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Geet and Maan were in their room and Maan was getting ready for office..

Geet bought a locket [Taveez]for Maan ..she believed it will be lucky for him

But Maan didn't believe in all this ..so he was denying ..

"Maan pls pahan lo na ..wear it pls.."

"No I won't Geet ..you know na I don't believe in all this ..than why forcing?"

"Maan pls wore it na..for me pls ..o/w I would say you are the same dusht danav ..nothing changed after marriage.."

She make angry face and show her finger to him..what to do than Maan have to wear it ..how he could not..after all he don't wanted to hurt Geet in anyway..



He wore it but with Geet's hands..



"Agar tum pahnaogi toh pahanuga ..Maan singh khurana bhi kuch nahi kar sakta jab Geet handa kuch karne ki thaan le.."

"Geet handa nahi ab Geet Maan singh khurana .."she said with attitude..

"Jarur main hi pahna deti hoon..isme kya hai.."she bceame so happy too..

She hugged him first ..

"Maan aap bahut acche ho ..really ..bilkul bhi dusht danav nahi ho..mere pyare Maan.."

He hugged her tightly..

"Maan leave me na ..ye pahaniye na.."

"So who started haan!!..I or you..tell me my Mishty.."he winked.

"Aap bhi na ..ye lijiye .."

He make him wore that and than Maan left for office..

After sometime she remembered that she forgot to give lunch to him..she headed to office and when she entered in office she saw Maan giving the locket to a lady ..she became angry again..how could he do this? how could he ? she stepped in and took locket from the lady..

"Geet stop and listen to me .."

"Maan I am going home ..i will see you..you can't keep one gift of mine.."

"But Geet baat toh suno ..let me explain.."

But she didn't heard and left from there ..

When she reached home..after her Maan also reached with that lady ..now Geet saw that she was crying..

"What happened to her ?"

she thought

Maan asked Nakul to take care of the lady and serve her something..and he rushed to his room..

Where Geet was lying on bed ..


"Geet meri baat toh suno.."


"Ab kya suno ..kisi ko dena tha toh mujhse liya kyu? Natak kyu kiya?"


"Uff Geet ..tumhe maloom bhi hain..maine unhe who kyu diya ? he was in angry mode but calm down in next min...


Maan hold her hand and said "listen to me .."


And told her everything..the fact was that the lady was an employee's wife who was worried for her husband's health which was not improving from many days and she too believe in lockets and all..


Maan thought if this locket can help her ..as our believe is more imp than anything ..than may be it will help


Her and so he was giving her that locket and Geet misunderstood it ..


"You know Mr. Rajeev na ? bas unhi ki wife hain..tumne is Taveez ko dene wale baba ki itni tareef ki ki maine socha isse kisi ka bhala ho jaye toh kitna accha ho..bas isiliye..par agar tumhe Manzoor nahi hain toh main.."


Geet put her finger on his lips and said with teary eyes ..

"You don't believe in all this still you wanted to do for her best and for that you believed in locket too..


My mistake..i am so sorry ..i am very bad..i am feeling very bad.."


"Aww my Mishty..it wasn't all your fault ..leave it na ..you understood that's good .."

"I want to meet the lady.."


Sure come

And they met the lady and give the locket to her ..praying for her husband's health..and apolozise too..

She became so happy and left giving them blessings..

"Now see this locket is lucky for me..for us..see how many blessings we get.."


"Hmm Maan ..but I am sorry again.."

"No sorry ...no thankyou..bas tum gussa mat hua karo.."

"Kya main hi hamesha gussa hoti hoon.!! Jaise ki Maan singh khurana toh kabhi gussa hote hi nahi..


Gussa toh naak par rahta hai hamesha .."she made baby face..

"Oho!! Geet phir se..!! tum itna fight karti ho.."


"Main hi sab karti hoon na ..aap toh .."before she could complete her sentence Maan lifted her up in his arms and took her to the room..

"Mera wo matalb nahi tha ..samjhi..aur haan ..main bhi bahut kuch karta hoon ..Tum room main chalo ..than I will show you what I can do.."he again winked


Geet resisted but Maan hold her firmly..and lovingly..than Geet melted and hold her ears first and than

put her arms around his neck ..

Maan smiled and kissed her forhead.





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P.S -This is my first writing here ..its lil long.

if anything in this is not as per the rules ..let me know..

thanks

Deepti.😳


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Sorry to say I LOVE ALL. I cant judge any story or writer. maaneet made me crazy n maaneetian made craziest by their love for maaneet. all the best n happy new year to all.


