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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: laughingpearls

Sanju di its amazing and ha you need not even mention your name here because I can easily identify your writing style :-) See I'm a goood sis. Coming to the scene lol I loved it. Like really my maan doing pole dance hmmm Geet must be enjoying oho maan babu will never go to strip dancer to save his AHEM AHEM infront of geeet hehehehe


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Posted: 8 years ago

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tum bhi kuch likho na
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Posted: 8 years ago
its so funny @sonia...
Geet actually called doctor for him
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21



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tum bhi kuch likho na

trust me abhi try kiya par...couldnt
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Posted: 8 years ago
Golgappa its so funny
@laughingpearls...I just couldnt stop laughing.. geet please baby ko maan me hawale chor do ...uche hi naam rakhne do
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Posted: 8 years ago
fill the form
1)GF most active member of the year
2)GF most active writer of the year
3)gf most active reader of the year who comment regularly
4)any writer you missing and he/she come back to continue the story share the name with us or in anotehr words any two inactive writer name And which story u miss from this writer writing

5)Story of the year
6) best concept of story which you like most share with us
7) which story you make us cry so much
8) comedy story
9)horror story
10) romantic story
11) any five best story u like this year so much and always waiting for update
12)grey/suspense story -any two
13) any two new writer name jiski story u read

Answers:-

1. Mg Mahika, Khwaishfan, sanju, Vrinda di, Priya_21 and not to forget Me
2. Mg Mahika, Priya_21
3. Sanju, khwaishfan, Anu5, Mg Mahika, metromasti, nandini and many more
4. Akriti di, Vrinda di
5. Punar Vivah
6. Geetanjali, Maasoom Ishq
7. Priya ki almost saari stories
8. yaar mujhe comic stories k name nahi yaad... lol... bas apne vaale hi yaad h...
9. okay apart from my horror ff I've only read 1 horror fic- Wish to die.
10. Almost all (Priya ki stories ko chodkar )
11. Milan, Rebirth,His werewolf mate, The Princess and the Pauper, Beintehaa... Mohabbat ya Junoon
12. Shadows of Past
13. Sanju, Mg Mahika
14. Hahaha... Mei to name hi bhool gayi... 😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow this seems fun
Fab thread
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21

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1. Maaneet reception scene 2. maan came to about brij the one who attacked on geet he is worried for her 3.maan selects red color wedding card which is geet's favorite and geet wants maan's favorite white color both will argue on this matter 4.geet comes to know as maan is balwant Singh he says sorry for her but geet is angry on him 5.maan cooks for geet as all ladies will be working in office and men will do household work
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21



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written by sanjana (she sent to me so am posting on behalf of her)

Maan: geet plz..MERI bath maano...AISA kuch nahi hai...

Geet: muje kuch nahi Sunna...App KAR rahe hi ya nahi...

Maan: geet plz..
Geet: yeh AAP koh pehle sochna chahiye tha maan..Yeh SAB Karne seh pehle sochna tha...Abh jaldi karo muje Sona hai maan..

Maan: geet woh...

Geet: agar AAP koh room seh bahar NAHI nikaalna AUR kal subah..Dev AUR Vicky KHI teasing comments koh face NAHI karna TOH chaloh jaldi KAHRO...

Maan towered over geet dangerously and asked:tum MSK koh apni kamre seh nikalogi...

Geet: maan aap khi yeh aankhey well gussee KHI mujh par GMSK par koi asar NAHI hoga...
Maan turned his face knowing he had no way to escape..
.Either he had to agree geet words nor he should face his siblings taunts...

Maan weighed both the options ...

The former seems easy than the later...He was still contemplating when geet bugged him

Geet: maan jaldi..Chalo shuru KAHRO...

Maan gulped seeing there is no way...He the great msk whom BUSINESS feilds thinks as king...Had to perform pole dance before his wife... Unfortunately he had to meet a client in the famous pub,due to his stats that day happened to b a pole dance...And his misty got the news that he was attending a pole dance ,he exactly knew the traitor who leaked the not so important news as hot spicy juicy thing his brother Vicky..

Masn mentally noted to avenge him...

Geet: maan come-on it's getting late now..I had to sleep... With no other way he did few moves for his wife who finally showed mercy on him...But not before warning..

Geet: maan Maine suna AAP KHI next week meeting bhi kuch infamous club mein hai...Jaha stripers BHI honge...TOH Zara Soch samaj KAR USS club mein Jaana...

Saying she went to bed..Leaving maan in thoughts in how many ways to strangle vicky...





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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN




Yup this is something, of my taste without any contest etc..I m available for these things..Now coming to this situation.. Lets go


Maan : Geet ! I fired u , hence u came to KM, stole my all formals..How dare you ?

Geet :Sir, thand paayo .I stole 4 good cause, 4 KC Hospital Trust Auction ? Actually to raise more funds . MSK's attires definitely ll raise more money

Maan : What a great idea ? How dare u ? Taking revenge on me.How I'll go to office tomorrow.

Geet : Sir , everything 4 ur benefit.

Maan :R u crazy ?

Geet : Not me, U Sir

Maan : What ? Kya, kya bolla tumne ?

Geet : Aaa cc tually u say na k "yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi ".I don want to b reason of this. Without formals you ll stay at home for couple of days. Ur mind needs a break. I can't c u turning insane.

Maan: I think not me you are mad.

Geet : Sir plz don stress ur brain.. Even KC Hospital Trust se physiatrists aa rahe hai.. Aapko thanks kehne.. Ur cloths raised great funds. You should meet them..

Maan : What do u mean ? Why to meet them ha?

Geet : Simple they need you, n u need them..

Maan : Geet I ll not spare u ...

she slipped from place...screaming 😲

Geet :Sir I have spared you. Coz not you fired me but I left u..Take care Sir..

She left him confused.What she meant after all...Now tell how it was 😆
Due to word limit I wrote straight dialogues without their expressions, acts n setup etc...


I was laughing all through it
Geet stealing Maan's clothes and gave it to the hospital well done Geet 😆
now Maan confused at what she meant
awesome narration just loved it

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