Wired Hearts (7) Thread:8, Pg:1 - Page 60

Originally posted by: dqno1

Please post short chapters soon.
I find myself unable to wait.
Thanks for the consideration and your kindness o mighty writer who weilds the pen or should I say the one who lifts the finger 😆

Originally posted by: mayyo

Hahaha

I found this request of yours very convincing so keeping in view the very first line of your post, I decided that a short chapter must be posted really soon. Keep looking at this space for the chapter very very soon.😉

Originally posted by: dqno1

First off I commend you on the feel you created for the scenic location

There are some places on earth where you stand and you realize the enormousness of this world the Lord has created for us and you feel so small and insignificant, our problems so tiny in comparison to what's out there and sometimes that's enough to shake the very soul in us.

The journey to the waterfall is so similar to the journey in their relationship

The anticipation to meet each other, the stumbles along the way, the shock of the beauty of it and then the quiet acceptance of each other in that moment when they are together

He's uncomfortable and restless still when he's close to her

old feelings are hard to die And harder to kill

She is aware of him and conscious when he's admiring her instead of the waterfall

One good thing about that is that she's not running away this time around

The PPS was funny 😆 and only she would think he was a snob for stating the obvious

waise mann mein ladoo fuut rahe hai but she won't admit it😃

I'm glad they kept their professional relationship separate from what's happening between them

So a storm is coming and I'm giddy with excitement😆

Let's shake this little Madame up 😆

na rahegi fence toh kaha dwell karegi fence dweller

The signature success of an update can always be that you're desperate to read the next one

you excel at that 👍🏼

Loved it very much

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

Was it really prank...

I still hd doubts about it..

Maan geet were at more ease

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Fantastic...so glad maan and geet had a great time at the falls...serene is the word that comes to mind seeing their reactions to each other and the scenery around...then rushing to get back and the confidence with which maan walks in late to the conference ... the joker at the end was not funny right...scary for sure

Originally posted by: maansi25

After ages it seems

Only waiting and waiting

But wait seems to be worth

Loved it to the fullest

As ee eere expecting

Both spent an eventful day together

They both are calm and composed from outside

But are from within?

Can we expect more from now onwards

The waterfall it's serenity and natural beauty took our breath away

I recently visited south where I experienced the same

I could recon and visualise it

The scene in the last was horrific

What if wasn't a prank

Want their friendship to rekindle again

Is it too much to wish for?

Ps

loved Maan sooo much for his

thaughtfulness.. ie trying to be amicable

Waiting for the hurricane to sweep away all the past differences

And rebuild their friendship

😳

Originally posted by: saf24

Fantastic update as always. I really like the comfortable silences that Maan and Geet have together. I also liked that they were on the same page at the waterfall where they were just contented to sit in silence and feel everything around them. That prank was scary but i'm glad they were able to joke about it after. Great job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

phenomenal update! wonderfully written! glad seeing Maaneet able to converse! enjoyed their banter! great seeing a teasing jovial Maan! nice that Maan and Geet are spending with each other! there was an awkward moment in the train! he is still affected by her and she is aware of him! the scene at the waterfall was beautifully penned! Geet mesmerized! no words were needed! I am surprised that Maan likes playing virtual games! getting to see an entire new facet of Maan! cannot believe that was that really a prank! Maan's anger justified! hope they are able to avoid the storm! update soon!!

thanks for updating!

Originally posted by: fict

Fabulous update. The whole waterfall scene was beautifully written.The way they find content in each others company and don't need words between them is awesome. There is something between them for sure. Maan had once been in love with her and maybe still carries those feelings but this time Geet too is aware of whats happening to her , not like in the past. Hope they are able to overcome their past to start afresh.

Originally posted by: muskanp

Very beautifully written
Especially about the water fall .. I actually that calmness reading ur update nice

Wat a roller coaster from that calm walk to that chase to that coffee nice
Just like their relationship