Same with me ...try to read as many as i can
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Originally posted by: RM14







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Geet and Maan were in their room and Maan was getting ready for office..

Geet bought a locket [Taveez]for Maan ..she believed it will be lucky for him

But Maan didn't believe in all this ..so he was denying ..

"Maan pls pahan lo na ..wear it pls.."

"No I won't Geet ..you know na I don't believe in all this ..than why forcing?"

"Maan pls wore it na..for me pls ..o/w I would say you are the same dusht danav ..nothing changed after marriage.."

She make angry face and show her finger to him..what to do than Maan have to wear it ..how he could not..after all he don't wanted to hurt Geet in anyway..



He wore it but with Geet's hands..



"Agar tum pahnaogi toh pahanuga ..Maan singh khurana bhi kuch nahi kar sakta jab Geet handa kuch karne ki thaan le.."

"Geet handa nahi ab Geet Maan singh khurana .."she said with attitude..

"Jarur main hi pahna deti hoon..isme kya hai.."she bceame so happy too..

She hugged him first ..

"Maan aap bahut acche ho ..really ..bilkul bhi dusht danav nahi ho..mere pyare Maan.."

He hugged her tightly..

"Maan leave me na ..ye pahaniye na.."

"So who started haan!!..I or you..tell me my Mishty.."he winked.

"Aap bhi na ..ye lijiye .."

He make him wore that and than Maan left for office..

After sometime she remembered that she forgot to give lunch to him..she headed to office and when she entered in office she saw Maan giving the locket to a lady ..she became angry again..how could he do this? how could he ? she stepped in and took locket from the lady..

"Geet stop and listen to me .."

"Maan I am going home ..i will see you..you can't keep one gift of mine.."

"But Geet baat toh suno ..let me explain.."

But she didn't heard and left from there ..

When she reached home..after her Maan also reached with that lady ..now Geet saw that she was crying..

"What happened to her ?"

she thought

Maan asked Nakul to take care of the lady and serve her something..and he rushed to his room..

Where Geet was lying on bed ..


"Geet meri baat toh suno.."


"Ab kya suno ..kisi ko dena tha toh mujhse liya kyu? Natak kyu kiya?"


"Uff Geet ..tumhe maloom bhi hain..maine unhe who kyu diya ? he was in angry mode but calm down in next min...


Maan hold her hand and said "listen to me .."


And told her everything..the fact was that the lady was an employee's wife who was worried for her husband's health which was not improving from many days and she too believe in lockets and all..


Maan thought if this locket can help her ..as our believe is more imp than anything ..than may be it will help


Her and so he was giving her that locket and Geet misunderstood it ..


"You know Mr. Rajeev na ? bas unhi ki wife hain..tumne is Taveez ko dene wale baba ki itni tareef ki ki maine socha isse kisi ka bhala ho jaye toh kitna accha ho..bas isiliye..par agar tumhe Manzoor nahi hain toh main.."


Geet put her finger on his lips and said with teary eyes ..

"You don't believe in all this still you wanted to do for her best and for that you believed in locket too..


My mistake..i am so sorry ..i am very bad..i am feeling very bad.."


"Aww my Mishty..it wasn't all your fault ..leave it na ..you understood that's good .."

"I want to meet the lady.."


Sure come

And they met the lady and give the locket to her ..praying for her husband's health..and apolozise too..

She became so happy and left giving them blessings..

"Now see this locket is lucky for me..for us..see how many blessings we get.."


"Hmm Maan ..but I am sorry again.."

"No sorry ...no thankyou..bas tum gussa mat hua karo.."

"Kya main hi hamesha gussa hoti hoon.!! Jaise ki Maan singh khurana toh kabhi gussa hote hi nahi..


Gussa toh naak par rahta hai hamesha .."she made baby face..

"Oho!! Geet phir se..!! tum itna fight karti ho.."


"Main hi sab karti hoon na ..aap toh .."before she could complete her sentence Maan lifted her up in his arms and took her to the room..

"Mera wo matalb nahi tha ..samjhi..aur haan ..main bhi bahut kuch karta hoon ..Tum room main chalo ..than I will show you what I can do.."he again winked


Geet resisted but Maan hold her firmly..and lovingly..than Geet melted and hold her ears first and than

put her arms around his neck ..

Maan smiled and kissed her forhead.





--------------



P.S -This is my first writing here ..its lil long.

if anything in this is not as per the rules ..let me know..

thanks

Deepti.😳




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