MG OS : REVENGE IS SWEET ||teaser pg 27| May 17,2020 - Page 5

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im loving this maneet
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fantastic teaser! update soon😊
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i want to read this story can i have access pls
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Awesome ud
maan just finishing his studies and joining his MD post soon
geet cane to him to take revenge from dev fr cheating on hr
maan already knows dev well and he also want some score
with him he instantly agree and arjun saw him with handa
he knows maan likes his private life so he knows masn need push and he will confess
dev get jealous sering hr with khurana
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sweet innocent geet don't know how to take revenge from hr cheater bf
nice teaser
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ok np will b waiting! hope u r well! 😊
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yup m good just typing part 1 again will post in a moment
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

yup m good just typing part 1 again will post in a moment

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~REVENGE IS SWEET~

PART 1


Her face was red from crying , tears spilled from her beautiful honey brown eyes , her hair untamed and curly were now looking almost tamed , oh how much he had loved those wild curls , no matter how much he had made fun of her but still he loved her hair. She was beautiful he noticed , till now she was his archenemies , his one of the most hated enemies but seeing her now bawling out , her tears laden eyes were looking so beautiful.

Stop being a pessimistic maan , he said to himself and went to sit beside the not so gorgeous yet extremely beautiful girl , she sniffled again and he asked in the usual tone ..

Something wrong handa ? His voice was laced with concern that she could feel but she didn't know how and why he could ask her if she was fine, all they do was to taunt each other. She was the competition he never had, it was her who made him to push to his limits, and all the last five years they were insufferable. They were intelligent beyond limits, if she was a bit bossy then he was as much as arrogant.in short they were the match that crosses all the odds, they were like the two halves that could complete a whole just like no one could but they were so much ignorant about each other, that they even forget to know that there could be the deep ocean of the feelings that was not just the mere hatred instead something strong and sensible.

Leave Khurana , I am not in a mood of listening your rude comments about my messed face or hair. She scoffed, her eyes were red and he had an unknown urge to gather her crying form in his arms. Well Maan Khurana was not known of thinking twice so he very willingly draped his warm hands over her shoulder. He could smell her of strawberries and cinnamon mixed. He wanted to calm her but all he could think were the words. He never thought that he would be able to calm a crying girl. Crying women were his weakness, having a younger sister at home made him very efficient with all the crying.

Shh.. Calm down handa , I don't think that anything can be so important that you are here sobbing uncontrollably. His hands reached for the crisped white handkerchief makes with MK and wiped the tears off her face.

She was shocked, agitated, broken and all he could say were some soothing words and that too when he could have mocked her all along. This was an opportunity for him to make her life miserable but he didn't thought of the same. Some more tears spilled on her beautiful face and he this time asked in a husky calming voice that she had never heard from his mouth.

What happened, did the dunderhead said anything? Well it could be only him knowing that you carry the small amount of sensibility in you and the great king of fools lacks it a big time.

His words were met with a confusion, a bit of anger for herself that how could he understand dev very well and not her but she questioned instead of answering him making him smirk the usual arrogant prat that she considered him.

Dunderhead ? Asked a confused geet.

Maan could feel the innocence that he hardly could see in her but right now she was just like a nave girl who was unaware of the conspiracies of the world. Maan chuckled inwardly answering her, if there would have been some other occasion then he would have mocked her leisurely and made her fun but now he found that she was the most harmless and virtuous he could ever see and experience so answered her making her a slight guilty for her ignorance and how right he did seemed at the particular moment.

Your boyfriend handa , don't tell me you don't know that he is hood for nothing I still can't understand what did you saw in him. He looks like a brainless creature and look at you, you are the star student of our batch, still this low choice in the choice of a boyfriend.

She was astonished at her archenemies and in a swift moment she throw herself over him crying out loud he could feel her soft body touching him. For geet , he had opened up the pain that she was feeling for days and months now and for maan he was shocked and surprised and remembered how the guys saw her well except him. Well he could see how wrong he was about her.

No wonder guys were so desperate to get her attention, she was actually beautiful, he concluded only to be get distracted with the information he already knew like from ages.

He cheated on me came a desperate voice snapping him out of his reverie and he acted and went with the flow just to calm her.

With whom? What did he do handa.? Asked maan making sure that he was noticing each and every expression of her face, those tear laden eyes were brown in color he suddenly concluded.

I ... I caught him with pari. They were all over each other.. Kissing, she said in between her sobbing. Maan didn't like the tears in her eyes at that moment and wanted to wipe them but instead he offered his handkerchief again making her wipe her tears. He suddenly felt anger coursing through his veins and replied in a voice that geet felt was the best for the duo ( pari and dev).

Well he deserved someone like her only. Half and half makes full handa. Both of them deserved each other, she is the one who matches him even in cheating , last time I checked pari cheated on abhay poor guy really had feelings for the girl but see now he is happy with Nisha. So stop crying now, she nodded and looked at him with her honey brown eyes.

Thank you she whispered as he left after comforting her leaving her alone with his handkerchief and a light heart.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks 4 terrific update! Maaneet r enemies! bt wen Maan sees her tears, he is worried! Maan admires Geet! Geet upset as her bf cheating n her! Maan advises Geet! update soon

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