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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: priya_21
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From half an hour she tries to make understand, but her maan not listening anyone...

Maan please maan jaayo na

Aap ase naraaz rahonge

Toh mein kaise jaa paayungi

He pull closer , his hand encircle around her, giving her glares...

Geet : ase badi aankhen krke mt dekho na

Mujhe dar lagta hai

Maan : tumhe dar lagta hai

She nodded cutely...

Maan : acha hai daro mujhse

Aur mt jaayo

.

She tiptoed and kissed on his cheek ...please jaanu

Bs kuch din ki hi baat hai

Maan : kuch din

Tumhe kam lagte hai

He turn the face , but she held his hand please

Dekho na waha sb honge

Hum sb bhai-behn kitne dino ke baad khi gumne jaa rhe hai

Ek toh khud jaa nhi rhe humare sath

Upar se mujhe bhi nhi jaane de rhe

Maan : meri important meeting hai

Geet : toh aapne kaam se shaadi knri thi na

Mein bhi kaha fs gyi

Maan : galati ho gyi

Both left to different direction.

**************

wonderful

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#62

fill the form

1)GF most active member of the year... meee😆

2)GF most active writer of the year...not me...😆

3)gf most active reader of the year who comment regularly...me😆

4)any writer you missing and he/she come back to continue the story share the name with us or in another words any two inactive writer name And which story u miss from this writer writing...this too me😆

5)Story of the year..not mine..

6) best concept of story which you like most share with us..i didnt post any new story,,😆

7) which story you make us cry so much...this life is urs..by me...

8) comedy story..i havent tried it😆

9)horror story..not tried my hands on it too..poor maneetians..i left them 😆

10) romantic story..meri maneet ki saari stories😆

11) any five best story u like this year so much and always waiting for update..all stories posted..😆

12)grey/suspense story -any two ...let me write😆

13) any two new writer name jiski story u read..not me n myself😆

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#63

ok comedies apart...

fill the form

1)GF most active member of the year..

.me..priyanka..dona..khwaish. laughing pearls...keep dreaming mg mahika..many more..cant type all here

2)GF most active writer of the year..

priyanka..singh..mg mahika..t.peru

3)gf most active reader of the year who comment regularly

meee..really..i do...nalini..khwasih..laughing pearl..many more..cant type alll

4)any writer you missing and he/she come back to continue the story share the name with us or in another words any two inactive writer name And which story u miss from this writer writing

muski n akriti..both are back..me too😆

telly me anu

dia...

shoba

bulbul

i really miss them a lot

5)Story of the year..

cant choose 1..but let me think ..

6) best concept of story which you like most share with us

punar vivah of rashmi

7) which story you make us cry so much

surely this life is yours..😭

but i loved siskiyan..

8) comedy story

marrying a badass..sugar n spice..n 1 more..i forgot the name..let me rem..n will post it..

9)horror story

ghost of the haunted house

10) romantic story

alll😆

11) any five best story u like this year so much and always waiting for update

singhs

urs

aishus

rashmis

richas

nalinis

crazy busy

rose

etccc

all stories

12)grey/suspense story -any two

deceitful love

lust for revenge

13) any two new writer name jiski story u read

t.peru

mg.mahika

maneetffavo

Edited by vrinda22 - 8 years ago

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Mahika

@MGMahika

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Maan : Geet jaan tum ro kyu rahi ho ?

He just come from office and saw his Mishti crying
and weeping, her whole face turn red because of continuous crying. He wiped her tears and again asked, now she hiccup so he forward one glass of water

Maan : Kya hua Mishti...?

Geet : Maan Armaan mar gaya.

His face turn blank to heard another man's name from her mouth so he pulled her forcefully towards him in anger

Maan : Kya kaha tumne ?

She shivered to see him angry tried to push him but he blocked her with his both hands, she make a baby face

Maan : Now tell me ...Armaan koun hai

Geet : Armaan ...Armaan hai Maan

Maan : Geeettt

Geet : Ok gussa mat ho na, Woh mai na ek ghost story pad rahi thi, usmey Armaan mar gaya said innocently

Maan face blank to heard her she is crying because of some story...o ha how he forget his Mishti is crazy about fictions.

Geet : Maan aap story sunoge

Maan : Mujhe nahi sunna Geet

He just came from office and she started her fictions rantings

Geet : Please Maan sun lo na

Maan : Thik hai bolo

Geet : Yeh ek ghost ki story hai jaha pe ek bhoot hai

Maan : Geettt

He pulled her himself in frustration

Maan : Tum kya pagal ho chuki ho ? Ghost story mein bhoot he hota hai.

Geet : Haan Maan woh toh mujhe pata hai,

par aapko thodi na pata hoga. Story toh maine padi hai na...

He is in frustration giving his back towards her.

Geet : Accha chodo... gussa mat ho na. Aab suno ...

Geet : Waise ek baat puchu ? Aapko kaise stories acchi lagti hai...like Ghost , Comedy, yaa romantic

Make him more frustrated

He again turn and giving her angry glare

Maan : Tumhe nahi bolna, mai ja raha hu

Geet : Nahiii...abhi sunati hu na

She told whole story to him make him more frustrated it's sounds like comedy story not ghost actually

Maan : Ho gaya aab mai jau ?

She nodded innocently with satisfaction that he heard everything

I know I'm worst writer 🤢 😉 😆

Edited by MGMahika - 8 years ago

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: laughingpearls
We must send pm to you or we must type the scene here?

yaha post krni hai

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

One thing I request u guys ..What ever I write , don add me in contest .. I just saw now on first page its a contest..I have limited no of readers. Which is solely mine decision..I am happy with that.. Here results ll be based on counting.. don't want to say more..

I haven't given right to people to judge me on votes. So even readers plz don add my name in any form filling or any contest

Edited by Sonia.KN - 8 years ago