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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN



One thing I request u guys ..What ever I write , don add me in contest .. I just saw now on first page its a contest..I have limited no of readers. Which is solely mine decision..I am happy with that.. Here results ll be based on counting.. don't want to say more..

I haven't given right to people to judge me on votes. So even readers plz don add my name in any form filling or any contest

yaha koi vote nhi honga image contest hai bs

for fun

hum yaha likhet hai
aur masti krte hai

koi voting nhi hai iske liye
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Kitni stories likh sakti hu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: laughingpearls

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GUTTER ONE

"Dammit how can you think something about me like that, Geet. You very well know that I cannot do THAT without you." Maan said pulling her closer.

"Lie. A big lie. I saw it with my own eyes Mr Maan Singh Khurana. I have never expected this from you." Geet tried to free herself from him.

"Geet its not what you are thinking, I swear on you I didnt DO IT WITH HER. I agree that i was tempted for few minutes as she tried to divert my attention but Geet I stopped myself within a feet away." Maan tried controlling himself as he saw That woman doing IT AGAIN.

Geet saw him looking behind her so she turned to see and fumed in anger.
"Mrs robinson I request you to close the door before YOU COOK ANYTHING TODAY. Because my husband is TEMPTED towards your delicious food."

Mrs Robinson blushed and closed the door while Maan opened his eyes controlling himself.

"Okay I lose the bet. I agree woman are really great and you are right I cant stay even for few hours without food." Maan turned his back from her and said in a weak voice.

"Oh Maan dont be sorry, from now on wards dont come late to home on karwachaut Okay." She said and hugged him.

"Now do something I NEED THAT DAMMIT. Geet Im loosing my control." Maan said closing his eyes while Mrs robinson gaped thinking what maan must be asking in the open living area.

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I dont know why i wrote this but i enjoyed writing this one please dont throw tomatoes if you didnt like it.


ist good one
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: MGMahika

Kitni stories likh sakti hu

jitni aapka mann kre
ek ss de
ek OS de mujhe
wo pm kriyo
yaha post mt krna

aur ha

zara hatke mein

koi bhi likh sakta hai

usse directly yaha post krna hai
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: laughingpearls

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FUNNY ONE

"Geet please dont stress your brain as you dont have one." Maan said trying to be soft.
"Haaw maan you are so mean. You couldnt fulfil such a small wish. Maan baby has asked you for the first time." Geet said pointing towards her swollen stomach.
"Really geet? First time? Than what about all those times when you woke me up at middle of night for kulfi, what about your crazy dance, what about driving car, what about kiss under a umbrella etc etc. Every time you ask with the same dialogue 'Maan Baby asked you for the first time' Maan said in a frustating tone.
"Sorry maan this the last time pakka. Please only this one." She asked with a puppy dog eyes.
"NEVER. And dont look at me with such face." Maan said and immediately regretted seeing her getting sad.
"Mishty please dont cry. See GOLGAPPA is not a NICE NAME FOR OUR BABY. Please we can name him something else." He asked for the nth time but geet started wailing in his arms making him frustrated.
"OKAY Let our baby named GOLGAPPA. Now smile." Maan said defeatedly.
"Sachhi maan. Thank you so much. You are the best husband and best father." Geet said and hugged him.
"How must I introduce my son in my business 'Meet my son Mr GOLGAPA SINGH KHURANA'. Dammit geet, You have landed me into such a situation." Maan thought to himself.

