurana didn't she? It is not the why but How the breakup happened that hurt Annie so she would take her time to decide if Arjun gets a second chance.
Maan is a man with nothing holding him back since he divorced his wife. He is free to be in relationship with Geet iff he so wants. Geet on the other hand needs to think about a young daughter first before thinking about herself. Geet will obviously not be ready for anything more. But I am not sure if Maan is even aware about his feelings for Geet... Told you, this is a slow paced one with all the push-pull to spice things up a bit.😉

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 21 - perfect title for the update. Everyone got what reality is. From dev to muskkan to maan to annie. Maan was perfect in giving suggestion to her. He showed what she could do and what not. She can't expect both to be in her life at the same time. Feeling bad for Vicky. He was good friend of her so hope he will not think that she used him when she needed someone and then spending so much time she again selected her first love. Maan too realized that he can't do anything to save her from this problem. Only she can solve. She should think wisely, what her heart says, and then only take decision and be ready for its repercussions. It would be beneficial or could turn into disaster, but it would be her choice only.

Same was with geet & maan. He too got a reality check after talking with his sister. He felt little distant from geet. Something changed bet them. May be it was after geet's drunken night that changed.

Finally dev & geet told muskan. Oh...felt so bad when she asked that why can't they be as a family. It will be hard for that child to digest and habitual to this.

Geet vowed to think about muskan first and then about herself. I feel like this will be big obstacle for maan & geet to come closer.

Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊 Maan was being a perfect elder brother to Annie telling her the crude realities of life. He knew that he can't help Annie or decide for her but he can be there for her to support her.
I don't think Maan was distant, he just was preoccupied thinking about Annie and her problems.
Muskaan had it hard but I am sure she will recover with love and care. You are right about the obstacle of course because Geet will first and foremost be a mother.

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Hi Aditi, how are you now.? How is your health.?

Part 22 - annie took seriously what maan said to be being herself as knight. Lol. Loved the start. Annie took the right decision. She can't do same with Vicky which arjun did with her. She was right in analyzing her side and tell him where he went wrong. Now arjun understood that he lost annie forever or he should do something big that pull annie to him.

Maan again making her understand that she was not wrong as mother. Muskan was kid...will understand slowly slowly. It was better than to see parents fighting daily. It will affect more badly than this one time shock.

Brij was suspicious about maan & geet. Still he felt right, not any sinful, seeing all three together. Still he wanted to know about them. He was straight forward in asking to geet. Geet was unable to answer and maan again came to her support. Brij understood that he was not telling all truth. He dreaded that maan will also hurt geet as dev did. Maan too straight way answered that he can't promise about the answers but he will never hurt geet. This increased brij's suspicious more. He was now sure that they can't give him answers he needed.

I am fine health wise but my mom is very ill. Bad luck comes in triplet they say..
Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊

Annie and Arjun needs to work on a lot of issues if they ever can be together but I am not sure what Annie will decide since I haven't written that part yet. But she will not be deciding in haste that's for sure.
Muskaan I am sure would someday heal again with love and care and Geet will realize that Maan was right.
Brij is being a elder brother to Geet making sure she doesn't get hurt but I am sure he would be a friend to Maan as well.😉😉

Originally posted by: anu5

NYC update dear

Liked it!!

Annie kept forth her issues and dilemma Infront of maan

Maan being her beloved brother was prefect in showing her path

He made her realise that she can't expect both the boys in her life at the same junction of her life

Annie is scared to trust Arjun whole heartily after her heart break with him in past and was reluctant to let go off Vicky too

Hurt meets heal !! Arjun hurt her beyond repair and Vicky healed her

But at present she needs to stand up for thyself to choose the path of hurt or heal and at times she doesn't need both to live her life

On other hand maan was wondering to see how much his sister as grown up to take her own decision

Geet was all stunned after realizing at late night drama and was switched back to her rational thinking

Muskaan came to lime light and got to know abt her parents equation !! Her little dream with peaceful and happy living family broke apart , shattering the little soul's heart to the core

Geet was determined to stand thyself for muskaan and wants to keep her happiness and other priorities at Bay for Muskaan

Nyc that Annie confronted Arjun to sort out their differences and to take a positive decision

Arjun though loves her couldnt fathom to understand Annie to the core

His lack of decision making ability cost him to lose Annie for ever and Annie doesn't want to do same with Vicky ,what Arjun did with her

Finally Annie's words sink in him to only realise that he list her forever

Brij happened to see Maaneet and Muskaan together as a well knitted family nevertheless he didn't feel uncomfortable or as a sin to think so

He confronted maaneet abt them landing together but maan butted in and opened up half of he truth

Though brij knew there was more into the picture after maan's words but he shuggred it off at present

Hope all their life's falls into the missing puzzles !!

Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊

Annie needed someone not to sugercoat things for her and Maan did exactly that just like a true brother. Annie is still broken hiding her hurt but she needs to stop hiding and accept it so healing can truly begin.

Muskaan is the one hurt the most but in this case I agree with Maan, staying together would have hurt Muskaan more in the long run. Brij is just being an elder brother but I am sure he would understand. After all Brij has always been perceptive hasn't he? I can't promise happy endings for all but I promise to do justice to everyone of them.

Originally posted by: anu5

Thanks for the double update and pm

Will be waiting for the next update

Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