Wired Hearts (7) Thread:8, Pg:1 - Page 32

Originally posted by: mayyo

NOTE

Hello! I know I haven't updated in months and I'm sorry about it. Things just keep coming up and I can't concentrate on writing but that does not mean I've given up on this story. I am working on the next chapter, however slow it may be.

Just one question. How many of you are willing to read further?

Originally posted by: COLOGY

Maan s giving back...

Though it is been expected since long ... Last line just stole the show!

Full adrenaline punch

I'm more tensed this time 😆 can't wait to see Geet suffering ( ewww not a fan but I'd like some on her part too).

Originally posted by: SeAngel76

Reply posted by mayyo May 29, 2017

Thank you so much for coming out and showering me with your kind words. I wish I could have the courage and dignity to deal with this irreparable loss, as you believe I have.

As for your suggestion about Wattpad, I've been suggested that earlier to but I wasn't sure. Thank you for believing my writing deserves recognition. I will surely consider your advice. :)

Reply posted by SeAngel76 May 31, 2017

First of all, I was so happy to see an update. But what made me absolutely ecstatic was tor receive a response from you! Thank you. I stand by my compliments as they are honest. As for my condolences, I think that you are stronger and more courageous and you may not give yourself that credit. I don't know you, but if you can write in this fashion, can feel the emotional turmoil of both your protagonists at varying times, can show the struggles and hurdles of your supporting characters and can finish that off with a wondrous imagination, amazing creativity and out of this world writing skills, you are extremely talented and have a high emotional quotient. At least in my books!

Also, writing will help and don't mean for your book but writing that involves you and your private thoughts. Pen to paper or nowadays computer or mobile device to screen can help in many ways. So don't disregard something that may help in the healing process.

As for Wattpad, it can wait! However, I am being selfish and would love for you to be discovered amongst editors and small time publishers, realize the opportunities you have for self publishing and garner some recognition for a writer who passes the muster. There are so many ill written books everywhere in cyberspace that get votes and views. I hate when like you and another writer (author of Searing and Rescuing Heaven) are still hidden gems and treasures. There are many competitions and contests on-going on Wattpad right now, and I know you could blow them all out of the water in either the Chick-Lit, Romance or Fanfiction genre! It might take time to get a following but with the help of inviting friends, Facebook postings and Twitter followings, you could do it. And I would like to help as well. Anyways, no pressure, think about it...

I have yet to read your update which I will embark on now! Take care of yourself. And write for you! Keep those flames of innovation burning! Thank you for taking the time to share your plots and characters with us...

PS: I hope posting my reply in this fashion works. I am still a newbie at this. So my apologies in advance...

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Kitna acha chal rha tha then the ending ufff

Maan manipulated geet to get her work in kc but why..

Love their dinner session.. what the hell, what does he meant by that he will steal her.. and tjose chori chupe staring session.. chakkar kia hai 😲

Geet came back as a bang.. oops she taunted him about seven years ago wala scene.. 😲

Waiting for next update.. We're even

Originally posted by: sgmiss2003

Geet is so lucky to have Vyan. He is a friend in true sense. Helped her a lot with interviews. Why was Maan mad in lunch room? Was he upset that Geet and Vyan are together? But he knows about Vyan. Then? Maan and Geet have good time with Anaya and Anush. Geet tried her best to prepare the room. Couldn't get Maan's reaction. Honestly this Maan is a very complex character. Everything was going so smoothly and then he comes up with his double meaning comments. So was he really doing all this to take revenge from Geet? Didn't he forget everything and started afresh? Gosh! I am so tensed. It started off so well and so much tension in the end. Are they back to square one? I feel bad that Geet was manipulated by Maan. She was so hurt in the end. But then thinking about Maan, maybe he is not wrong either. I was waiting for happy days but? I don't make sense because I am so confused asto who is right and who's wrong. Better wait for the next part. Please don't make us wait long. Waiting for next update.

Originally posted by: Rashmi234

superb update
maan's character is very confusing.. did he wanted to get geet or did he wanted to take revenge on geet
geet's retort was awsum
geet was very angry aftr maan's revealation of manipulating her ..

waiting fr nxt

Originally posted by: custodian75

So Maan was manipulating Geet all along to get her to work for him. He did give her hints but until the final comment she did not get it. And then she gave him back.

But I did not like her referring to the incident as it was she who had hurt him then.

Originally posted by: dalur

Unres..

This story is my most favourite one and I am very sorry for not commenting on previous parts...I feel so lucky and glad to come across such a beautiful story which has become so close to my heart...the simplicity of it and yet the depth of each characters and the main leads is amazing...this story has such a realistic touch and is so believable..especially Geet's character is my favourite... Its been such a long and wonderful journey with these characters that I don't want it to end..the college life, true friendships, first love, heart break, ups and downs in life, career advancement, personal growth, change in personalities, now a path to an almost reunion and every other thing in this story is so beautifully portrayed and thank you for investing so much time effort and emotions in this story and for making us feel and experience it all...I am so thoroughly entertained!!!

Please give me some time, As and when I get free time I will post my comment for previous parts...

Coming to the latest two parts...loving the tashan between Maaneet...loving the new Ms.Strong and confident Geet and Mr.Arrogant and hardhearted Maan...

They way you described the design of Geet's wing, every little detail of K designs and Geet's office is exceptionally beautiful...It made my imagination so easy and clear...Maan has become so naughty and little tough that he is not giving things easily to Geet..loving their tit for tat figths and the sarcasm...he is having quite a lot of fun irritating and frustrating Geet...taking sweet revenge...but the love will always remain though hidden...

The chemistry and sparks between both is awesome... Glad Geet has passed Maan's test for her ability for the position offered...

I also love the way you show friendship... Vyan and Geet's friendship...Ayush Maan anaya and Geet's friendship...its so beautiful...

What have situations made our once sweet Maan to an emotion less and ruthless person that he has manipulated Geet in taking the job and now he also believes that such a thing as heart /love should also be stolen instead of being won...its so unbelievable that he can manipulate and get things done his way...So proud of Geet for giving it back to him and proving that he can't always make people do things the way he wants... 1 all it is!!! Enjoying this Khaddi takkar between Maaneet... It will be interesting to see how Geet is going to change Maan back to the soft person he was and how the love will be rekindled...

Originally posted by: ARJUNKIAPS

Amazing update.I read IOYSM and wired hearts in one go!!!I must say there is something super special in this story .I am totally hooked to its storyline!!!Maan is such an enigma here!!I had a good time reading wired hearts.thank u so much for the update