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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#571

Loved the update...

Sooper happy that they are spending time with each other deliberately or not.. Geet is thinking about him and observing him as well, a looot more n more by each day..

The way you described that waterfall, i could actually visualise that...

And somehow i feel that this storm is not going to be easy for them... Bohut films dekh li iska asar hoga

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dreamy4ever

@dreamy4ever

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Posted: 7 years ago

#572

Beautiful update. 😃
just wanted to keep on reading this update never wanted to finish
Thank you for the update. Plz continue soon

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#573

What a clam and peaceful situation u portrayed. They both needed this calmness. And are they going to suffer the hurricane or leaving before it? And that prank! I thought u are turning this ff as a thriller. Now the wuestion is what effect and impact thos prank and prank related people gonna have on maaneet?

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#574

Part 51 - I liked this full of maaneetilious update. The scene of waterfall, the pond, its surroundings, everything you described felt so live. Geet was fully immersed in the beauty of nature. She was totally oblivious of her surroundings. Maan too was contended in the nature still he was aware of his surroundings. He was starring at her. She felt his gaze on her but she didn't made that she noticed it.

He is really a snob, full of his me & myself attitude. She knew how to pull off air from the balloon. Oh his pps proves this.

Both were cautious after the train incident. Both put enough distance bet them. Both were silent but still they enjoyed each other presence

What...that joker part was a prank. Agree with geet, anybody could get heart attack seeing such a dreadful sight in front of their eyes.

Geet was laughing at him how he ran away from that place. Geet never leave a chance to make fun of him.

So storm is coming and I am thinking about more of maaneet in the storm.

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#575

Part-50

Wow! These two together like friends. A thing to be watched out. Loved it too the core.😳

But it was a kind of date for them. Don't you think.😉

Part-51

For a moment i felt i'm with geet in that place, surrounded with greenness & nature.❤️

& that was a very pathetic prank, i have to say. 😡 People don't think about others before playing such pranks. But it was funny how maan ran away along with geet. I too thought he's going to do something😆

But he was right, it's better to run than fighting someone with an axe full of blood.

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#576

Fantastic update. The falls and it's scenic beauty is so well portrayed . Maan and Geet, both were silently admiring the waterfalls and the peaceful ambience it created. So beautifully written. But the joker scene at the end was not at all funny. It seems there is some mystery here , what if the joker is an assailant and the act he did was genuine? Superb.