MG OS : REVENGE IS SWEET ||teaser pg 27| May 17,2020

suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 9 years ago

INDEX

PART 1 PAGE 8 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/141243803

PART 2 PAGE 9

PART 3 PAGE 10 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/141295906

PART 4 PAGE 13

PART 5 PAGE 22

PART 6

PART 7

PART 8

PART 9

PART 10

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

I am first 😊wow awesome surprise! Happy New Year dear! Hope all is well! congrats on the OS! superb update! beautifully written! Maan sees Geet crying! he admires her beauty! So Maan n Geet seem 2 nt like each other! they r rivals! Maan consoles Geet! he lends his shoulder 2 cry on n his hanky! she cries and reveals that her bf cheated on her with Pari! Maan looks at hw beautiful she is! Maan comforts her! he says she deserves better! she thanks him! waiting 4 next part! 👏⭐️😊

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

Congrats on new OS so cute maan still think feet is beautiful even in her messy state both archenemies but maan is weak when he sees a woman cry he console geet making her understand she can do better and can find much better guy than her so called bf who cheated on her geet astonished at his words though thankful for caring for her

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Sindhu

@sree10

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Loved it. Waiting for next. Missing you here. Please can't you start new stories here? Selfish me want to read your works.

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

Beautiful start
Do continue soon

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

lovely os
liked the way both were addressing each other...
thnx
happy new year

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Madhu

@Madhu_31

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Posted: 9 years ago

Woww!!! Suhi di is back!!!
How are you di?

Superb start!!
Maaneet are always at logger heads
Now Maan can't see her crying!!! Awww!!
He is consoling her
Loved the update!!!

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

Its lovely..beautifully written..hmm so they enemy and not in goody goody talking..still liked the way he went to her not just that comfort her..is he behind of her bf and pari faisco?