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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

Geet is so excited about her dinner date with Maan. Even her colleague could make out. Nice to see her like this. So is Maan. Loved his apology to Geet.

What Geet says in the end is true, they should come out of their past and view things in a new light.

Yes, they should and they will!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: PaintedSky

Happy that both decides to behave like adults. I wish this time geet falls for maan. She should enjoy the sweetness and pain of love like maan did.


Sweetness, I understand. Pain? You want Maan to refuse her this time around?
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: leena63

As always fabulous update
Blushing geet & laughing maan it's an awesome combo
When they are together it's jannat to watch
What else to write Dil Bag Bag Ho Gaya


Thank you! So happy to know it!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: saf24

Gosh I absolutely loved this update. Geet's anxiousness and Maan's flirting were a prefect blend. I also loved how light the interaction is between them with Maan teasing her at the seminar and later commenting on her blush as well as her sneaking glances at him and seeing him in a different light. You outdid yourself with this one. Great job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.


Thank you! It's a pleasure knowing you enjoyed it!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

congrats on 50 updates 👏⭐️ thanks 4 da pm n magical update! superbly written! Love this teasing Maan! Geet excited abt the dinner! Maan teases her! liked their eye locks! she admires Maan! seems like Geet is falling 4 Maan! liked that they r able 2 talk n the past behind them! glad he apologized n she accepts! Maan wants 2 b her tour guide! she refuses bt he is adamant! great seeing this jovial Maan! they refused 2 dance and their answers confused the host! update soon


Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you're still around!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: hermosoanu123

Lovely update nd relaxed atmosphere... Both were cool nd enjoyed each other company ... love this maan ...thought had so much of pain but he try to make her happy in his own ways .. loved it


Thank you!
What is the purpose of life if not to make your friends and family happy above and beyond your own pain?
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

Omg. I am enjoooying this game that maan is playing with her. He is stilll making her dance on his tunes. Either deliberately or may be not. But he is doing just that and im enjoooying. Haha..

Geet is noticing even the tiny details of Maan and is she even realising it? Would love to see her reaction once she realises this... Am loviiing the route this story s taking


Thanks Purvi! So good to know you're enjoying this!
Realisation isn't all that far. Wait for it!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Amazing Update Mayyam 👏

Aww geet was super excited for their dinner date.. but why was she so excited like almost jumping in happiness 😉😆
Love the title of the story.. I wish their past doesn't come between them now .. so happy to see them behaving so casual towards each other.. is it possible that she's feeling something something for him.. pagal thi na pehle thukra dya 😡😆😆
I wish main hoti uski jagah 🤣
Anyway.. I thoroughly enjoyed this update.. that comment of his about their dance cracked me up 😆
Waiting for next update


Thanks Sheen! Your comments are always mazay ke! 😆

Pagal hi thi na isliye thukraya. Hum mein se koi bhi hota tou kabhi na Maan ka dil tootnay deta! 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
Mariii 😲
am waiting
jaldi aao na
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DaftGirk

two parts 😲 either you're turning fast or I'm growing slow 😆 i like the first option though😉

That was just coincidence, though. I'm still just as slow! 😆

Part 49

I actually read this on a long train journey dis week, but you know what's funny, it took me as long as the journey if not longer to read this (i.e. 45-50mins). So that tells you how much I enjoyed reading it lol. I had assumed Geet would repent, thus not exactly shocked reading this chapter. She has this persona which for some reason matches my wavelength hence the cushioning effect from my side. I feel protective towards this girl, she's an exceptional character: strong yet weak when it comes to emotion. Guilt affects her bad style, I connect with her in many levels. She's aspirational, soft and humble, and on the other side she has issues i.e. guilt and connectivity, almost shy when it comes to new people. It takes her time to open up and so it should be, you can tell I'm an introvert in reality too. Though online it's a different story lol. But I'm glad she has her sister and Ananya, who somehow always manage to get to know her off days, bringing up her spirits. Call it intuition or whatever but they always manage to drop by when required. Again a lot like my sisters' lol.

Online is a different story for me too. And, at the risk of being thought by readers That I have sketched myself in her (yet again), I admit that I connect to Geet too. In fact, her Raya and Anaya have actually been inspired by my sisters.

They're avoiding one another, not shocked again. Its human isn't it, avoid the problem for as long as possible until it's a mountain lol. Maan walking in on Geet and the little one, was a picture that created a mix of emotion. I can almost picture the image in Maan's head; the one he created with Geet in mind. Why does he love so much? No not that I'm complaining, cause he's also an arrogant lover but at times he's a little cute (mind you only a little, can't have his ego growing lol). Geet made the first move, I had predicted that too considering his royal air-ness lol. He could be a moving cloud with all the floatable ego he has in himself lol. But I'm happy he acknowledged her apology though didn't do the same himself. But again its expected. Maan to maan hai afterall.

What is it with you and dislikeness of Maan's ego? 😆

What was a nice surprise, though I shan't be was Maan discussing or shall we say informing Geet of his day, or rather his achievement. That was a nice move, or else we were stuck with Geet who I ask would never make a move after the last one unless forced to (either by circumstance or sis/friend). Caught in a good mood, why does this Maan sound so enchanting? No wonder Geet's struck by his thunder lol. That rain dance aww, Maan sure does sound like the cutest thing on earth right now, with candy floss and all. He shall kill me after reading that lol, phew his only an imagination. Men like that don't exist or so I have been told lol. Forcing Geet to join the madness, the woman who hardly does anything fun, now that's a good move. I hate to say it but Geet needs to loosen up a little.

She really does need to loosen up.

The end though, a hug was fine but the pushing and shoving. I suppose it was intrinsic, his heart made the move to save himself from a heartbreak but man is that going to play on his mind.

A new city, a new day and a new beginning I like that. There's so many possibilities, Maan and Geet have both taken the initiative to move beyond that incident. I knew Maan would feel guilty, it was both a harsh and rash movement which isn't Maan in reality. Dinner date, why do I like the sound of that.

Yes, a new beginning which is going to be pivotal in their relationship.

Thank you Mariumand AND looking forward to the growing relationship

Thank you for still being around!

Note: aww Shes two, that's a cute age. I remember when my nephew was two, now his three and the cheekiest thing on earth but babies are fun. I AB-AB=AAB-SOULTELY love him

[B]My two year old is a force to reckon with. Full of energy and bubbliness and with the perfect tinge of shyness.

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