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Originally posted by: SeAngel76
I realized something this evening, that I never posted my review. So awful of me! Anyways, here it goes.
So the interaction between Maan and Geet has shifted drastically! That is what I noticed most. They both seem hyper aware of each other. Geet has become more confident but also very sensitive about Maan's behaviour towards her. Maan seems to be everywhere and seems ever ready with a smirk, quip or jab. Of course, avoidance is not on the menu anymore.So how do these two deal with their changing dynamic? Geet serves out the sarcasm with the side dishes of humor and crackling wit! On the other hand, Maan flashes his over-confidence and egotistic nature as a badge of honor! Enjoy this interaction immensely, because writing something this funny, hilarious and biting is very difficult for me, so hats off to you!Then the little weird sentences that Maan would throw at Geet got me thinking that he is playing at something. I was not really sure as to what, but when Geet put it all together, it became clear! He was playing her but for what reasons? That I think is going to be amazing to read. I don't want to make any assumptions because this story has progressed and advanced leaps and bounds that always has unexpected results.Every chapter has so many events, feelings, occurrences and twists. That's what is so great of your story that one is never disappointed. So I await your update whenever you are ready! I am still in awe and admiration of this challenging, taunting and mouthy Geet!
Better late than never, I believe. :)
Thank you! I can't take credit for being responsible for the funny and biting sarcasm the two are throwing each other's way because I'm learning most of it myself. Sarcasm is a far fetched thought for me. When they say, a person is known by the company they keep, it's true because it is my husband's sense of humour which rubs off on me. 😆
I don't know how amazing the reason for Maan's actions are going to be, or whether they'll be sufficient or not. That is for Geet and for the readers to decide...
Everybody noticed the change in Maan after the prequel. Only few managed to see that Geet has changed too. She isn't the one to stay in the shadows any more. She has become one to raise her voice on things she feel like.
There are times when I feel like I give such long updates with so many events in one chapter that readers must get bored by the end of it. I do consider shortening the length of the chapters but then I update so far apart that I feel obliged to give a fuller update every time. It's good to know the chapter doesn't bore you to the end.
Thanks for your feedback! Your comments lift my mood every time! :)
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