I dont know why i wrote this but i enjoyed writing this one please dont throw tomatoes if you didnt like it.


geet ye demadn mujeh bhi apsna dnhi aayi

golgappa 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: vrinda22


fill the form
1)GF most active member of the year... meee😆
2)GF most active writer of the year...not me...😆
3)gf most active reader of the year who comment regularly...me😆
4)any writer you missing and he/she come back to continue the story share the name with us or in another words any two inactive writer name And which story u miss from this writer writing...this too me😆

5)Story of the year..not mine..
6) best concept of story which you like most share with us..i didnt post any new story,,😆
7) which story you make us cry so much...this life is urs..by me...
8) comedy story..i havent tried it😆
9)horror story..not tried my hands on it too..poor maneetians..i left them 😆
10) romantic story..meri maneet ki saari stories😆
11) any five best story u like this year so much and always waiting for update..all stories posted..😆
12)grey/suspense story -any two ...let me write😆
13) any two new writer name jiski story u read..not me n myself😆



lol
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: vrinda22

ok comedies apart...


fill the form
1)GF most active member of the year..
.me..priyanka..dona..khwaish. laughing pearls...keep dreaming mg mahika..many more..cant type all here

2)GF most active writer of the year..
priyanka..singh..mg mahika..t.peru

3)gf most active reader of the year who comment regularly
meee..really..i do...nalini..khwasih..laughing pearl..many more..cant type alll

4)any writer you missing and he/she come back to continue the story share the name with us or in another words any two inactive writer name And which story u miss from this writer writing
muski n akriti..both are back..me too😆
telly me anu
dia...
shoba
bulbul
i really miss them a lot

5)Story of the year..
cant choose 1..but let me think ..

6) best concept of story which you like most share with us
punar vivah of rashmi

7) which story you make us cry so much
surely this life is yours..😭
but i loved siskiyan..

8) comedy story
marrying a badass..sugar n spice..n 1 more..i forgot the name..let me rem..n will post it..

9)horror story
ghost of the haunted house

10) romantic story
alll😆


11) any five best story u like this year so much and always waiting for update
singhs
urs
aishus
rashmis
richas
nalinis
crazy busy
rose
etccc
all stories

12)grey/suspense story -any two
deceitful love
lust for revenge


13) any two new writer name jiski story u read
t.peru
mg.mahika
maneetffavo


thank u ji
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: MGMahika





Maan : Geet jaan tum ro kyu rahi ho ?

He just come from office and saw his Mishti crying
and weeping, her whole face turn red because of continuous crying. He wiped her tears and again asked, now she hiccup so he forward one glass of water

Maan : Kya hua Mishti...?

Geet : Maan Armaan mar gaya.

His face turn blank to heard another man's name from her mouth so he pulled her forcefully towards him in anger

Maan : Kya kaha tumne ?

She shivered to see him angry tried to push him but he blocked her with his both hands, she make a baby face


Maan : Now tell me ...Armaan koun hai

Geet : Armaan ...Armaan hai Maan

Maan : Geeettt

Geet : Ok gussa mat ho na, Woh mai na ek ghost story pad rahi thi, usmey Armaan mar gaya said innocently


Maan face blank to heard her she is crying because of some story...o ha how he forget his Mishti is crazy about fictions.

Geet : Maan aap story sunoge



Maan : Mujhe nahi sunna Geet


He just came from office and she started her fictions rantings



Geet : Please Maan sun lo na



Maan : Thik hai bolo



Geet : Yeh ek ghost ki story hai jaha pe ek bhoot hai



Maan : Geettt



He pulled her himself in frustration



Maan : Tum kya pagal ho chuki ho ? Ghost story mein bhoot he hota hai.



Geet : Haan Maan woh toh mujhe pata hai,

par aapko thodi na pata hoga. Story toh maine padi hai na...


He is in frustration giving his back towards her.



Geet : Accha chodo... gussa mat ho na. Aab suno ...

Geet : Waise ek baat puchu ? Aapko kaise stories acchi lagti hai...like Ghost , Comedy, yaa romantic


Make him more frustrated

He again turn and giving her angry glare

Maan : Tumhe nahi bolna, mai ja raha hu

Geet : Nahiii...abhi sunati hu na

She told whole story to him make him more frustrated it's sounds like comedy story not ghost actually



Maan : Ho gaya aab mai jau ?



She nodded innocently with satisfaction that he heard everything




I know I'm worst writer
🤢 😉 😆


poor maan kaha fs gya

😆

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